Alright... first off, I'm gonna have to say that I would've preferred if you submit your sheet here in the OOC rather than the CS.
Sorry about that. All the other threads i've seen it was done where you submit it in the CS, i should've asked if you were doing the same.
For two, the quality in this sheet is lacking and it has some errors in its logic. If he was a fisherman, where did he learn how to smith? Between travelling the seas for years and getting to the GNYC, they would've had to learn from somebody with previous experience and even becoming a Smith good enough to forge a proper sword would've taken many, many years of work. Not to mention somehow knowing how to make a gun, something difficult to do even in the past without extensive training. Personality is severally lacking and appearance similarly so. All in all, I can't accept this sheet unless it goes through heavy reforms to meet standards.
For the sake of not arguing i'll keep this short. I assure you the logic is sound. I didn't make that clear and i accept that i'm at fault for that but you're overestimating how hard it is to build a gun or sword. I can do it myself and i still have 8 years to go before i'm his age when the apocalypse struck.
As for the parts where it's lacking: I'll fix that, but i must say, you didn't require anything of them, so don't be too upset with me for not writing much when it came to that.
I hope we understand each other now. xD