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    1. Artymis 9 yrs ago

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dropped my bleach rp. go check it out
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dropped a bleach rp interest check for anyone interested
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Merry christmas
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I been watching too much bleach. Makes me want a bleach rp lmao
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This is a very good character sheet and as a whole it is accepted. However, because of the nature of the zanpakuto you are trying to create, it does have a chance to become very overpowered so I'm going to have to ask you to tread carefully with your progression. However, with that in mind, you're accepted so feel free to post it in the character section.
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Arthur had awoken that morning expecting the usual. He was partially enjoying this new reality he was in, however gruesome and disgusting it was. And whilst the day for the most part had gone normally, a problem had occurred within the group of survivors he was around. He wasn't particularly fond of them nor did he like how stupid they were when it came to making rational decisions, but they were decent protection from the walker and he could always throw one toward the group in case he needed a getaway

As it turned out, another stupid decision was being made right before his eyes in the group, and it was seriously starting to annoy him. The walkers were busting through the door of the hideout and it would only be a matter of time. Not only that, they had brought someone who was bitten straight into their den. Were they retarded? How could they make such an obviously ridiculous decision to risk the lives of the group, and much more importantly, Arthur himself? It was blasphemous in his eyes.

At this point, survivors were doing all sorts of nonsense. One with curly blonde hair was trying to take him with us, whilst an older asian woman was trying to formulate a plan. It sounded decent, in honesty and he was surprised she could keep her head whilst someone was trying to save a dead man. Giving a nod of respect in her direction, he looked back towards the scene. Some people with some common sense finally stated their protest to this action and he supposed he would to, because no-one was going to disagree with the smartest in the room.

"Listen. Drop that fucking corpse and leave. He was stupid enough to get bitten, so he will suffer the consequences of his actions. Unless you have become a doctor overnight and discovered a cure for this shit, we will go." he spoke in a commanding tone.

It was at this point someone who was even taller than him came from absolutely nowhere singing a creepy tune. It wasn't exactly the time, but it made a nice change to the screaming of the survivors as he watched what he was doing in interest. He commanded some people to move a desk toward the door to hold it, which was a smart move. But what he did next surprised him. He took the guys own knife and stabbed him in the head. He laughed out of instinct because he didn't exactly have another response to the shock he just witnessed. Whilst it might have been hypocritical, he didn't expect an action like that from such a soft group. It surprised him. Feeling unsafe remaining in the location however, he figured he'd stop watching the show and go toward the escape route. He didn't want to be food for the walkers, or that giant for that matter.
Hey! I'm not that far into bleach, like 200 something episodes and was wondering if it's okay if I still join. I love the show and would love to be a part of this rp.


Hey man! You're welcome to join but you should be wary that there are going to be some spoilers in reference(e.g. this is based off the arc that's going to be coming up for you soon, so as long as you don't mind spoilers you're fine to join. Just refer to the wiki or ask questions if you need help with something.
H'okies, settled on these ideas



Both are fine with me. Also, your characters accepted, feel free to post it in the character section.
@Artymis
The kido changes are fine. I didnt want to use the word master yet anyways. However the age stays, she fought a long, hard bttle outta the dumpster!

As for which kido she can access, given the lack of knowledge of all kido available, can we create our own in those without an actual kido?


Feel free to. Just give a detailed explanation in creation/what it does/chant/number etc. Do submit it for review before so I know it's not broken from a balance perspective.

Age is fine if that's what you want, was just making sure that was your intention.
Go ahead and post it on the character section.
@ArtymisI'm not happy with the designs so I went with aesthetics but I can't find any other sword that would match the pictures in my head. I also edited my skills section hopefully that's what you wanted because if not I'm at a loss for what exactly you want.


Changes look good! Stick it in a spoiler and you're accepted.
@ArtymisI changed the pictures, and the age but what exactly are you looking for in terms of strengths, and weaknesses? I also couldn't find proper katana designs so I made do with what I could by using other swords from different animes.


Swords are fine if that's what you had in mind for their design. The strengths and weaknesses I'm looking for enhanced details. If you'd like an example to what I'm looking for exactly, something akin to those in Loki's sheet would be optimal. That's kind of what I had in mind for that section if that's fine for you.
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Your character is good, but as you said you have limited knowledge of bleach so there is a few things that you're going to need to clean up.

- As a whole, Shinigami can live for a long time. However, 740 is bordering on one of the oldest characters in the entire soul society never mind the group, so you should probably shorten the age to the 50-300 range if possible.
- The picture you are using for your Zanpakuto is from the show itself, so I'd like if you change that if possible.
- I'd like to see a few more details in the abilities/weaknesses section. Whilst you've stated what is actually the case for your character, I'd like some more intricacies and expansion in this section.

You did a good job though, just fix those details up and you'll be alright to jump in.




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There's little explicitly wrong with this character and I'm fond of some of the design points although I'd like to see more detail as a whole(it's entirely optional if you want to add it). However, there's a few things that are going to need fixing from a balancing of power perspective

- Change your Zanpakuto's ability to "absorb reishi that is below or equal to the spiritual pressure of the user." The design is slightly overpowered even with this quirk, but if you were able to simply destroy captain's kido based zanpakuto at this stage in the rp then it'd push it a little far.
- In abilities, add more detail to how your character can do. Just give some intricacies and more flavour to it so that we can get a better feel of what your character is capable/incapable of.

Once you fix these up you'll be good to go.




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I love this character. It's exceptionally well made and I'm pleased with the level of thought and detail that's been put in. However, because I'm myself, I'm just going to nitpick something just because it's bothering me.

- I'd like you to change Master of Shunpo to something else. Shunpo is an exceptionally difficult thing to sort of learn within the Bleach universe and to say that you are a master implies that you've perfected something, and given that the roleplay is centred around young/new blood, it leaves you little room for development in this aspect. A word like adept would be better suited in this case I feel.
- You may wanna lower the age a little bit. 344 is slightly old for a rookie Shinigami. Maybe 50 years or so, but this is up to you.

Change that for me and you are accepted(sorry for being annoying!)




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Oddly enough, this is the same scenario as Loki's character. The design and everything is great and I enjoy the overall theme. However, there are a few things I'm going to nitpick just because they annoy me.
- I don't like the term master this early. Use adept, a master would imply that the ability is perfect and they have nothing to improve on. Also, tone down the usage of kido. Perhaps 50 without incantation and 60 with incantation and specify what kido she can use just so that we know what she could pull out, given even the kido masters are not capable users of every single kido.
- The age is a bit high for a young shinigami. Unless your character spent like 350 years in the Rukon district, tone it down to the 50-300 range.

I do love your character however and I feel it's a fairly balanced concept. Fix those two things and you're all good with me.




Reviews are done, I'm sorry for the nitpicking everyone but I'm kind of obsessive over the smaller details so I just had to point them out so please be patient with me on this!

If you fix what I asked you to, just pm me to let you know here or on discord and I'll verify it so you can post it in the character sheet thread.

Also would like to let you know that Syn is going to co-gm. He's a cool guy so just ask him about anything if I'm not online.

I'll review these sheets once I'm home from college today.
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