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So I guess I'm in now! But I have to figure out a way to get introduced to the RP...


So, third bit of a try here, I'm sure there'll be more mistakes that need correcting or something but let me know if this is a little better, as always I'm willing to make changes.
@Ellri@Fallenreaper@Sundered Echo
I mean in reply to that Fallenreaper was the one who said that they could/should be discovered later in life and fourteen was the minimum age I could make them while still maintaining the inexperienced feel I was going for with the character so obviously I was working off of false information once again...

I'll edit it further to try and fit and try and come up with some sort of war connection I guess? Beginning to feel a bit tossed about by the constant changes in info though but I guess it's understandable.


Right, done with some slight edits now mostly changing his age and emphasizing the Echani culture a little more since he was raised there for even longer now, still proooobably a WIP but let me know what you think.
@Ellri@Fallenreaper@Sundered Echo

Any opinion now that I've edited the age for Khan to 14? Should I repost my CS again on this page?
Right, I've changed the age to fourteen and put a little more emphasis on his skills and knowledge regarding combat, tactics and the Echani cultural knack for reading the body language of others to reflect the fact that he's spent even longer raised in the Echani society. As far as the changes I made to his lightsaber skills it's basically just to reflect that he's using Echani styles of swordsmanship with his lightsaber and a little bit of basic Shii-Cho to try and cobble something together, but he's too inexperienced to really use actual lightsaber forms very effectively.

Overall he's a little smarter, more skilled and more mature than the young child version would have been but there's still a lot of immaturity, inexperience and room to develop in a wide variety of directions, which is what my intent was anyways. Let me know what you lot think and I'll make edits/expand as necessary.
Well the Echani do consider martial combat to be the purest form of communication.

Also why are we wiggling our eyebrows? is this...is this some sort of cult indoctrination ceremony?
Thank you, that should work perfectly fine and hopefully avoid any such problems. Plus, slightly older Khan means more experience with Echani martial arts XD
Also, can you lot actually decide on a minimum age so I can edit accordingly without having to play hit-or-miss? XD I was thinking 14 would still allow for similar dynamics without being quite so uncomfortable but someone suggested 16 just to be safe (I'm still wondering why the requirements said 'anything but sixteen though) so I'm waiting on a decision.
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