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6 yrs ago
Sometimes I don’t feel like writing but then I look at the rest of these forums and realize they’re dead af so I can’t be dead af either
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6 yrs ago
I am tired and very stressed - I will probably not be able to push out any replies for some time.
6 yrs ago
Will be away for three days - near to absolutely no internet. I'm afraid.
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6 yrs ago
I swear to God all the icons on the page turned into emojis for a moment...
7 yrs ago
I think I’m starting to be known on the guild as the guy who expresses interest in RPs but never joins
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I am so sorry for the abominable wait, guys. IRL work is drowning me right now.

Our opening IC post will be at RAF Carrington. You lot will probably be in the mess to get breakfast and acquaint yourselves with each other before a routine training exercise.
Alright, I'm back. Making my own CS now.

Roll call?
@PrinceAlexus @CaptainBritton Accepted.

I will be rather inactive for the rest of this week, and I apologize. Maybe you guys could start brainstorming character story arcs?
@PrinceAlexus

Can you be more specific regarding his beliefs? "He is open to change" is a bit vague. Try saying things like "he is fascinated with the existence of aliens" or "believes that all religions point to one god" or something like that. His interest in Eastern beliefs could play a big part in this. Also inject personality into it - is he cynical? Patriotic? Foul-tempered? CSes are supposed to be descriptive, after all.

Also go into more detail with his background. I could certainly see how a life in an orphanage could make or break you, but elaborate a little. Did he get into lots of fights with his peers? Was he rebellious or actively questioned authority? It is also worth mentioning that orphanages back then (and even now) were potential hotbeds of abuse, whether it be physical, verbal, sexual, etc.

Lastly, I'd encourage you to fix up your English syntax a little - there are many misspelled words in your CS ('apecept' twice in a row?). I'm not that strict with posting requirements, but at the very least make your writing easy to read.

Will be offline for three days, sorry about the wait. I would like to reiterate my need for a co-GM.
Also important announcement: if your character is going to be Gold or Green Leader, their rank will have to be Flying Lieutenant. My Ghost Leader will be Squadron Leader.
@PrinceAlexus What do you mean, wrong class? If he could fly a plane, he could fly a bloody plane - it wouldn't matter what social class he came from. The British had already learnt their lessons about officer competence from World War I. However, someone with a college degree or middle-class background at the very least had a bit of an advantage over the average British farmer or factory worker in terms of being eligible for aircrew service.

I mean, ground crew being pulled for air duties isn't entirely unrealistic, but he would be assigned to an ordinary squadron. Turin Squadron has the liberty of recruiting from less desperate sources.
@Oak7ree You should expand on this in your CS, especially on specific themes in these kinds of horror literature - perhaps H.G Wells' War on the Worlds fueled Arthur's curiosity about extraterrestrial life? (etc, etc.)
@Oak7ree Very good CS! His willingness to accept the existence of life other than humans in the universe makes him a prime candidate for a Leader. However, could you elaborate on what kind of horror literature he liked? The time period has a lot of specific examples to choose from.
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