Angel Eyes

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@Aristo Cheng looks solid. Question about his force fields though. Does he project the force-fields in front of himself more like a wall, or is it more like a bubble that surrounds him?

@Stargenie44 Sweet! You'll be next for review.

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@Angel Eyes The idea of the flaw is that it's a passive, destructive effect that he has no control over. He can easily destroy electronics with his powers if he wants to, the point is that he constantly does it unintentionally. Sure his high-level powers create a storm, but that is something he could more or less already do. The point is that he unintentionally creates a storm with himself at the center. He would have to devote attention to keeping the uncontrolled lightning away from himself and his allies, lest any of them be electrocuted. It could be seen as an upside from a purely destructive viewpoint, but if he's trying to do anything other than destroy everyone and everything around him, he either has to limit the use of his powers or risk shorting out or electrocuting everything around him.

@Dead Cruiser

Awwww okay, so thats how it works then. Mkay. Well if u can add that to his imperfection then he's good to go. :) Once u've added it you can go ahead and move him into the character section.

@Stargenie44 Looking forward to it Star. :)

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@Dead Cruiser I like Jin. Very interesting character...but, there doesn't seem to be any drawback to his "imperfection".

(The generation and manipulation of plasma by Jin's powers leaves an overabundance of ionized free electrons in an area, increasing as his powers are used in the general area. This can have a variety of effects, depending on the severity of the electron overload. On a small scale, electronics can malfunction and short out, suffering effects similar to that of an electromagnetic pulse. At a large scale, Jin can generate an electrostatic buildup comparable to a thunderstorm, essentially inducing a localized lightning storm in his immediate surroundings.)

This just reads as other ways for him to use his power. Like, he can ALSO use his plasma ability to create lightning storms and cause electronics to malfunction, etc, etc. I don't see how this is a flaw for him. Seems more like a benefit. LOL How about when his powers create these electromagnetic side-effects his body feels these impulses as uncomfortable electric pulses, like he's feeling shocked. So the stronger the effects, the bigger the shock he feels.

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@PrettyWings YEPPERS! I still am. Feel free to go ahead and get started on a character.

@Dead Cruiser@Aristo

Gonna get started on reviewing both of your characters.

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I want in. Posting this to come back later.

@Mistress Dizzy

Nice! We'll be glad to have u

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bump. Anyone else interested?

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@Amaralyn

Okay okay looks good. The imperfection isn't exactly there in the sense that I get, but since Dead Cruiser brought it up, ill be a bit more lenient on that section from now on. So she checks out! :)

You can go ahead and move her into the character tab.

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@Talipaendrag

That actually sounds like a really viable imperfection for telekinesis. I like it! ^_^

@Amaralyn

She is too cute. Haha/ I will review her in a bit.

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Well, for the "difficulty" part, I meant that players were having difficulty designing it. It's hard to make a power with an intentional glaring flaw.

In any case, my planned power is Ionokinesis, or Plasma Manipulation.

@Dead Cruiser

Oh I here wat ur saying.I don't think anyone has expressed any difficulty making a flaw so far. But I can see why u could feel that way depending on the power. Certain powers require a little more thought. But that's how powers work in the actual anime, I didn't just make it up. they are inherently imperfect.

But if majority of the people are unsatisfied with the idea of an imperfect power, I might be willing to get rid of that aspect.

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Alright, so, flaws seem to be a point of difficulty from what I can tell.

Let me run something by you: would a high propensity for collateral damage be considered a flaw? More specifically, the power being easily able to set off a destructive chain reaction if not used within specific parameters?

@Dead Cruiser

Not necessarily a point of difficulty, but more so an internal fluke, an imperfection that makes the power. Like in the show, for example. One of the characters has the ability to teleport to any point in his line of sight, but its portrayed as his body literally moving super fast in one direction. And the flaw/imperfection is that when he teleports he cannot fully control where he stops so hes always crashing into things(per hurting himself and causing collateral damage).

But, the power has to be inherently flawed, not sometimes due to parameters or circumstances. For setting off a destructive chain reaction to be the flaw, that would ALWAYS have to be the case when he uses the power, not just sometimes if not used within a specific parameter. But whats the power though? Hard to know the flaw if i dont know the power.