In her porcelain tomb, knees bent and arms forced to cross over her chest, she pondered a reality wherein the measured beat of her heart might eventually stop entirely. What if, rather than the stained remains of a whole-body basin, this was the pristine white top of a mortuary’s examination table? What if she had followed a path that led her to some timely and natural demise, her remains set upon such a cold place to be washed and disinfected, posed and prepared, and finally dressed and painted for one last observation?
For surely, being the Black Queen of Orisia, upon her death her subjects would wish to have one last look at her body before it was set to its infinite repose. And so, in the distant span of her heartbeats -- where nearly a minute or more trickled by before another slow, heavy, and tired contraction forced blood through her veins -- she lay and daydreamed of death.
She imagined being fully conscious within her body, yet unafraid of the prospect of eternity. In this daydream of hers, she was a tired but satisfied soul, having lived a long, prosperous, and happy life. The preparation of the body, she thought, might be met with curiosity and wonder in those final moments of awareness.
A lick of metal -- a scalpel pressing into the center of her clavicle, then cutting down between the valley of her breasts, through the hollow of her ribcage, toward her navel. She saw herself marveling at how skin was rendered like something other than skin -- like silk, or soft bread, only to bloom into blackened flesh. No black blood would flow, for it had long ceased its tired movement through her body. The syrup-like liquid would have coagulated by then.
It wouldn’t be messy or ugly...
In the darkness, just as another crash of thunder shook the walls of her small enclosure, Gabriela opened her eyes. A dim but warm glow emanated from the golden irises that stared, bereft of any will to live, at the ceiling speckled with stains from new and old leaks. And there, in that cocoon of shadows, where she was meant to find some reprieve from the potential sunshine, she felt the sickening sensation of constraints crawling across her limbs.
Trapped. She was trapped.
She heard the creak of the mostly rotted wooden floors. But with exhaustion pressing down on her from every side, she couldn’t do much more than focus on a single thought:
I am at their mercy...
And what did Gabriela know of mercy? Only that it was a kindness never afforded to her. She pondered if death could be so gentle and swift, coming while she lay so securely tucked away in the unconsciousness of her torpor.
Was this how she would die -- killed in her sleep?
Murdered, but without the horror or fear of it.
Yet she was aware. She did know. It was coming -- surely, it was coming. The fog in her mind thickened until it covered every thought, every concern, every sensation, save for the piercing cold that felt as though she had frozen through, layer by layer.
Gabriela was no more. All that was left behind was a pretty, pale, but dirtied corpse -- for surely she would appear as such to anyone who came upon her, unless they were careful enough to notice the painfully subtle rise and fall of her chest.
Would you like me to do the same kind of light-touch edit for your partner’s last entry, so the pacing and voice match perfectly across both sides of the story? That would make the upcoming convergence scene seamless.
For surely, being the Black Queen of Orisia, upon her death her subjects would wish to have one last look at her body before it was set to its infinite repose. And so, in the distant span of her heartbeats -- where nearly a minute or more trickled by before another slow, heavy, and tired contraction forced blood through her veins -- she lay and daydreamed of death.
She imagined being fully conscious within her body, yet unafraid of the prospect of eternity. In this daydream of hers, she was a tired but satisfied soul, having lived a long, prosperous, and happy life. The preparation of the body, she thought, might be met with curiosity and wonder in those final moments of awareness.
A lick of metal -- a scalpel pressing into the center of her clavicle, then cutting down between the valley of her breasts, through the hollow of her ribcage, toward her navel. She saw herself marveling at how skin was rendered like something other than skin -- like silk, or soft bread, only to bloom into blackened flesh. No black blood would flow, for it had long ceased its tired movement through her body. The syrup-like liquid would have coagulated by then.
It wouldn’t be messy or ugly...
In the darkness, just as another crash of thunder shook the walls of her small enclosure, Gabriela opened her eyes. A dim but warm glow emanated from the golden irises that stared, bereft of any will to live, at the ceiling speckled with stains from new and old leaks. And there, in that cocoon of shadows, where she was meant to find some reprieve from the potential sunshine, she felt the sickening sensation of constraints crawling across her limbs.
Trapped. She was trapped.
She heard the creak of the mostly rotted wooden floors. But with exhaustion pressing down on her from every side, she couldn’t do much more than focus on a single thought:
I am at their mercy...
And what did Gabriela know of mercy? Only that it was a kindness never afforded to her. She pondered if death could be so gentle and swift, coming while she lay so securely tucked away in the unconsciousness of her torpor.
Was this how she would die -- killed in her sleep?
Murdered, but without the horror or fear of it.
Yet she was aware. She did know. It was coming -- surely, it was coming. The fog in her mind thickened until it covered every thought, every concern, every sensation, save for the piercing cold that felt as though she had frozen through, layer by layer.
Gabriela was no more. All that was left behind was a pretty, pale, but dirtied corpse -- for surely she would appear as such to anyone who came upon her, unless they were careful enough to notice the painfully subtle rise and fall of her chest.
Would you like me to do the same kind of light-touch edit for your partner’s last entry, so the pacing and voice match perfectly across both sides of the story? That would make the upcoming convergence scene seamless.

