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@Oak7ree Very good CS! His willingness to accept the existence of life other than humans in the universe makes him a prime candidate for a Leader. However, could you elaborate on what kind of horror literature he liked? The time period has a lot of specific examples to choose from.
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Alright, will do.
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@BingTheWing Gladly. He has liked Bram Stoker, Robert Louis Stevenson, Edgar Allen Poe, Mary Shelley and H.G. Wells.
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@Oak7ree You should expand on this in your CS, especially on specific themes in these kinds of horror literature - perhaps H.G Wells' War on the Worlds fueled Arthur's curiosity about extraterrestrial life? (etc, etc.)
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So.. Just to see of this ideas OK.

What if a new graduate of flight school,but was previously in the Raf as ground crew. Had good scores but wrong class. War comes. Air crew needed so they get trained. Had the scores to fly before but was not the right class or background for thr officer core, war time changed that and they just needed men.

The trainees are sifted and was pulled for enlistment to new unit and assigned based on there test scored rather than class or background.

There abit older. Say 30,s and had a few years in Raf as a ground mechanic or some other role?

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@PrinceAlexus What do you mean, wrong class? If he could fly a plane, he could fly a bloody plane - it wouldn't matter what social class he came from. The British had already learnt their lessons about officer competence from World War I. However, someone with a college degree or middle-class background at the very least had a bit of an advantage over the average British farmer or factory worker in terms of being eligible for aircrew service.

I mean, ground crew being pulled for air duties isn't entirely unrealistic, but he would be assigned to an ordinary squadron. Turin Squadron has the liberty of recruiting from less desperate sources.
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Also important announcement: if your character is going to be Gold or Green Leader, their rank will have to be Flying Lieutenant. My Ghost Leader will be Squadron Leader.
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Will be offline for three days, sorry about the wait. I would like to reiterate my need for a co-GM.
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@BingTheWing If no one else volunteers to the position, I could be the Co-GM.
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Still finishing a CS.

Working on it. Taking time to get rewritten to fot format I'm happy with.
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Also working on a character sheet, should be complete some time soon.

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Had a go. Hope you like it.
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Can you be more specific regarding his beliefs? "He is open to change" is a bit vague. Try saying things like "he is fascinated with the existence of aliens" or "believes that all religions point to one god" or something like that. His interest in Eastern beliefs could play a big part in this. Also inject personality into it - is he cynical? Patriotic? Foul-tempered? CSes are supposed to be descriptive, after all.

Also go into more detail with his background. I could certainly see how a life in an orphanage could make or break you, but elaborate a little. Did he get into lots of fights with his peers? Was he rebellious or actively questioned authority? It is also worth mentioning that orphanages back then (and even now) were potential hotbeds of abuse, whether it be physical, verbal, sexual, etc.

Lastly, I'd encourage you to fix up your English syntax a little - there are many misspelled words in your CS ('apecept' twice in a row?). I'm not that strict with posting requirements, but at the very least make your writing easy to read.

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@PrinceAlexus

Can you be more specific regarding his beliefs? "He is open to change" is a bit vague. Try saying things like "he is fascinated with the existence of aliens" or "believes that all religions point to one god" or something like that. His interest in Eastern beliefs could play a big part in this. Also inject personality into it - is he cynical? Patriotic? Foul-tempered? CSes are supposed to be descriptive, after all.

Also go into more detail with his background. I could certainly see how a life in an orphanage could make or break you, but elaborate a little. Did he get into lots of fights with his peers? Was he rebellious or actively questioned authority? It is also worth mentioning that orphanages back then (and even now) were potential hotbeds of abuse, whether it be physical, verbal, sexual, etc.

Lastly, I'd encourage you to fix up your English syntax a little - there are many misspelled words in your CS ('apecept' twice in a row?). I'm not that strict with posting requirements, but at the very least make your writing easy to read.


I can edit it. I think some of the r personality got lost when I converted it t into a report format, I can upgrade it and add all that it.

And yeah, smart phone playing up again and not tagging stuff it seems. Il give it a run via a word processor.
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I'm gonna drop out of this, sorry to say, I wish you guys happy RPing.
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Edited it as best I can tonight. I can add further edits later if needed posting here to save progress.
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@PrinceAlexus @CaptainBritton Accepted.

I will be rather inactive for the rest of this week, and I apologize. Maybe you guys could start brainstorming character story arcs?
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@PrinceAlexus @CaptainBritton Accepted.

I will be rather inactive for the rest of this week, and I apologize. Maybe you guys could start brainstorming character story arcs?


Sure. I have idea that the whole fact Canada, US, UK so far. Could be abit of rivalry and contrasts occur like in any orgonisation.

As a "new" officer in some regards could be intresting how someone reacts to that from the ranks too.
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How many here have seen the Dunkirk by Christopher Nolan? I must say it's audio and sound effects really was really well done, and especially when I saw it in the cinema, the Stukas really creeped me out.
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