Damiann47

Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

@ClocktowerEchosNa it's all good, take your time as I can be extremely patient so there's no need to worry about me.

Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

@CallMeChaotix

If you suck at roleplaying that's fine, it really is, but if you want to get better then just listen to us. Would you rather us not say anything, and just let you continue making the same mistakes? Just saying you're not good at writing isn't going to make you a better writer, you need to take criticism and use it to improve yourself. I want you to stick around, trust me I'm not trying to chase you away if that's what you're thinking, all I'm asking is you really try to listen to us, and really put some effort into beefing up your weaknesses.

Resisting is just going to hurt you a whole lot more than it's gonna hurt us.

Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

@CallMeChaotix

So gonna jump on what I want to call the train of knowledge, so I'm gonna add to what @Rekaigan and @Crimson Raven said. We're seriously not going to ignore your character, in my opinion a more natural way to get him in a group is to plop him somewhere near some other characters, and just go about his business. I say you're trying too hard to get him interacting with people, it'll be alright for him to be alone for a little longer, trust me. This has already been mentioned, but I think the point really needs to get across, mainly consistency. I'm not sure where he is right now, and I'm not trying to be mean by saying this.

Dragonwing at one point tries to join Raeki's party, but he was supposed to in town, while Raeki is far off into the east, obviously he doesn't join them. Next he witnesses DeRi yelling at Kytel, gets offended by random players which causes him logs off at around 9:45 at night. Next he logs back on to run off into the hills to fight a bear, and gets so badly injured by it that he collapses in town. It doesn't seem like any of this mattered as the next post is him reattempting to join Raeki and Araris, who again are not in town.

Now this is probably not a completely accurate summary of what he has done so far, but that's a bad thing, means I couldn't fully understand what happened. Anyway hopefully this helps you to see what I'm saying, these events make no sense and they're all over the place.

We keep stressing that we're not trying to bully you, try to understand we're pointing out legitimate issues in your posts so you can improve yourself, it'll be good for everyone this way.

Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

I've never seen RWBY, just saying.

Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

Wow we really do have a gender imbalance, though we do have a guy who's pretending to be a girl... it counts. Probably.

Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

I think this is relevant for us on two fronts.

BLARG

Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

Kytel isn't happy about random girls attempting to abduct him.

Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

@ClocktowerEchos

What was happening?! Who was this girl that first she almost made a scene about being ran into, then now she was trying to kidnap him for... a business? She called him her first employee. Kytel was going to have none of that, he jerked his arm back from "Princess'" grasp and wasn't exactly gentle about it. "No... No! Normal people don't just... enslave other people, and in a VRMMORPG of all things!"

He wasn't feel nearly as apologetic anymore, and his expression reflected this. He was a little angry, well more than a little angry actually, was his first contact with anyone seriously this girl? "Alright? If you need help, or whatever, ask them first! Jesus, don't go dragging people around, it's rude!"

Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

@ClocktowerEchos

Well... this was happening to him now, she was really overrating to a simple mistake, not that he'll say as much to a complete stranger's face. "Hey now, let us calm down a bit, again I should apologize because it was my fault, and I did bowl your over after all."

Kytel pointed down the street in the vague direction of the quest giver. "I'm just coming back from wrapping up that, sort of stupid, boar's hide quest." He then held a hand to his chest. "And... uh my name is Kytel." He may have been practically submitting to the girl, but solving this diplomatically was probably the fastest way to resolve things.

Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

@CallMeChaotixMy best advice I can ever give as a roleplayer is patience is key, seriously. In my opinion one of the worse things you can do to the story, and to your fellow roleplayers is rush everything. We have to get our characters in position to interact first, which can take one or two posts, what matters is it makes sense and it flows well. Blinking like a wizard from one conversation to another is never a good thing. So yeah moral of the story is just wait, we're not gonna let you free fall here, we'll do stuff with you.

@ClocktowerEchosAh, give me a minute here, actually just woke up for real and my brain is still rebooting.