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Well...I said I was going to try K Nine but I guess I'm just subborn.

This still needs some touching up in terms of format but here's another attempt at Crimson Setsuka in terms of story and information.



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Interesting concept, but there's a lot that's missing from the table right now.

  • The whole powers/abilities section is absent, and that's kind of a must-have.
  • The classified intel should be DMed to me and Canary. Let me know if I missed it, but I don't think I've received anything of the sort.
  • HERO is not an international organization. HERO would have zero jurisdiction as to Japan's hero activity- that would belong to PHANTOM. As such, she can't just travel the globe willy-nilly.
  • Again, full backstory should be DMed to me and Canary before I can accept the character. ​
  • The entire concept of "e-Heroes" isn't clear to me, as your bio references both traditional law enforcement and hero companies as being Crimson Satsuka's employer. The former would really make her just a special forces ekop, while the latter wouldn't make much sense from a logical perspective. Hero companies employ metahumans, not robots, and robots are in fact singlehandedly weighing down the broader hero community. Hero companies would see no need to, and would in fact be STRONGLY opposed to, any form of electronic hero.
  • Going by the former point's logic, it would also make zero sense why one hero company would ship what they view as a defective robot off to another continent. Wouldn't she just have been destroyed on the spot, or at least re-programmed in some way? Just saying 'here, we'll send the potentially compromised goods to another company to deal with' doesn't really make any sense.

A good idea, but there are a lot of flaws in the blueprint.


So yeah. After this explanation and what you told me, trying to make a "good robot" wouldn't work at all with the lore of this RP.

...*sigh*...well back to the drawing board. Might as well re-vamp K Nine then. Jesus though I've lost my edge with character design here.
Hi all. While I had NPC ideas, I FINALLY got around to making an actual character. Though this is still WIP, I'd like opinions on it before I continue:

Sorry for the double post but here was my second character and a special NPC that didn't get much RP time in the previous RP. Again, special characters that may make a return.



Hi all. Sadly, still having character troubles and already we have 11 accepted characters up to this point -___-'.

But I made this while thinking things out. For those of you new here, this was my first character from the previous RP. Now, he may make special appearances in this one depending on how the GM's feel about this but he's not going to be a full time character.

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I love her! She looks fun, feel free to move her over!


Welp...there goes my vigiante idea =p

But yeah, now I don't know if I can bring "Alien Angel" back into this. I also noted this is sort of a sequel to the first HERO RP when I was reading the other info on this. Same goes for Alpha...actually, how many years does this one take place from the first one?
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If you wanna join, absolutely! If you're coming back to RPG we'd be glad to have you.


Thanks. So SOME of the original band members for this RP are here. Still have to think of a character though. Ain't sure if using the two from the last HERO RP is a good idea though.
...so Hitman...we getting the bad back together here? I don't come here often but you want me back, I'll join.
Alpha


Alpha was among those playing "Irish Thug" while on the boat. In a way, he was dressed similar to Blake with his orange hair combed back down as much as possible with the same suit and red tie with the Fedora hat to match.

Though he mostly kept to himself even with black sunglasses. His "vibe" was to look like a "right hand" man of sorts if anyone got too nosy. If someone did, Cerise would cover for him. The simple "strong silent type".

He had waited at the bar area when the first problem came up.

Malady.

Of course, he knew about her...it was actually on his birthday two days after the whole EAGLES incident. Since losing his special police badge, he needed another source of information. During their stay, his parents came clean on some things. One of the topics was a certain organization that even they weren't supposed to mention but old friends from his days with the US government felt that he had clearance to know about the group.

But not even they knew the whole story...

ZERO. A group of supposed super villains that consisted of the best criminals the world over. Only the strongest and most loyal get accepted to them. And they said that Malady, the daughter to ZERO's leader, was in Castleburg and may have been involved in some of the incidents that had happened in the city.

Regardless, they both said to not go poking fights with any of it's members. It was suspected all were "Tier S" threats.

So when Black Baron himself finally came onto the scene and announced his replacement, he didn't bother taking out his vibrating iPhone to know what text was sent.

This was going to get ugly.

None the less, he played along and clapped with the rest of the group...

But unknown to perhaps Alpha and the others there, a certain vigilante was watching from the shadows...
Alpha


After hearing the "new" hero Cerise spoke about her time in Hero One and working on her disguise, Alpha then monotoned, "...understood...and my name is Alpha as I said...formerly K Nine of the CPD...may I have your name ma'am..."

Then Brum spoke his mind on the subject. Alpha then responded in a normal voice.

"Uh I don't know about that Mr. Brum. Someone may get suspicious that those going undercover somehow captured a president of his own company and a super genius with technology AND has his own private super team. It may raise some flags on us."

Alpha then monotoned, "...it may make more sense for me to play prisoner...you could easily say that I snooped into the wrong territory and caught me red handed...I have gotten stronger I think since the EAGLES incident...but because I didn't take a Tier test...I'm still classed as a C...plus, you could assume my fall out with CPD may have clouded my judgement and I tried to play solo cop and got burned for it..."
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