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11 yrs ago
Now I want a trophy.
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Get your damn, dirty emachines away from me!
Small scale or scum and villainy.

How do you feel about untrained force sensitives? I don't mean to open the floodgates for a loophole, but I have a possible character who's kind of a one-shot wonder FS (only one real power).
Boom shakalaka!

Let's get on to Nar Shaddaa, where the clubs are wild, the taps are flowing, the music is hot and the dance floor is OPEN! We did say we're going clubbing on the Smuggler's Moon, right?
Jerek was awestruck by the Feeorin boy's confession. For the first time, he realized how his actions must look to the other Jedi, the strong attachment he felt towards his Noghri master and his inability to let go. Attachment seemed like such a simple idea, easy to control in the presence of the Jedi Masters at the temple. It was a thought exercise, a scenario that youngling-Jerek believed he could simply overcome. Yet here he was, now a witness to the realities of death, and the reality was that he had failed to keep his emotions in check. His master was alive because of him, because the youth could not follow the Jedi Code.

The sandy-haired padawan could hardly bring himself to look at his fellow Jedi. Turning to the blue-skinned padawan, Jerek nodded in a respectful manner. His voice was flat as he spoke the expected formalities, a motion the boy would hide the shame he felt right now. "I thank you, Alaric, for your great skill. I appreciate your treating my master."

As the hazel-eyed boy stood, he caught a glimpse of Vor'loch emerging from the now-drained bacta tank. He looked on in wonder at the miracle standing before him. What once was nearly dead now lived, healthy and well as could be expected. In an instant, Jerek's shame lay forgotten on the med bay floor, discarded and useless like a piece of dust. In spite of the presence of his fellow padawans, Jerek rushed forward, initially by instinct but then with the full force of consciousness behind him. The youth moved to embrace his master, wrapping his skinny arms around the Noghri's massive trunk.

Quickly, adolescent propriety took over, and the boy stepped back with a sheepish expression, his cheeks burning. Composing himself, the apprentice bowed deeply to his master, his eyes downcast to the floor once more as he stood, "I am pleased to see you on your feet once again, Master."

Still embarrassed from the spectacle he had made of himself, Jerek stayed drew quiet, forming up in a position to follow his master and the others to find a change of clothing for their excursion.
SonofJET said
Post, aye, Captain.Edit: Post completed. :)


Lol. I'm glad you were able to touch on that part, even though the collab never happened for it. I'll post tomorrow*, but don't let that stop anyone in the meantime.

*That is, if Kerbal Space Program doesn't distract me again.
The Nexerus said
The scene at the end was great. For some reason all of Daenarys' clincher scenes are my favourite. Astapor tops this, definitely, but it was still good.


The reveal at Astapor was probably THE best Daenarys is a badass scene in the story so far.

As far as this episode goes, however, the Arya/Hound scenes were my favorite. The Hound actually voiced my very thoughts when he said, "You got to do all seven of the fuckers?"
mdk said
He almost looks taller than Joffrey.


I think he has a deeper voice, too.
I was really worried when I heard that Callum Wharry was being replaced as Tommen Baratheon. Episode 3 of Season 4 finally introduces our new Tommen, now played by Dean-Charles Chapman. And he's old.

The whole point of Tommen is that he doesn't even understand what a king does, much less how to do it. He thinks the biggest extent of a king's job is to sign papers and seal them with wax, and he loves every bit of it. It's going to be a tough sell to pass a 15 year old off as that naive.

*grumble grumble grumble*
Bounce said
Running up against writer's block at the moment, and apologize for the lack of youngling randomness.


I'm having a hard time of this myself. SonofJET, Jake or Sep, don't feel the need to wait for me to post this round, I'm coming up empty.
I'm in. PM sent.
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