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Oh shit you guys, don't be in a hurry to post or anything. Things are just getting too out of control!!!!!

Seriously where is everyone?


I was actually waiting for somebody else to post before I did again as I was the last one to post before you did. Maybe they just forgot to check.

@knighthawk @Pirouette @Dirty Dan @Mr_pink @Kafka Komedy @makarov @Mugin @Larfleeze

Yo' nerds! Drew posted a while ago!! lol xD
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang I thought my idea was OP.
@Lofi Could I create a Majin who is--like most of his race--goofy and fun-loving however has the ability to transform into a pure majin? I plan that he wouldn't use that form unless it was a serious last resort. Like for example, the entire party have fallen incapacitated at the hands of the two mysterious time travelers and they are about to finish off the party once and for all. It would be at this moment when he weakly stands and transforms into his pure majin form. Once he is in this form, he is granted unbelievable power, however... he can never revert back to his original state and his original personality is gone permanently. Thus he would become a monster and a threat much like Kid Buu was. (not as powerful of course, but strong enough to be considered a problem) And he'd run off wildly feasting for destruction. (Which at this point he'd have to be killed off by the party.)

The Majin is extremely against ever having to use this form--but if it means saving his friend's lives, he will do what he must.

If he's too overpowered or is just too plot heavy, then I can just make a simpler character. :)
Well now Whirlpool has to kick Aqualad's ass to prove she's the best water manipulator.


Game on. xD


| NAME: |
Kaldur'ahm


| ALIAS: |
Aqualad


| ABILITIES/SKILLS/EQUIPMENT: |
Hydrokinesis: He can form and control the flow of water much in the same way that Mera can. Normally he forms highly pressurized water into handles in the form of swords or maces.

Electrokinesis: He has the power to control electric waves; much in the same way an electric eel can. This ability seems to manifest along side the electrical appearances of his mysterious tattoos. This ability has appeared in electrical touch, bursts of electricity and electrical skin.

Amphibious Transformation: When any source of water touches Jackson's skin his body transforms and he gains gills and webbed features. This allows him to breathe underwater and swim at speeds that can match Aquaman's.

Hard-water constructs: Aqualad has the unique ability to solidify water into a myriad of different weapons for physical attacks. So far he has created swords, maces, sledgehammers, a small shield, and a large eel. This ability, like his hydrokinesis and electricity generation, is powered by his eel tattoos.

Atlantean attributes: Atlanteans, although Human, have through scientific and sorcerous means developed several abilities which allow them to live comfortably under the sea.

Underwater breathing: All Atlanteans are capable of surviving the aquatic atmosphere under the sea. Some accomplish this without the presence of visible gills.

Temperature resilience: Resistant to low temperatures and the effects of freezing, although notably hindered by high temperatures.

Durability: Dense flesh, although not invulnerable.

Strength: Aqualad is able to lift up to half a ton. (1000lbs or 450kgs)

Toxin resistance: Aqualad has a partial immunity to poisons of sea creatures, such as jellyfish toxin.

Expert hand-to-hand combatant: Aqualad is extremely skilled in combat able to go toe-to-toe with his mentor Aquaman.

Multilingualism: Aqualad can speak Atlantean and English. Likely as an extension of his home language, he has some fluency in Ancient Greek and Modern Greek.

Water Pack:
A black metallic backpack that holds an unspecified amount of water that Aqualad can use. It also holds his Water-Bearers.

Water-Bearers:
Twin hilts that can hold onto water which Aqualad then uses to create his hard-water weapons. They are also used as a type of water gun to shoot water from his water pack and can be used to help manipulate sources of water.


| LIMITATIONS AND WEAKNESSES: |
Dehydration: Because his natural habitat is underwater, Aqualad is physically weakened when exposed to high temperatures and dry conditions. His skin burns more easier than a human's and doesn't tend to stay out in clear sunlight for an extended period of time.

Depression/Loneliness: Kaldur'ahm suffers from depression. Kaldur's only known family member is his father, Black Manta--who he despises for every bad thing he has done. Many Atlanteans look down on Kaldur, taking out their disgust and anger for Black Manta out on Kaldur. Without a father he can look up to and a living mother to provide him with love and compassion, Kaldur faces severe depression and loneliness.

Overly Brash: As someone who is looked down on in Atlantis, Kaldur'ahm tends to go out on a limb to attempt to do what people say he cannot do. This may be a major downfall for Kaldur'ahm. As Garth's successor, he is also pressured into doing what he was able to do when he was Aqualad.

Fears Peer Rejection: Aqualad is the son of Black Manta and is often treated with disgust and hatred--despite being a hero. He has been emotionally tormented over the years by Atlanteans and himself. He fears being rejected by friends and people he has come to respect over the years.

Selfless: Kaldur'ahm always puts others before him--no matter what the cost being, even if it being his life. This may also be his downfall.

Moral Code Against Killing: In order to never become anything like his father, Kaldur'ahm has vowed never to take somebody's life no matter what. He believes that if he were to cross the line even once, he would never be able to stop himself from doing it again.


| SAMPLE POST: |
"Come at me again, Kaldur'ahm!" Aquaman barked, his voice straining with exhaustion as sweat ran down his temples. Kaldur'ahm looked up at his mentor with a stern stare as he laid down panting like a dog on his hands and knees. He used his remaining endurance and willpower to stand--his muscles and body were beyond tired, but he would not waver from any challenge presented from his mentor. "I hope your heart does not give out on you, my King." He said jokingly, "You appear more exhausted than I am." Aquaman let out a chuckle, "Oh worry not, child. As the surface-dwellers say: I'm as stubborn as a mule!"

Aquaman spun his golden trident around tauntingly, "What are you waiting for? Come at me, my boy!" Aqualad let out a smirk as he reached out behind him to grab his water-bearers, slinging them both forward and creating hard-water blade constructs. Kaldur'ahm proceeded to let out a shout--not of terror, fear, or pain; but out of confidence--as he charged towards his mentor. He swung his right blade forward, only to be caught and held captive by Aquaman's trident. He then proceeded to chuckle once more, "Come on now, Kaldur, surely you must have expected that to happen." Now this time, it was the protege chuckling, "I was counting on it, my King." Aquaman raised an eyebrow as Aqualad smirked. The King of Atlantis proceeded to look down, to see that the tip of Kaldur's left blade was just touching his chest. He hadn't even seen him move his left arm at all. Aquaman looked back up towards his apprentice, "Well played, my apprentice. Well played."

The apprentice backed away from his mentor and disabled his water-bearers and placed them back in their holster on his back. Aquaman then proceeded to flip his golden trident upside-down and bury it's tip into the dusty sand, "I finally believe you are ready, Kaldur." Kaldur raised an eyebrow, "Pardon me my King but, ready for what exactly?" Aquaman let out a smile, "To join the Titans team on the East Coast, of course. Guardian is reforming it with an entire new roster--or so I've been told. I believe you would be an excellent addition to the team. After all, you do need some more field experience before I even think about putting your name forward in the next Justice League meeting." Kaldur's eyes were wide with shock, he had always wanted to be on a team--but the Titans? The Teen Titans? This was a dream come true for Kaldur'ahm--he would fantasize about being on the Titans when he was a young boy, whether it was the East or West Coast Titans. He didn't care whether he was the leader or not, he's just always wanted to work alongside others who were like him.

Kaldur'ahm was still in shock, but his next words came out of his mouth without any hesitation. "Thank you, my King. I won't let you down."


| NOTES: |
- Kaldur'ahm is the son of supervillian Black Manta and the current protege of Aquaman.
- Kaldur'ahm is fascinated with the stories of his predecessor Garth, who now goes by the name Tempest.
- Kaldur'ahm goes by just "Kaldur" when around friends.
@Hillan Finished revising the sheet. :) If you think there should be any further revisions, don't hesitate to let me know. ^_^
@Alan Hawke:
The Power/Ability section looks rather copy-pasted from any of the Wiki's he's on, which is fine. However, he does have several more weaknesses than dehydration, what are his psychological weaknesses, physical limitations and other things that would hinder him and make it necessary for him to have a team?

Should be noted the entire sheet looks like it belongs in a Young Justice thread, and not in a Teen Titans RP that occurs after the Comics, where Garth was Aqualad some ten years ago and is now Tempest, for instance. I know that writing CS's is tedious, but I'd like a little more effort on your part put into the CS. Your sample post is great, so good work on that.

So overall revise and I'll look over it again.


I just finished the psychological weaknesses. I'm trying to think of more things that would hinder him that the team could make up for.
@Hillan

Understood. I used YJ Wikia as a reference instead of DC Wikia as there wasn't as much information about his comic book counterpart. Thanks for the feedback, I'll revise it ASAP.
Could I use Kaldur'ahm?
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