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I'll get to reviewing character sheets soon, but until then-- I'll answer your guys' questions...

im gonna try for a Animal/Nature cs, quick question are the animals in this RP the same as normal earth animals or will there be a chance to control some mythical creatures as well, also how will I know what animals are available to communicate to and when in which area?


What Sodium said is true-- "control" would be the wrong word to use in this case. You can simply communicate with them. Later you will be able to control plants, but still not animals. As for the mythical creatures-- whether or not your can communicate with them will be entirely dependent on the creature itself. In most instances this will depend on how animal like the monster is (like a basilisk vs a foreign speaking Naga). Regardless, I would request that you ask me first before assuming you can communicate with a certain monster. When I write in monsters I'll try to include whether or not they can be conversed with.

@Crimson Raven The simple answer to that question is no. Sorcerers and sorceresses are not a common sight in Coake-- which is part of why the evil Sorcerer and Sorceress that currently rule Coake are in the position of power that they are. Among elves, magic is a different story, however. They do have the ability to use *some* magic and there are other mythological races that can as well, but humans cannot with extremely rare exceptions which are to be used for plot purposes only.
@NightFlight Everything looks good so far! The only thing I would recommend adding is her discovery of her abilities. With her just barely being 17, if you are hoping to expand on her initial discovery more in your first post, that's perfectly fine. As of now, however. the roleplay will be starting shortly after if not the night of her 17th birthday. So if you could include something about that, you should be fine.
@Rinoa Rose Everything looks good, but there are a few things I would recommend adjusting. Firstly, I'm glad you included all of the requirements in your character description, but could you put it into a more paragraph-like format? Just for consistancy's sake. Secondly, could you expand a bit more about how he trained himself to use his newfound ability? Mainly, did he keep it a secret or tell only his family? I ask mainly because it seems like he is very close to his family, so it would be a big deal whether or not he decided to hide it from them.
@Sodium Looks good. An interesting take on pets, particularly. To answer your questions, for the sake of the story animals are not able to understand human speech. They may understand a human's intention by the tone of their voice or learn to obey a particular human word such as "sit", "stay", or "come", but they cannot fully comprehend what people are saying-- with the only exception, of course, being the animal elementos, who is able to communicate with all animals as well as be understood by them.

@Rinoa Rose @NightFlight I will get to reviewing your CS's on my next break. Feel free to post them in the OOC in the meantime if you want, though.
Looks good so far guys. @Crimson Raven I'm going to tell you right now that I need at least a one paragraph description of his appearance. If you wouldn't mind making that adjustment in your final draft, that'd be great.
@Sodium I get where you're coming from and I have no problem with saving certain details for the story ahead, but I have no way of knowing that you've put thought into it unless it's in the character sheet or I receive a PM about it (or unless you say in the description that you will be adding more information about it later). If you would like to flesh it out in your final submission, that's also fine. I was just going off of what had been posted here thus far.
I see. A slight smile crept across Abel's face as Steven asked the group for a second time if anyone wanted to head into town. He was really trying to convince them to leave and Abel felt he had finally figured out why. He inwardly shook his head and chuckled to himself. Why hadn't he figured this out sooner?

"Steven, was it?" Abel said seriously as he stood up and dusted a bit of dirt from his knee with his gloved hand. In a low voice that was just barely audible to Lyra and the others, he asked "Are you perhaps scared to head into town alone? I wouldn't mind accompanying you if that's the case-- and don't worry. It's perfectly natural for a kid your age to be scared... I think."

Without giving Steven a chance to answer, he quickly turned to Lyra, "I'll see if I can't find this shoemaker who told the kid about the flower. Come on, Steven-- let's go." He started walking in the direction of the village, gesturing casually for Steven to follow him.

He considered bidding Illumina and Elisha goodbye, but didn't want to interrupt their conversation. They seemed to be talking about Saatur, so he figured they planned to help Lyra. Either way, he shouldn't need their help to escort Steven into town. What's the worst they could encounter there anyway? The village drunk?



Age: 79

Race: Elf

Gender: Female

Appearance: Similar to the picture, Rowena has long, light blonde (almost white) hair that ends just between her shoulder blades. It is slightly curly and typically pulled back in a loose, low ponytail. She has soft, almond shaped and honey colored eyes and a tattoo across each eye-- not an uncommon sight in elven culture. Also characteristic to elves, she has fair skin and sharp features that most would consider gracefully beautiful. She stands at a height of 5'11".

She wears a heavy gray-blue cloak with slits cut to accommodate her long, pointed ears. She wears light armor adorned with feathers, a gray-blue skirt, and thigh-high greaves along with a pair of sturdy, but form fitting boots. Her body is lithe and athletic-- resembling that of a healthy human woman in her early twenties.

Theme Song:

Nature: All work and no play; Rowena is a good-humored, gregarious, and spirited goofball trapped within the body of an apprentice with too many responsibilities to be anything but a nervous wreck. With the weight of her life's mission on her shoulders, she finds very little time to satisfy her unquenchable thirst for fun. Maturity came hard and fast when the war came crashing down around her at the 'tender' age of 19. She works hard to keep her inner wants and desires under wraps, however. There are more pressing matters at hand, and-- in her selfless mind-- if her sacrifices can truly save humanity, it will have all been worth it.

Backstory: Rowena is technically a half elf-- although this description holds little to no meaning. Elven blood, at least according to the elves, is the strongest of all races. It cannot be diluted. Rowena was born to her elven mother, Patience, and human father, Henry Mulligan. Henry tragically passed away during a pre-war attack on Vevian by a group of orcs in spite of her mother's wishes for him to stay with her. This was during the time that the elves were desperately trying to warn King Antony of the impending threat. As he had for years, however, he tried to ease their worries with assurances that the army would be made 'a bit' stronger and the walls be built 'a bit' higher.

She grew up with her mother in the northern forests, deciding at a young age that she wished to join the elven guard in honor of her human father, who had been a soldier for King Antony. Rowena valued the ability to protect those who were closest to her and trained hard. Shortly after the war began and the elves went into hiding, however, her mother perished in a horrible accident that Rowena was unable to prevent.

A kind sage from her tribe took her in and made her his apprentice. She has been by his side ever since. For years she has studied various topics from weapons training and herbology to magic and legend. With the Time of Awakening at hand, she has traveled to Jeorva with her master. Disguised as humans, they are to meet with the chosen seven and begin their quest to end the reign of their evil rulers once and for all....

Goal(s): Rowena wishes to do everything within her power to see the seven elementos succeed. These are the desires she clings to. In reality, however, Rowena possesses a burning desire to travel the world and learn more about human customs. They have always intrigued her, but such a frivolous dream mustn't be pursued-- her duty comes first and, as far as she's considered, is her one and only dream for now.

Inventory:

--A longsword
-- A dagger
-- A brown leather satchel
-----water canteen
-----a journal
-----pen and ink
-----wooden brush
-----a change of clothes
-----a bottle of mysterious black powder

"Silent Shadows" by Andreas Rocha


During a time of dragons and monsters, a great evil has consumed the land. An evil sorcerer and sorceress have dominated the country with their massive army of orcs, goblins, and other such bloodthirsty races. Prophecies made by the woodland elves had foretold of such impending chaos centuries before the good King Antony and his only son were slain not but 60 years ago. Their race completely disappeared shortly before the kingdom's fall. However, after years of silence, the elves have been made aware of a new divination, bringing them hope and a reason to resurface in secrecy. Seven humans will be born-- each with a unique gift or talent from the Gods. By forming together and using their powers against the evil sorcerer and sorceress, they shall defeat them and restore the Kingdom to peace.

After patiently biding their time until each of the chosen humans had been born and passed age 17 (at which time their powers will awaken), the elves sent visions to each human using magic. The visions beckoned them to meet in the city of Jeorva, a wealthy merchant town that is far from the Realm of Spritus Raptor, where the evil king and queen abide in the old King's castle, surrounded by their armies and those who have pledged their allegiance.

The world has become a dark place in the presence of such tyranny. Words of good conquering evil and retribution for what's been done are either jokes or the words of mad men. Of course, after 60 years of uncontested rule, coupled with how quickly the kingdom fell after the wicked pair began their conquest, it isn't very hard to see why such a thing as 'hope' would be considered silly at this point. Nonetheless, that is exactly what the vision represents as it whistles through trees, over lakes, and slips silently into the dreams of seven individuals who are fated to save the kingdom of Coake from the unforgiving grasp of corruption once and for all.



The Seven Elementos

Fire/Heat
Has the ability to manipulate flame. Eventually gains the ability to produce their own heat for flame so they donโ€™t have to have it provided by some other source.

Water/Ice
Has the ability to manipulate water. Eventually, gains the ability to freeze water and other numerous objects using water.

Earth/Stone
Has the ability to shift dirt, small rocks, soil, sand, etc. Eventually gains the ability to manipulate large and heavy boulders and other large portions of stone.

Animals/Plants
Has the ability to communicate with mammals, reptiles, and birds. Eventually gains the ability to manipulate plants. (Human's appearance may come with some animal-like qualities)

Wind/Weather
Has the ability to manipulate wind currents. Eventually gains the ability to summon or dispel powerful storms.

Light/Teleportation
Has the ability to heal wounds and create force fields. Eventually gains the ability to teleport over short distances (2 mile radius).

Darkness/Mind Reading
Has the ability to summon powerful weapons from shadows. Such weapons can be wielded by the summoner only. Eventually gains the ability to read the minds of others based on their mental strength (not animals).

*note* The second power, marked by โ€œEventuallyโ€, will eventually be given to all of them. Players will wait until I notify them when it will be appropriate for the character to advance (although I am open to requests and suggestions should the player see an opportune moment for such character development). It will most likely happen during a point in time when they really need it.




The Cast:

Rowena : Baklava : 6D7B8D (lightslategray)
Brande Ashbell : Captain Jenno : DC381F
Raine Laiken : Undine : 00FFFF (aqua)
Elspeth Scout : McHaggis : B8D945
Petra Ducrat : Rinoa Rose : F9AD81
Audra Hesten : NightFlight : F7941D
Leon Alabaster : Scrapula : E6FFCC
Randall (Reeves Artemis) : Dervish : 0072BC

Elise Callan : lydyn : C900FF
Isaac Dorovich : Sodium : (violet)
James Terna : Kaithus : C8B560















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Alright guys-- sorry it's taken me a while to get to this. I wanted to be able to sit down and give some good reviews before I post the OOC and start taking official submissions.

@Zombehs Not very many improvements I see could be made. I know the map information wasn't up at the time, but if you could mention where Lorcrove is located in relation to the map in your final draft, that'd be great.

@Captain Jenno We already spoke via PM, so we good. :)

@Sodium While you are certainly more than welcome to create a single character sheet to apply for two different elements, my only qualm is that the section describing Isaac's elements (based off of of which role he would get) is very terse. They seem to be mentioned as neat tricks he can do at parties rather than what they are-- very amazing and impacting gifts. I would like to see a bit more about his discovery of these powers and how they impacted him mentally. He's had them for about 6 years now, so try to explain how he's learned to cope with them. Please also keep in mind (and this is for everyone) that the ability to communicate with animals is not akin to the ability to control them. While I can see Isaac as being a very persuasive person, he might have a difficult time convincing rare animals to forsake a life of freedom for one inside a cage or enclosure (unless he were to trick them, in which case I would be interested to hear more about why he may not be the kind of person to feel sympathetic to their cause-- is he one to befriend animals or manipulate them?).

@Scrapula Very nice! Leon is a gladiator badass. I can't help but feel that your description of his typical attire would be a bit unpractical outside of the arena though. With the harsh weather conditions of Periset, it would be very important that he keep himself covered from head to toe in light, loose fitting clothing in order to protect himself from the sun. Also, while I have no qualms with his gladiator trainer being an orc, I would keep in mind that it is very uncommon for orcs to feel any compassion towards humans. They would sooner use them as a simple means to an end and eat their face than be very nice. This would mean that Branwen might have faced some hostility from his fellow orcs for showing any sort of kindness to Leon. I'm fine with it, but just so long as that's clear. Lastly, and this is a rule I had yet to clarify, healing, just as the use of any elemental power, requires energy. This is important to know since if a light elementos becomes gravely injured, it serves to reason that they may not have enough energy to heal themselves. Just a tidbit of knowledge to keep in mind.

@Undine I can't think of many changes I would make. There are a few typos I would recommend correcting before final submission, but that's it.

Oh... and also... AN OOC IS BORN! Please review the application rules!
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