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‘Original Order of the Phoenix,' growled Moody. 'Found it last night when I was looking for my spare Invisibility Cloak, seeing as Podmore hasn't had the manners to return my best one.... Thought people might like to see it.'


Better to see it than live it!

The year is 1970 and Lord Voldemort has just proclaimed himself Dark Lord. In speeches that have reached all corners of the wizarding population he has promised to topple the established order. Muggles will be subjugated, squibs segregated and pure wizards will reign supreme.

No more hiding, no more secrecy.. merely bend the knee to Lord Voldemort and live as kings.

The ministry is officially at war but hampered by a cancerous network of spies within its midst, fear and distrust are an oozing canker infecting the wizarding population and stalling any resistance.

"Imagine that Voldemort's powerful now. You don't know who his supporters are, you don't know who's working for him and who isn't; you know he can control people so that they do terrible things without being able to stop themselves. You're scared for yourself, and your family, and your friends. Every week, news comes of more deaths, more disappearances, more torturing...the Ministry of Magic's in disarray, they don't know what to do, they're trying to keep everything hidden from the Muggles, but meanwhile, Muggles are dying too. Terror everywhere...panic...confusion...that's how it used to be.” Sirius Black

Yet from the darkness some fought back. After the latest and largest mass muggle killing(over 30 muggles killed with suspected giant involvement) the Order of the Phoenix was born.

They at least would fight back!

This rp will start with founding members of the Order of the Phoenix and detail their attempts to take the fight to Voldemort.

What I'm looking for


I’m looking for 4-7 people to take on the roles of some of the less defined characters from the original order of the Phoenix
I’m looking for high casual writers
Post rate of once a week
General RP courtesy, be good to your fellow rpers, respect my role as the gm and lets have a great bit of fun building a story for ourselves

What I'm offering you

A chance to fill in some of the gaps in Rowling’s story.

It took 5 death eaters to kill Gideon and Fabian Prewett. How did they fight like heroes?
What did the order actually do in that first wizarding war?
Why did Dorcas Meadowes deserve the attention of Voldemort himself?
How did James and Lily defy Voldemort three times?

We know lots but we have an 11 year gap to fill until the rp will end with the fall of Voldemort. Please note I will not be accepting original characters but I do feel with the very little we know about characters like the Prewetts, the McKinnons and the Bones we can create semi original characters.

The characters I am looking for to begin with will be (at least 4 of):

Marlene McKinnon- Kaalee
Benjy Fenwick
Edgar Bones
Caradoc Dearborn
Gideon Prewett -Tendo
Fabian Prewett
Dorcas Meadowes- Lady Hestia

If the rp goes well and we build a solid foundation around the above characters I may look to expand into more established characters. Please note as Lily and James did not join the order til around 1978 I will not be recruiting for them (Lupin, Sirius, Wormtail and Frank/ Alice Longbottom) until later. My feelings are that as all of the above will most definitely kick the bucket at some point those who have helped to build the story will get first choices on further characters.

Character Sheet


Name:
Gender:
Age:
Appearance: picture and description would be great ( this does not have to be the image from the films or pottermore if you would like to invent)

Job title and description:

Close family members: (name, gender, age, brief description. You want to go the whole hog and flesh them out absolutely fine but a few lines detailing their appearance and any notable traits would be good!)

Ambition: what drives your charactor

Wand:
Hogwarts House:
Strengths: talented on a broom, great at arithmancy... detail it here
Weaknesses: likewise, always forget your rememberall?... detail it here

Personality: standard and really the most important part of this

Appearance of boggart: what is your greatest fear?

Biography/ Notable Achievements: we have some great wizards and witches here. What makes you notable? Also what would make dumbledore trust you enough to bring you into the order
Lovely tenma :)

Just a note i intend the pokedex to work for all pokemon in the first 250 so bellossem would pop up.

Its only savo who has a sinnoh pokemon that gets the poopy stick. Hopefully that wont deflate poor Kaleo as much :)
definitely be interested in playing as Ms. Meadowes. if she is still available.


Very much so. Amazing thats enough for an ooc.

I am out today but will try and get something together on the bus down to London!

Thanks for everyones interest and patience!
@deathbringer Stina would be like, 200% down to go help you dominate a demon btw, if you want to have that as part of our history together


Sounds good to me! I wont lie I'm still sort of working out how I'm going to play Astraea as there is alot of conflict in her but I can definitely approve of us going off daemon hunting in our spare time

@deathbringer@Lovejoy aaaah people who want to win free of Varya MY CHAR APPROVES. She's just not sure about their chances. But her mother was one of them!!


Up the revolution! All I would say is astraea would not be vocal about this fact
Name: Mother Astraea

Age: 19

Height/Weight: 5ft 11, 140lbs

Race: Pure blood Lanostran

Appearance:

Astraea's body like her mind and past is full of conflict. Her facial features are marked only by a beauty spot on her right cheek. She looks pure and untainted, long silver blonde hair flowing to her shoulders but there is a hint of pride and arrogance in the strength of her brow.

The purity of her features clash horribly with her body which bears the bumps and scuffs of a lifetime training for war. Her fathers beatings were savage and relentless and she bears the marks of scars and breaks from years of training. Nevertheless through her survival her physique was moulded to be strong and lean allowing her to move and fight with a perfect mixture of pace and power.

Her eyes are deep emerald seeming to dance with each emotion like leaves on the wind.

Background:

... yet when the full might of the Varyan armies was revealed the Lady knew there was no hope of victory, only valiant and noble defeat. Her anger was terrible to behold for she knew that she was stronger than the Ravenous One yet she could not harm him. She knew her people could deal a crippling blow to the Ravenous one's forces but at the price of their complete annihilation.

She raged in her chambers for many days yet her love for her people was too strong and she made her sacrifice so we might live.

Remember her last words to us:
"The warrior does not retreat he redeploys"

Extract from The Lady's Sacrifice by Sofia


These final words are ingrained in Lanostran culture and are interpreted in different ways. Many took it as the Lady's instruction not to fight on but to survive and assimilate into Varyan culture, accepting the place in society her sacrifice bought. However there is an extra part to the text that was taken out in the reprinted versions that are now sold today.

"It is said that the fallen tears of those that watched our Lady surrender bloomed into flowers at their feet. They bloom to this day as a sign that our Lady still lives."

These words suggest a more literal inflection to the Lady's words and it is for this reason the text was quickly considered heretical. Copies were seized and destroyed yet many were saved and smuggled away to remain at the heart of the sect better known as The Lady's Anger (henceforth to be referred to as the sect).

They agreed upon assimilation but with eyes for seeding themselves through the Varyan hierarchy (particularly the military) and eventual revolution. Though this sect had strong support to begin with, when the anger and hurt of defeat was still burning brightly, it has begun to dwindle after two decades of propaganda, peace and prosperity.

Lanostrans eyes have been opened to new worlds and new cultures that are in many ways more inviting and inclusive than the closed military culture of the Lady. Intelligence and ambition is now regarded above pure strength and honour and, to the disgust of the sect, Lanostran's have even bred with filth from other countries. Members of the sect keep strictly to the old ways leaving them arrogant and prejudiced, isolating them further from the people they claim to represent. Nevertheless due to their rigid and incredibly effective training programme they remain the best soldiers with the Varyan Armies and as such rise to the top.

Nevertheless the sect is currently in a time of crisis. They have achieved their mission of infiltrating the upper echelons of Varyan society and are ready for revolution yet despite their best efforts they are loosing the people. Do they compromise their ideals and approach other cultures, accept half breeds and even pure filth into their midst in the aim of freeing the Lady or continue to hold true to their beliefs with no hope of anything beyond a violent but noble death.

Mother Astraea was born into two parents that were both strong supporters of The Lady's Anger and as such was raised believing the inferiority of other people and the need for revolution. Her parents trained her in the old ways to be a clinical warrior and as tradition dictates she was sent out on her journey into the wastelands to kill a daemon.

Unlike other children she feared her first kill remembering the pain and anguish she had felt when she had first cut a young boy with whom she was sparring. His howl was primal but his pain had almost crippled her and the beatings her father had imbued upon her for not pressing her advantage had done little to numb her fear.

With nothing but spear and shield she advanced into the wasteland. Silence and speed her best weapon yet the daemon had outfoxed her. It came at her from nowhere knocking her spear to the ground and only her speed and shield prevented her from taking a mortal wound. Even as they circled the daemon taking care to keep himself in front of her spear she felt a single emotion like the drumming of a heart.

HateHateHateHateHate

She had never felt the like of it. She had felt fear and anger, happiness and sadness but never pure mindless hate. It filled her with a strength she had never known and with no weapon she attacked. Her loathing spurred her forward the shield knocking his claw aside her foot crashing into the daemons flank driving it backwards towards the rocks. Then her spear was in her hand and even as the daemons back hit rock she threw.

This was the one kill she would never regret. She has μισώ (greek for hate) tatoo'd on her neck on the left hand side to remind her that where people hated she would always find the strength to fight back.

Personality:
If Astraea had been born into another family she would never have picked up a weapon. Her very ether glows with a warm empathy that moves her with great passions and emotions that are unsuited for the battlefield. Nevertheless she was born and raised a pureblood Lanostran and so had a weapon placed in her hand as soon as she was strong enough to hold one.

She was drilled not to feel yet she is an individual whose very ether breathes empathy.
She was drilled to cause pain, yet her ether is designed to heal.
She was drilled to hate when all she wanted was to love.

She weeps openly as she flows across the battlefield with a sinuous lethal grace and though she tells her fellow inquisitors she weeps for the joy of battle it is because the pain and death that comes with any conflict causes her such pain she feels her heart might break. She is a deeply conflicted individual as easy to love as she is to hate for though she is empathetic and kind at heart; her upbringing not only drilled her to be a disciplined and skilled warrior but also to harbour a scathing distaste for anyone not of pure Lanostran blood.

Talents/Ethereal Abilities:
Pureblood Lastronan: Lastronans are deadly warriors trained in combat from a young age. Astraea has been trained to kill unarmed and armed in one of the more brutal and effective military training regimes. She is a highly disciplined and skilled warrior imbued with a code of strength and honour that can also be her undoing. A match for almost all in straight combat underhand tactics are dismissed by her with scorn and derision.

Ether Empath: Astraea's natural ether bathes in her a warm glow, nevertheless it seems to crave the presence of others and burn strongest when they are feeling stronger emotions. Astraea can naturally sense and feel others moods as if they were her own.

Healer: Astraea was thought to be without an ethereal ability all through her life and it was the source of many beatings from her father who tried to push her empathetic ether down a destructive path. Her true talent was only revealed when she left her fathers instruction to enter the Red Seminary where her empathy was no longer suppressed and downtrodden but accepted and understood. It was discovered to her great suprise and joy that Astraea has the ability to heal the majority of wounds and she is working hard to improve that skill. It is in healing that her real personality seems to appear. Mid battle she will get the opportunity to repair some of the damage she does to the world and help her fellows and she takes it eagerly her tears drying up as she places her hand upon the wound embracing the opportunity to repair some of the damage she has caused.

Orator: Astraea is not only able to sense others emotions but also instil a little of her own through her words ( I must stress she can't make anyone do anything only feel what she is feeling).

This is a gift she has kept closely guarded due to her own religious confusion however it comes out particularly in her healing as a form of anaesthetic. As she heals the wound she feels such joy at being able to help that as she talks to the individual she pushes that sensation across numbing pain and giving the patient a similar sense of euphoria. She keeps the fact closely guarded and pretends it is part of the healing experience for fear of what it may lead too (a heretical inquisitor would not be treated kindly) Nevertheless this power can come across unintentionally when she is feeling particularly strong emotions.

Personal Seal: Astraea's official seal is a blue hand with an open palm where the white lifelines make up a trident. The hand is representative of her position as a healer and the trident her heritage.

@deathbringerpic is fine! And yes they can choose the tattoo. :)


perfect. That's edited. Believe she is ready for another read through from you then :)
@deathbringerGoddamn! I knew you wouldn't disappoint! What an awesome character! I think it all fits, though there are only a few minuscule things I'd like you to change.

I thought it'd be interesting if all Lanostrans eyes were bright green, like... pines reflecting off ice? Sort of. I made Lady Lanostre's power a bright emerald color in the bit about the Black Glacier, so maybe this could be the color of the eyes of her people. If you'd rather her eyes be blue, then that's cool.

I love, love, love the idea about a secret Lanostran sect aiming to bring her back to power. I had an idea of doing something like that, so it's cool that you got in front of me on this. One thing though, it's been twenty years since Lanostre surrendered to Varya, so I'm not sure if the bit about "they are at a similar crossroads to the Lady's own quandary over 200 years ago" to be reflective of this, but yeah, it's only been 20 years since the Lanostran War.

The last thing is just a suggestion. I added the bit about the demons and how Lanostrans fight them as a kind of sport, so maybe youy can include a bit about how this affected Astraia as a child. Was she successful in hunting a demon? Does she have the title of "R'heon" and a cool tattoo? Let me know!

glad you like it!
green eyes is absolutely fine, edited, but would prefer not to amend the picture! She was a struggle to find in the first place. That ok?

I'm so glad. As soon as I read the history I just couldn't get the idea of a rebellion out of my head and it just rolled from there. Not sure which orifice I pulled 200 years from! I'll amend to 20 years and tone down the quandry bit at the end as 20 years is enough for people to be starting to change but still be pretty pissed and remember the Lady clearly.

you're damn right she's R'heon" can I ask does she choose the tattoo or is it a specific tatoo in a specific place?

Edited anyway let me know if you want any changes!

It went off a little bit and I make have taken some liberties, let me know if anything I've written doesn't fit it in with your idea of the story and I'll happily amend. It just sort of happened! I'm also a bit wary she may be power heavy so happy to tone back!

____________________________________________
Name: Mother Astraea

Age: 19

Height/Weight: 5ft 11, 140lbs

Race: Pure blood Lanostran

Appearance:

Astraea's body like her mind and past is full of conflict. Her facial features are marked only by a beauty spot on her right cheek. She looks pure and untainted, long silver blonde hair flowing to her shoulders but there is a hint of pride and arrogance in the strength of her brow.

The purity of her features clash horribly with her body which bears the scars and scuffs of a lifetime training for war. Her fathers beatings were savage and relentless and she bears the marks of scars and breaks from years of training. Nevertheless through her survival her physique was moulded to be strong and lean allowing her to move and fight with a perfect mixture of pace and power.

Her eyes are deep emerald seeming to dance with each emotion like leaves on the wind.

Background:

... yet when the full might of the Varyan armies was revealed the Lady knew there was no hope of victory, only valiant and noble defeat. Her anger was terrible to behold for she knew that she was stronger than the Ravenous One yet she could not harm him. She knew her people could deal a crippling blow to the Ravenous one's forces but at the price of their complete annihilation.

She raged in her chambers for many days yet her love for her people was too strong and she made her sacrifice so we might live.

Remember her last words to us:
"The warrior does not retreat he redeploys"

Extract from The Lady's Sacrifice by Sofia


These final words are ingrained in Lanostran culture and are interpreted in different ways. Many took it as the Lady's instruction not to fight on but to survive and assimilate into Varyan culture, accepting the place in society her sacrifice bought. However there is an extra part to the text that was taken out in the reprinted versions that are now sold today.

"It is said that the fallen tears of those that watched our Lady surrender bloomed into flowers at their feet. They bloom to this day as a sign that our Lady still lives."

These words suggest a more literal inflection to the Lady's words and it is for this reason the text was quickly considered heretical. Copies were seized and destroyed yet many were saved and smuggled away to remain at the heart of the sect better known as The Lady's Anger (henceforth to be referred to as the sect).

They agreed upon assimilation but with eyes for seeding themselves through the Varyan hierarchy (particularly the military) and eventual revolution. Though this sect had strong support to begin with, when the anger and hurt of defeat was still burning brightly, it has begun to dwindle after two decades of propaganda, peace and prosperity.

Lanostrans eyes have been opened to new worlds and new cultures that are in many ways more inviting and inclusive than the closed military culture of the Lady. Intelligence and ambition is now regarded above pure strength and honour and, to the disgust of the sect, Lanostran's have even bred with filth from other countries. Members of the sect keep strictly to the old ways leaving them arrogant and prejudiced, isolating them further from the people they claim to represent. Nevertheless due to their rigid and incredibly effective training programme they remain the best soldiers with the Varyan Armies and as such rise to the top.

Nevertheless the sect is currently in a time of crisis. They have achieved their mission of infiltrating the upper echelons of Varyan society and are ready for revolution yet despite their best efforts they are loosing the people. Do they compromise their ideals and approach other cultures, accept half breeds and even pure filth into their midst in the aim of freeing the Lady or continue to hold true to their beliefs with no hope of anything beyond a violent but noble death.

Mother Astraea was born into two parents that were both strong supporters of The Lady's Anger and as such was raised believing the inferiority of other people and the need for revolution. Her parents trained her in the old ways to be a clinical warrior and as tradition dictates she was sent out on her journey into the wastelands to kill a daemon.

Unlike other children she feared her first kill remembering the pain and anguish she had felt when she had first cut a young boy with whom she was sparring. His howl was primal but his pain had almost crippled her and the beatings her father had imbued upon her for not pressing her advantage had done little to numb her fear.

With nothing but spear and shield she advanced into the wasteland. Silence and speed her best weapon yet the daemon had outfoxed her. It came at her from nowhere knocking her spear to the ground and only her speed and shield prevented her from taking a mortal wound. Even as they circled the daemon taking care to keep himself in front of her spear she felt a single emotion like the drumming of a heart.

HateHateHateHateHate

She had never felt the like of it. She had felt fear and anger, happiness and sadness but never pure mindless hate. It filled her with a strength she had never known and with no weapon she attacked. Her loathing spurred her forward the shield knocking his claw aside her foot crashing into the daemons flank driving it backwards towards the rocks. Then her spear was in her hand and even as the daemons back hit rock she threw.

This was the one kill she would never regret. She has μισώ (greek for hate) tatoo'd on her neck on the left hand side to remind her that where people hated she would always find the strength to fight back.

Personality:
If Astraea had been born into another family she would never have picked up a weapon. Her very ether glows with a warm empathy that moves her with great passions and emotions that are unsuited for the battlefield. Nevertheless she was born and raised a pureblood Lanostran and so had a weapon placed in her hand as soon as she was strong enough to hold one.

She was drilled not to feel yet she is an individual whose very ether breathes empathy.
She was drilled to cause pain, yet her ether is designed to heal.
She was drilled to hate when all she wanted was to love.

She weeps openly as she flows across the battlefield with a sinuous lethal grace and though she tells her fellow inquisitors she weeps for the joy of battle it is because the pain and death that comes with any conflict causes her such pain she feels her heart might break. She is a deeply conflicted individual as easy to love as she is to hate for though she is empathetic and kind at heart; her upbringing not only drilled her to be a disciplined and skilled warrior but also to harbour a scathing distaste for anyone not of pure Lanostran blood.

Talents/Ethereal Abilities:
Pureblood Lastronan: Lastronans are deadly warriors trained in combat from a young age. Astraea has been trained to kill unarmed and armed in one of the more brutal and effective military training regimes. She is a highly disciplined and skilled warrior imbued with a code of strength and honour that can also be her undoing. A match for almost all in straight combat underhand tactics are dismissed by her with scorn and derision.

Ether Empath: Astraea's natural ether bathes in her a warm glow, nevertheless it seems to crave the presence of others and burn strongest when they are feeling stronger emotions. Astraea can naturally sense and feel others moods as if they were her own.

Healer: Astraea was thought to be without an ethereal ability all through her life and it was the source of many beatings from her father who tried to push her empathetic ether down a destructive path. Her true talent was only revealed when she left her fathers instruction to enter the Red Seminary where her empathy was no longer suppressed and downtrodden but accepted and understood. It was discovered to her great suprise and joy that Astraea has the ability to heal the majority of wounds and she is working hard to improve that skill. It is in healing that her real personality seems to appear. Mid battle she will get the opportunity to repair some of the damage she does to the world and help her fellows and she takes it eagerly her tears drying up as she places her hand upon the wound embracing the opportunity to repair some of the damage she has caused.

Orator: Astraea is not only able to sense others emotions but also instil a little of her own through her words ( I must stress she can't make anyone do anything only feel what she is feeling).

This is a gift she has kept closely guarded due to her own religious confusion however it comes out particularly in her healing as a form of anaesthetic. As she heals the wound she feels such joy at being able to help that as she talks to the individual she pushes that sensation across numbing pain and giving the patient a similar sense of euphoria. She keeps the fact closely guarded and pretends it is part of the healing experience for fear of what it may lead too (a heretical inquisitor would not be treated kindly) Nevertheless this power can come across unintentionally when she is feeling particularly strong emotions.

Personal Seal: Astraea's official seal is a blue hand with an open palm where the white lifelines make up a trident. The hand is representative of her position as a healer and the trident her heritage.

Character Relationships:

We already have someone to play:

Mundungus Fletcher
One of the Prewett Brothers
Marlene Mckinnon

and are just looking for one more person to begin an ooc!
‘Original Order of the Phoenix,' growled Moody. 'Found it last night when I was looking for my spare Invisibility Cloak, seeing as Podmore hasn't had the manners to return my best one.... Thought people might like to see it.'


Better to see it than live it!

The year is 1970 and Lord Voldemort has just proclaimed himself Dark Lord. In speeches that have reached all corners of the wizarding population he has promised to topple the established order. Muggles will be subjugated, squibs segregated and pure wizards will reign supreme.

No more hiding, no more secrecy.. merely bend the knee to Lord Voldemort and live as kings.

The ministry is officially at war but hampered by a cancerous network of spies within its midst, fear and distrust are an oozing canker infecting the wizarding population and stalling any resistance.

"Imagine that Voldemort's powerful now. You don't know who his supporters are, you don't know who's working for him and who isn't; you know he can control people so that they do terrible things without being able to stop themselves. You're scared for yourself, and your family, and your friends. Every week, news comes of more deaths, more disappearances, more torturing...the Ministry of Magic's in disarray, they don't know what to do, they're trying to keep everything hidden from the Muggles, but meanwhile, Muggles are dying too. Terror everywhere...panic...confusion...that's how it used to be.” Sirius Black

Yet from the darkness some fought back. After the latest and largest mass muggle killing(over 30 muggles killed with suspected giant involvement) the Order of the Phoenix was born.

They at least would fight back!

This rp will start with founding members of the Order of the Phoenix and detail their attempts to take the fight to Voldemort.

What I'm looking for


I’m looking for 4-7 people to take on the roles of some of the less defined characters from the original order of the Phoenix
I’m looking for high casual writers
Post rate of once a week
General RP courtesy, be good to your fellow rpers, respect my role as the gm and lets have a great bit of fun building a story for ourselves

What I'm offering you

A chance to fill in some of the gaps in Rowling’s story.

It took 5 death eaters to kill Gideon and Fabian Prewett. How did they fight like heroes?
What did the order actually do in that first wizarding war?
Why did Dorcas Meadowes deserve the attention of Voldemort himself?
How did James and Lily defy Voldemort three times?

We know lots but we have an 11 year gap to fill until the rp will end with the fall of Voldemort. Please note I will not be accepting original characters but I do feel with the very little we know about characters like the Prewetts, the McKinnons and the Bones we can create semi original characters.

The characters I am looking for to begin with will be (at least 4 of):

Marlene McKinnon
Benjy Fenwick
Edgar Bones
Caradoc Dearborn
Gideon Prewett
Fabian Prewett
Dorcas Meadowes

If the rp goes well and we build a solid foundation around the above characters I may look to expand into more established characters. Please note as Lily and James did not join the order til around 1978 I will not be recruiting for them (Lupin, Sirius, Wormtail and Frank/ Alice Longbottom) until later. My feelings are that as all of the above will most definitely kick the bucket at some point those who have helped to build the story will get first choices on further characters.

Any questions don’t hesitate to get in touch!
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