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The Heavens Aflame - A Civil War Amongst the Deities

Mikalo said
Interesting, hello! I'm new here.. and I would like to ask a question. We can have both made up gods, or greek gods or Egyptian? Sorry for the dumb questions

All originals. No pre-established gods.

The Heavens Aflame - A Civil War Amongst the Deities

Eskellon should be very old himself.

The Heavens Aflame - A Civil War Amongst the Deities

I'm interested most in Metanoios and Dream. :D

The Heavens Aflame - A Civil War Amongst the Deities

The Heavens Aflame - A Civil War Amongst the Deities

HeySeuss said
- (Asuras)- (Dead Cruiser)- (MelonHead)- (Ruby)- (Crazy Guy)- (Squrmy) - (The Fair Lady)- (Hellis)- (ActraiserTheReturned) - Youth and old age? It seems like it'd be more consistent to drop the youth. It's a non-sequitur against the whole wisdom, age and magic and guarding the week thing. Your character is more like a family patriarch, a lion in winter, than anything.- A deity devoted to bacchanalia/drunkeness and revelry.- A deity that runs the underworld.- Deities that see the dead to the underworld and other parts; probably in conflict with the underworld deity.

Oh fine, I'll drop youth.

The Heavens Aflame - A Civil War Amongst the Deities

Ruby said
I'm just a player, but I'll give my impressions:You need a Psychology section. (Your current Psych section, while a fun read, is more another History section. Or a run-on of the Followers section. Doesn't say much about his own Psychology, is my point.)Dream went from childhood to young adulthood (where they are now). Maybe the start of the current world? Having his magic cloud appear at the start of the world seems to suggest he pre-dates Mysia and Aroseus.Hope the feedback helps!

HeySeuss said
Actually, Ruby's the Co-GM here. Just announcing that. If I go under for some reason, like work, she's the boss. ;)

Alright Ruby, Seuss. :D
I expanded the Psychology section. Is that better?

The Heavens Aflame - A Civil War Amongst the Deities

Ruby said
I'm just a player, but I'll give my impressions:You need a Psychology section. (Your current Psych section, while a fun read, is more another History section. Or a run-on of the Followers section. Doesn't say much about his own Psychology, is my point.)Dream went from childhood to young adulthood (where they are now). Maybe the start of the current world? Having his magic cloud appear at the start of the world seems to suggest he pre-dates Mysia and Aroseus.Hope the feedback helps!

Oh no, the magic cloud is his father/mother. When Mysia and Aroesus killed it, is when he was born. So he's younger than the old gods. But I get what you're saying.

The Heavens Aflame - A Civil War Amongst the Deities

What do people think of my entry?

F/M Ultra Violent *Male Sub

Still looking.

An Onion by Any Other Name Is Just As Sweet!

genghismike said
You're really smelly and make people cry?

Yes!
But more importantly, the website that made the article is a parody website like the Onion.