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Ahh, my apologies Roxas, I can tweak his history, if you want, to make note that, prior to the armed takeover, since he was still part of the Empires forces at that point, most of his experience was with fighting monsters or working through the courts as a lower ranked Knight prior to the takeovers beginning.
Alright, here is my CS then!

Starting on my CS right now, looking forward to this one, sure as sure.
Alright, I apologize for my delay, I was pretty much told I need to be packed up and ready to move by tomorrow (not too surprising for a Navy life), so I've been busy packing. I might disappear for a day or two beyond tomorrow, but hopefully not. Thank you for jumping in Sep, where you have, and let me try to address what I missed so far.

@Renny: I'll approve you for now, but like I've said to others, please don't start abusing this or such things along those lines.

@NarcissisticPotato: I'll be honest, I was wondering if someone would try to infiltrate one side or another. As long as you have a reasonable idea as to how she was able to sneak her way in to a position that would be useful for gathering information, your approved as well.
@Heat: Your approved, I'll get you added to the Sith Section then when I have a chance.
@drallinix: Alright, I'll approve him for now, but don't abuse his equipment and such in comparison for others. And be very careful with loyalties and actions, considering they might have grave consequences.

@LordZell: Starting off, considering they start in the employ of either side, no. And if they were not in their employ, they would have no real reason to care about the events going on.
@Sep: Fair enough, I just try to moderate how much of a hardass I am, no sense blowing it out of proportion.

@vietmyke: I just finished doing that, actually. But thank you for the reminder.
@Katabasis: The Sith are indeed undermanned at the moment, and both you and your friend would be more than welcome to join.

@drallinix: I didn't mean for you to completely scrap it, if you didn't want to, but I appreciate your cooperation regardless.
@Renny: I'm denying you for now, although like I said to Apollo before, your welcome to make some edits to fix some of the stuff I'm have issue with.

First off, what side is he on? Like I said before, it will be more beneficial for all parties involved for the characters to have some allegiance to one side, or the other, in the terms of this RP. Second off, and probably one of the biggest reasons, is the amount of different force powers he has access to for a 16 year old with only sporadic training from his father over the span of 14 years from one individual, and no other formal training what so ever. Those are my two major problems with your sheet, address those and we'll see about getting you accepted then.

@drallinix: I apologize for missing yours, that was my mistake. I am going to deny it for the moment, however, for a few reasons.

Alright, at 19 years old, he is a "master of the lightsaber" while being effective at djem so, soresu, and juyo. Coupled with a nondescript extreme power in the force, which apparently can be up to ripping small starships apart, he seems just a bit more overpowered then I would expect from just a 19 year old who never fully finished his training. And there are quite a few problems with your bio, going from there. The Sith Empire formally fell 1100 Years prior to the events in this RP, so your mother dying when the Empire falling is kind of out of place in the timeline of things. You also didn't really meet the 2-3 paragraphs I asked for as well. Just putting it into a bunch of fragmented, shortened sentences doesn't really mean anything. Like I said to Renny, patch up this stuff and we'll see about getting you accepted then

And I apologize to any and all if I come across as a hardass, I just don't want to see someone, without a reasonable justification or background for it, be able to utterly destroy all other parties involved. Combat, while present, won't be the whole aspect of the RP. A big thing to keep in mind is age versus experience, a 22 year old will be far less trained and experienced then, say, someone over 300 years old (Yes, I am referencing two other characters in the RP, who are good examples of what to do in this case). Are there exceptions, yes, rarely, but please try to keep that within reason.
You have my interest.
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