Blue Demon

Star Trek: To Boldly Go

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Fixed. I'll try to work on the post now, may not be that big.

@Ruby

Doesn't have to be an essay or even a novella. Just enough so I can gauge skill (Which isn't that much of a worry because I know your skill level, but fair is fair)

Horizon Zero Dawn

I'm not sure what you'd call each specific "Old One" that would watch over someone.

And I got a rough sketch of my girl up.

EDIT:
I don't know for you, but I think Ally will decide her guide will be the Spirit of Peace. :P

Horizon Zero Dawn

Alliminum

Name: Alliminum or Ally
Age: 22
Spirit Guardian: Peace
Markings: Ally has no tribal markings, having never earned them.

Personality: Alliminum is a dreamer. She looks at the world differently than everyone else. What her tribe sees as landscape she see the "Old Ones". She sees where they walk. She sees the beauty hidden in monsters. And monsters hidden in beauty. But no one else sees as she does. They all whisper behind her back. Calling her names. Things like useless, a drain of the tribe, touched. They asked her why couldn't she be like Taellana? Why did she have to be difficult?

They couldn't see it. Couldn't see the souls in the machines they hunted. They called it survival. But there was so much waste. Some hunters killed more than the tribe needed. How was that survival? So Ally ignored the admonitions of her family and tribe and continued to walk the path of the Old Ones. Maybe her heads are stick in dreams, but maybe she was the only one looking toward the future.

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

@Blue Demon That's dumb as shit, why not jump PM?

@Savato

They refused. Skype or die man.

Horizon Zero Dawn

I wouldn't mind a draw from the native american tribes.

Though I can see them using "The Ones that Came Before/The Old Ones" as a sort of spiritual guide. Like Asian society believes their ancestors watch over them. Since a lot would be made up, perhaps were are certain "Old Ones" that watch over the tribe?

Or we can just stick with your idea. Either's cool, just throwing stuff out there.

Star Trek: To Boldly Go

So far I like it, especially how you justified it. Just two things I noticed right off hand.

#1

Rank/Position: Captain/Commander of the USS Orion.

@Ruby

The rank is Commander and the position is Captain. Not the other way around. (And that's just me being a little nitpicky.)

#2

The Vulcan woman would leave Artos with the newborn child, and disappear just as quickly as she'd come.

@Ruby

I've read this sentence a few times. And no matter that I know what it's supposed to say, I keep reading it as the Vulcan woman takes the newborn with her. But that's just me.

I look forward to your finished CS.

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

Haha.

That's good. I've had to drop out of an RP before because they discussed "important" plot things and if I didn't skype with them I wouldn't get to know it. :|

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

Skype, you suck.

You all suck.

Don't expect me to be there. I've disowned Skype.

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

@Blue Demon
Sorry for not getting a response post up yet, but I feel we may need to collab on this. Sam's pretty confused and alarmed, and I'd rather not spam the IC with needless filler and throwing questions back and forth.

@Wade Wilson

I can do a collab. :D I like those.

Horizon Zero Dawn

I kinda want the one with no makeup because of the hair. But MC will have tattoos.

And I'm done *climbs into bed*