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A Certain Magical/Scientific Index/Railgun - Judgment Time

I'm a big To aru tard. I know all about the series, and the novels itself.
Add me on discord. Indra #7117

Since I'm back in the RP world, I'll play along and see. Considering this is fresh then yeah, much easier to work with.

A Certain Eucatastrophic Apocrypha (Index/Railgun Roleplay)

I'm interested and planning to create an Ice Esper too. Not sure if one is enough lol but hey I, Indra and his greatest fetish regarding icy stuff.

But something tells me, my idea seemed to be taken. I thought Refractofrost which I intended to work like Kinuhata's Offense Armor but freezes things instead.

@Breo Tell me~ No offense tho, if Freeze Matrix works the same/similar etc. If that's how it works.

I may create something different instead.

Where Heroes Are Made

Hmm... I'm pullin' up for an ice magic, and hopefully it would benefit you for some world building like Eskimo equivalent of people etc.

Where Heroes Are Made

I can go for a student

S: TCD [cancelled]

I figured I post what I can finish on my reserved spot. I'm still in.

Kakumei

Thanks guys.

Kakumei

Arata

So I decided to post the WIP because I realized if I didn't post the WIP I'd never work on the last bit I need to finish.

Anyway this WIP was brought to you by DJ Khaled:

100% Concentrated Early 2000s Naruto OC

“You need to chill out.”

Personal Dossier

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_Name

Uchiha Arata

_Age

13

_Rank

Academy Student

_Origin

Konohagakure

_{Chakra Nature}

Fire

Characterization

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_{Physical Description}

As one might expect of a pure-blooded Uchiha, Arata is possessed of the traits typically associated with his kin. He has short black hair with centre-parted bangs; he is lean, fair-skinned and dark-eyed; and he has a somewhat boyish, somewhat feminine facial structure. Indeed, from afar he is little more than an unremarkable example of the Uchiha Clan. Upon closer inspection however, there are a few key features that serve to distinguish him from the rest.

The most significant of these is assuredly his presence. Arata is a stereotype associated with the basic demeanor of an Uchiha. He is not imposing, he is not pompous, and he is certainly far from intense. His height is only an unremarkable 148cm tall, he carries himself like a low-born slacker, and his eyes lack the same glint of ambition that shows in his family's. Further differences tend to be more subtle, like waviness of his hair and the shape of his eyebrows.

Coming from a traditional clan, it might be natural to suppose he dresses traditionally, but Arata prefers modern styles to the wide-collared garments his clan members keep buying for him. He especially likes jackets, sweaters and related outerwear for their combination of functionality and style.

_Personality

The identity of Uchiha Arata has largely been shaped by a lifelong struggle against the external forces trying to control him. With little opportunity to define himself independently growing up, he has instead chosen to define himself in relation to how others define him. As a result, his personality is fundamentally more emotionally and socially reactive than it is proactive. He is determined, capable of picking up on social cues others might miss and always willing to call out others on their shit; at the same time, he is passive-aggressive, incapable of carrying a conversation well, and generally lacking in a sense of ambition. He is very much type of person who can tell you everything he doesn't want, but will greatly struggle when trying to express what it is that he desires beyond that. Naturally he tends to internalize rather than externalize.

Though he is no longer afraid of his father and the clan elders, Arata's upbringing has lead to a disillusionment with the idea of the benevolence of tradition and deference to authority that old-blood shinobi clans often cite. That said, he is still a product of that system regardless of the fact that he chooses to defy it. Even if he often disdains those who uphold tradition as gospel, it's clear he doesn't really know how to fix it in a cohesive and comprehensive manner. He tends towards modernity not because it is the best way, but because it's the only clear other way as far as he's knows.

Much of Arata's reputation is built on the existing stereotypes regarding the Uchiha and the various misconceptions that arise from his status. He's regarded as very much an "Uchiha genius"-type of Uchiha. That is to say, he's skilled without working for it and generally unapproachable by nature. While it's not quite an accurate assessment, it isn't without its foundation in truth. His social life is practically nonexistent and he isn't a very outgoing person in the first place; it takes a certain persistence that many lack to maintain a friendship with him, and even then there's not really a sweet side to unearth. He spends most of his time in class slacking off despite being extremely good at the whole shinobi thing, and the way he talks can rub people the wrong way.

In that respect, it's easy to see how he fits the stereotype. However, Arata doesn't shun socialization and he certainly puts in the work behind the scenes to earn his power. The latter is something that's a source of endless frustration for Arata, and one he knows he can't push for correcting or subverting. But the thing that frustrates him the most is when people see him as a title more than a person. All his life his success has been treated as something to further someone else's ambitions, even many of his peers are not exempt from this in the way they see him as something to surpass. It's essentially killed his reverence for reputation and accolades, as well as his drive to achieve for the sake of achieving.

But even with all the reasons in the world not to, Arata still continues on the path of the shinobi. Whether he finds what he's looking for remains to be seen.

_{Personal History}

Uchiha Arata is the fourth child to result from the political marriage between Uchiha Satoru, the Junidaime Hokage, and Uchiha Mio, the heiress apparent to the Uchiha Clan. Of his siblings, he is the only one to be considered a viable heir to the clan, the only one to receive personal training from their father, and the only one to be born with the necessary aptitude to unlock the marque dojutsu of the clan. These facts are not unrelated; Arata is not simply the fourth child, but also the fourth and final iteration of Uchiha Satoru's plan to groom a worthy successor.

From that statement alone, one can surmise that the type of family dynamic Arata grew up with was not a particularly idyllic one. Indeed, many of his traumas may have been mitigated or even eliminated if the family had developed a stronger sense of solidarity to challenge their patriarch’s malignant influence. Instead, Arata was surrounded by siblings that pitied him at best and resented him at worst, a battered mother consumed by self-loathing, and a father who saw his family only as a means to increase his own prestige. The clan elders were of no help either; like Satoru, they saw themselves as hard men making a hard decision for the sake of their clan’s prosperity, and so the family would be resigned to suffering in silence.

Much like his siblings, Arata would be prepared for the life of a shinobi at an inordinately young age. Unlike them, his regimen would be far more intensive because he was his father's last shot at a "useful" child. And considering the regimen his siblings grew up with was quite intensive in the first place, Arata did not have much in the way of respite. Receiving personal training from the Hokage is many a shinobi's dream, but it was more traumatic than it was enlightening for the young Uchiha--even if one cannot deny that it successfully achieved its intent. He would be pushed past his physical, mental, and spiritual limits on a daily basis; refusal to continue would be corrected by means of force, as tended to be the case with most things in the household.

Unused to being pushed so hard, it's no surprise that a younger Arata would quickly begin to crack under the pressure. Afraid of his father and unacknowledged by his siblings, he would turn to his mother for the emotional support he needed to carry him through. However she was as much a victim as he was, and eventually Arata was forced to face the reality that if she kept "making him soft-hearted" she would get hurt. Without anyone to go to, Arata would eventually be pushed to run from home in an attempt to escape his family. Many of these attempts ended up with him quickly being located by his ex-ANBU father, but during his seventeenth attempt, the routine changed slightly.

At some point, he had crossed into the hunting grounds of the Senju Clan, and midway into a well-deserved nap, he was woken up by the two daughters of the Senju Clan head. After a highly sanitized explanation of what exactly he was doing in their territory, Arata was brought to the main household and subjected to an awkward few hours of interaction with the family of Senju Ohtarama. Despite being clearly out of his element in such a classically domestic household, he wasn't treated as an unwelcome presence, and his clan's historic rivals were quite accommodating. Of course, he was found by his father and forced to return home, but it was during this brief time that Arata would lay the foundations of a friendship with the youngest of Ohtarama's daughters that would prove to last.

At the age of eight, Arata unlocked the Sharingan. Though he was praised as a genius for the feat, it was no (un)fortunate turn of fate or feat of personal genius that forced the awakening of his eyes. Rather, it the product of a designed emotional response years in the making. From the beginning, Uchiha Satoru had deemed the extended influence of his wife on his successor to be a danger to his plan, but even he was shrewd enough to see the potential benefit of it. Opting to kill two birds with one stone, Satoru would allow Arata to emotionally fetter himself to his mother before enacting his plot to irreparably damage her credibility. In theory, the resulting emotional trauma would activate his son's kekkei genkai, and as we know, it worked perfectly. Arata's training would ramp up from this point in an effort to acquire rapid mastery of his Sharingan.

But as dark as his home life is, Arata's student life is about as relaxed as can be. Whether out of sympathy or indifference, the academy instructor for their class, his older brother, would allow him to slack off during lectures. Of course this hasn't helped his public image in the least, but snide remarks from his peers are nothing compared to the opportunity for a solid period of rest. With a poor reputation and even poorer charm, Arata is definitely lacking socially. Fortunately, he's mostly content to follow around his best friend. Although depending on who you ask, it's the other way around. Academically, his poor in class behavior has been far more than compensated for by the stringent training regimen he endures daily. While intentionally sabotaging his performance would be a good way to spite his father, Arata hasn't done so simply because certain people would get mad at him for it and that would be very inconvenient.

_{Character Development & Conceptualization}

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Attributes

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_{Character Focus & Skillset}

Sharingan
While it is no secret that Arata possesses the fully-matured manifestation of his clan's dojutsu, the number of people who have seen him use it can be counted on a single hand. Some consider his refusal a matter of egoism or secrecy, but it is not an honor reserved for worthy opponents or a trump card to fight for one's ninja way. Instead it's fundamentally about what he believes his eyes represent, namely everything wrong with the Uchiha Clan. Until he finally comes to terms with his family, his past and his place in this world, he might as well not have a Sharingan in the first place.

Uchiha Eugenics
Refined to a razor edge by centuries of strictly-enforced intrafamilial breeding, the Uchiha have accrued infamy throughout the shinobi world for the genetic advantages of their bloodline. The Sharingan is by far the most iconic of these, but there are other, far more universal boons that their pedigree bestows. The blood grants them chakra of the utmost quality and bodies that boast power and coordination in equal parts. With such a compatibility with combat, there is no question that the members of the Uchiha Clan are born and bred for the life of a shinobi. Arata does not stray from this universal truth--in fact, his training has almost definitely enhanced these natural talents--but the prodigiousness he demonstrates is no product of bloodline alone. Not many care to make the distinction, however.

Uchiha Style Ninja Arts
The Uchiha's infamy as the premier warrior clan of Konohagakure tends to center around their ability to coopt the techniques of others, but an oft forgotten fact is that they have developed and passed down techniques of their own. The vast majority of these techniques are founded in bukijutsu, but there exists a number of techniques that fall under purely chakra-based disciplines, such as Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique. As is the case with standard ninja arts, common practice is to develop a wide baseline and specialize from there; so it should come as very little surprise that Arata has developed a strong foundation in the many subsets of the style. Worth noting is that his tool specialties are swords and shuriken, and that he tends to use shuriken as the primary weapon rather than the sword, which serves as a sidearm.

Genjutsu Expertise
Of the major shinobi disciplines, Arata exhibits the greatest compatibility with genjutsu. Despite it being the field he's been trained in the least as a result of his father’s skillset, the chakra control and intellectual capabilities Arata has cultivated through his training more than satisfy the necessary entry requirements, and more than any other skill, it is his proficiency in genjutsu that makes him a useful addition to any team. He prefers more immediately useful illusions that can be fired off the cuff over subtle, long-term ones meant to slowly drive others to insanity or subjugation, but this speaks more to his personality than his skill.

Combat Experience
Uchiha Arata has about eight years' experience training under a man with very few scruples and quite frankly obscene firepower. Although undoubtedly traumatized by the experience, one can hardly deny that it's been beneficial in cultivating good habits for a shinobi to have--even if peacetime is slowly eroding the necessity for some of them. His base observational capacity and composure under all sorts of stress are considered top-notch by his teachers, and while some of his strategies could be better thought out, it's no question that he's good at thinking of them quickly. However as an unfortunate byproduct of solo training, he has very little experience working with a team. When taken into account with his social failings, Arata is rightfully considered to be a poor leadership candidate, even if he is an excellent shinobi otherwise.

Jutsu List

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_{S Rank}

N/A

_{A Rank}

N/A

_{B Rank}

N/A

_{C Rank}

Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Uchiha Style: Dance of the Sun Halo
Uchiha Style: I'll Think of Something Chuuni Later

_{D Rank}

Genjutsu Binding
Manipulated Shuriken Techniques
Uchiha One Sword Style Kenjutsu Techniques

_{E Rank}

Academy Techniques

_{Custom Techniques}

Uchiha Style: ITOSCL

Classification
Bukijutsu, Chakra Flow, Genjutsu

Nature
Yin Release

Rank
C

Class
Supplementary

Range
All Ranges

Hand Seals
N/A

Description
A genjutsu technique that is prepared by imbuing shinobi tools with Yin Release chakra and triggered when the opponent perceives the incoming weapon attack.

The resulting illusion is one that alters the properties and parameters of the attack to reduce the enemy's ability to evade. This includes things like the trajectory of shuriken attacks, the target of a sword strike, the approach of a charge, and so on. Being struck by the illusion inflicts pain that is part of the illusion. The illusion automatically ends when the imbued chakra is exerted, or when the real attack inflicts pain.

At advanced levels, the illusion can fabricate the effect of secondary attributes, such as lightning or fire chakra flow.

Uchiha One Sword Style Kenjutsu Techniques

Classification
Fighting Style, Kenjutsu

Nature
N/A

Rank
D

Class
Offensive, Defensive

Range
Close-Mid Range

Hand Seals
N/A

Description
A sword style characterized by the use of defensive movements and unorthodox bladework to create openings for a decisive attack.

Common among techniques of this style are grip alternation, quick draws and rapid footwork, as well as the use of the sword as a tool to transition into other fighting styles and other maneuvers normal swordsmen would balk at. As such, it shouldn't be called a swordsman's style so much as an assassin's.

At advanced levels, the use of the Sharingan is required to execute techniques with complete efficacy.

[Here is where I would put techniques but I'd need to think of chuuni names for all of them]

@Grey

Kakumei

Alright. I am dropping some reviews here in my own accord but let's proceed.
@FourthKing

Shikkaru's sheet

Finished, cleaned it up. (plz let me know there are any spelling errors they will drive me crazy)

Nara Shikkaru

“This'll be interesting...”

Personal Dossier

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_Name

Nara Shikkaru

_Age

13

_Clan|Rank

Nara; Academy Student

_Origin

Konohagakure

_{Chakra Nature}

Yin | Wind (not discovered)

Characterization

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_{Physical Description}

Standing at 165cm and weighing around 56kg, Shikkaru's physique has the potential to turn into a solid figure as he grows. At the moment, he boasts more lean muscle and gangly limbs than anything else. With his runner's frame, Shikkaru is built for speed and stamina more than brute strength. Shikkaru's appearance fails to conform to the Nara stereotype, something he's quite content with. Instead of the classic spiky black hair pulled into a tail, Shikkaru keeps his hair short and untamed, as well as dyed blond in splotches. The hairstyle led to his siblings jokingly calling him "Skunk." Instead of only piercing his earlobes, he pierced the cartillage in his left ear as well. Shikkaru's softer facial features contrast his sharp jaw and flat chin. His long eyelashes frame large, expressive amber eyes, and his petite nose creates a youthful look. Shikkaru's sense of fashion is nothing exquisite, and tends to be geared towards simplicity and comfortability. Depending on the weather, Shikkaru will wear anything from long sleeved shirts, to tank tops, to hoodies; and his preferred pant styles are joggers. His tool pouches are all positioned in an unorthodox manner, allowing him to use his Shadow Imitation Technique to its fullest potential.

_{Characterization and Prestige}

Shikkaru is the anomaly of the Nara clan. Being the antithesis of the Nara stereotype, Shikkaru deviates from the stoic, analytical persona that people expect him to embody. Shikkaru is a social, passionate, and ambitious youth who's sharp intellect is developed beyond most kids his age. People are normally caught off guard by Shikka's keenness because at first glance he comes off as a normal, energetic teenager. Shikkaru's smarts are more dynamic, flowing, and creative than average. He's a quick thinker who follows his gut, preferring to adhere to his instincts more than any rigid plan. While this led to academic success, it sometimes causes conflict when working in teams. He isn't arrogant or over confident (at least that's what he thinks, you never know), he just has a hard time taking things slow when they could be done quicker.

In social situations, Shikkaru tends to thrive. He can be quite the conversationalist due to his budding wit and odd sense of humor. Being the amicable guy that he is, Shikkaru does his best to be kind to everyone he meets. He's quite open-minded when it comes to meeting new people or encountering new situations. Being a part of a young, increasingly modern generation has raised him to be slightly naïve regarding the older ideals of what a shinobi is. This doesn't hamper his excitement of becoming a ninja, if anything, it just sparks his curiosity to learn the old ways and combine them with his modern approach. Curiosity is one of Shikkaru's defining traits. It's like an itch he can't scratch, he's always getting into things or asking questions. This makes him a great listener but can lead to trouble, especially in a group that's built upon discipline. Shikkaru has a love for academia as well, in fact, after he does his time as a shinobi, Shikka has plans to teach at the academy, or maybe even teach genin. But that's far, far into the future. For now, Shikkaru just wants to do his best at becoming a shinobi and learn as many new things as possible.

_{Personal History}

Nara Shikkaru was born and raised in Kohonagakure under two loving parents. Being the youngest of three siblings, Shikkaru has plenty of role-models to look up to. His father works with Kohona's Intelligence Division, and his mother works at a restaurant in town. His older brother is an Anbu Black Ops and is currently not in Kohona, while his older sister is a teacher. Shikka loves his family, but if he were to pick favorites it would be his sister. She's the one who turned him into the energetic little book worm that he is. Shikkaru still vividly remembers his sister introducing him to Shogi, and recommending books for him to read. He still thinks of her almost like a second mother, though his mom is pretty cool too.

Shikkaru's father was the one to introduce him to the world of shinobi. Immediately, Shikka's curiosity grabbed hold and he was hooked right from the start. And so, his life became a mixture of studying and sparring. Training to fight with his father was an amazing bonding experience, and the occasional impromptu "take your son to work day" showed Shikkaru a whole separate world that he ached to be a part of. His ambition was stoked like a hot fire and he began to study in earnest.

During his days at the academy, Shikkaru began to realize he was actually quite intelligent, it showed in his shinobi tactics and academic records. He did his best to be kind to everyone and make as many friends as possible. He figured that he'd be working with most of them in the future, might as well get acquainted as soon as possible. Even if he didn't particularly like someone, he was mature about it, and chose to not let his irritation or frustration get the best of him. Obviously, he wasn't perfect at that, but it's the thought that counts right? Shikkaru is still curious about the future though, he notices how the older people seem to scorn this new, more modern generation. He's curious about why they dislike this shift in culture so much. It's one thing to read a book on history or hear an oral retelling of it, and it's a whole other thing to have actually lived through that history. Shikka just figures that the times are changing and there is nothing he can do about it, might as well roll with the punches and forge his own path. At the end of the day, he only has one life to live. He plans on living it to the fullest.

_{Character Development & Conceptualization}

I was interested in seeing what a motivated Nara would look like. I also didn't want to create some crazy analyst who has to think 200 steps ahead of everyone else before doing anything. I think I hit a good mix that should be fun to play out. I think it'll be funny to see an energetic, witty Nara instead of the lazy genius stereotype we've seen before. I like that Shikkaru wants to be a teach in the future. It'll be intriguing to see if he continues to want to teach shinobi after becoming one and seeing how they live. I want to see how he interacts with the changing of the times, will his future dream job become more academia than ninja training? Will ninjas become purely ornamental? I can't wait to find out. As a side note, if no one makes an Akimichi I think I'd be interesting to see how the older generation reacts to not having an Ino-Shika-Cho combination if that's even a thing in this AU.

Talents

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Keen Intellect: Shikkaru is wildly bright for his age, despite how he may appear to those who don't pay attention. He's quick thinking and fast acting. Though his methods of displaying his intelligence outside of scholarly pursuits may be unorthodox, Shikkaru will surprise those who underestimate him.

Tanto User: Shikkaru's tanto is sheathed horizontally on his lower back, and it's his preferred blade of choice. He'll normally use this and forgo kunai in close quarters situations. It's placed the way it is so that he can draw it after successfully completing his Shadow Paralysis Jutsu. He's become quite the tanto combatant, preferring to strike with a blade than engage in taijutsu fights. He excels at this fighting style because he's quicker than he is strong.

Chakra Control: Shikka has above average chakra control, meaning he wastes less chakra while performing jutsu, though his chakra pool is only average, meaning he can't continuously pump out jutsu like a machine. He'll continue practicing his control in an attempt to increase the duration of his paralysis jutsu, which get weaker after continuous use.

Academics: Shikkaru finds most things he studies to be easy to follow and simple to memorize. He has outstanding test scores and he gets even more enthralled if he's studying something he's interested in.

Jutsu List & Tools

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_Tools
Tanto
Shuriken
Kunai
Wire String
Flash Bombs
Smoke Bombs
Explosive Tags

_{C Rank}

Shadow Imitation Field Technique

_{D Rank}

Shadow Imitation Technique

Shadow Barrier Technique

Shadow Barrier Technique
After performing the necessary hand seals, Shikkaru's shadow becomes solid and rises up from the ground, resembling a wall around Shikkaru's height. This barrier is an opaque black color, and can deflect projectiles or one D rank or lower ninjutsu technique before shattering. Once the barrier is erected, it becomes stationary, if Shikkaru wished to reposition the barrier, he would have to disperse the technique and perform the hand seals again.

_{E Rank}

Academy Techniques

@FourthKing

Review
I really like Shikkaru and you have given me nice ideas that concerns his growth therefore I commend you for your effort for making him.
I will PM you the stuff we need to talk about along with my Team because your character is well received by me. I have lesser things to say because everything I wanted to see is detailed. But here are the things I'd like to talk about ASAP, I'd like to utilize everything I have in mind:

Please make that restaurant a thing in-universe, make it popular! I like that idea. Other than the typical Ichiraku Ramen hangouts, I want you to make this thing a thing!

I like to talk about the sister too, I'm all ears. The fact that I want her to be in a relationship with Arata's older brother or some sort of whatever relationship. It doesn't have to be romantic! They could be Genin comrades too. Reason being, the sister has potential for a relevant NPC in-universe.

His dad.. I dunno what my Team would say but we'll PM you. The bro can wait because my mind is blank.

Post your sheet in the tab.

Your sheet is too neat, too clean and I like it.

Kakumei

Mu's sheet

Probably too strong, but this is what I have at the moment for a girl with genjutsu so powerful it kills.

Mu-onna "Mu" Kurama

Mu-onna "Mu" Kurama

Character Fields

Name|Aliases
Kurama, Mu-onna (Mu)
Age|Gender
11 / Female
Clan|Rank
Kurama Clan / Genin
Affiliations
Konohagakure
Characterization & Prestige
Nothing. That is the personality of Mu. A blank slate, repressed emotions to a degree where you can't even tell that she's human. Instead, she always smiles, even when she is threatened. Not out of a smug superiority, but because she has no idea how to react otherwise. This makes he come off to a majority in her age group as a holier than thou prodigy, who is above it all. In part, that is because she has been systematically abused by her family to repress all emotion. Instead, all emotion has become her alternate personality. A horrible little girl called Yama-Uba. Named for the horrible hag who would capture and raise children, before devouring them. In this state, she reaches a level of genjutsu that can be called truly deadly.
Yama is a wicked child. Pulling pranks, caring little for others, and being the kind of child that Mu never had the chance to be. She has wants, needs, and desires others to see her and adore her. All things that Mu does not. Yama tops all of this off with a selfish desire, that means she takes anything she wants. Those that try to object may be victims of a deadly genjutsu, so all who are aware of Yama fear her. Mu is loved, Yama-Uba is feared.

Origin Story
The Kurama clan speak of one child out of a thousand who possesses a genjutsu so powerful it bleeds into reality. A child of two faces, who is a vessel for a deity held inside their body. This is the legend of the clan, of the first leader of the Kurama clan. A terrible witch who had a daughter with the same trait, and a great grand daughter who could kill a kage on a whim. It is believed that this line died out, but sometimes, one does show up every few generations. In this generation, it is Mu. The Nothing Woman. The reincarnation of the Kurama founder, Yama.

When she was born, her parents faded away. It is believed that being brought into the world again as a baby was so traumatic that she used her genjutsu on her own parents. The genjutsu caused their bodies to fade away into dust, leaving only a baby in desperate need of a family to raise her. The Kurama family left her with the clan leader, her own grandmother, and a reincarnation of the founder's daughter. This elderly woman raised her, but trained her in only a few things. In truth, she crushed the child, training her only in the methods of being a weapon. A desire to hold her, mold her, and stifle any dangerous childish beliefs that may lead to doom.

Dressed in a heavy gown, to restrict who she is, she became a holy maiden of the Kurama clan. She had no other purpose than to be trained in the clan genjutsu, and to create a genjutsu strong enough to destroy all her clan enemies. So that the Kurama clan could rise to the Major clans. The clan turned her into a weapon, a vessel to hold the spirit of the reincarnated clan leader.

In school, she was rarely there. Instead, her family took over much of her education. Thus she was separated from the other clans, and rarely had communication with others her age. She was trained in genjutsu, but as a child often several adults had to be around her at any given time. Due in part to Mu's usage of the clan Kekkei Genkai. a genjutsu so powerful that what happens in the dream happens in real life.

The Hokage was worried that such a power, difficult to control, could lead to the deaths of many innocent people. But the Kurama clan insisted she become a shinobi, until finally she was allowed to be a shinobi. Something that may come to disaster.

Character Development & Conceptualization
Growing out of her shell is a major part of who Mu is. As her name comes from the "Nothing Woman" a japanese demon, she slowly has to become a full person. In part, it means she has to become her own person, free of the darker persona that represents that 'Nothing Woman.' Eventually overwhelming it, and become her own person that isn't bound by her own fractured personality.
A major area of growth is in making friends, and losing that pure maiden attitude that her family forced into her. She effectively has to experience the world in ways that aren't just dictated by go here, do this, kill that, go home.
As for Yama, there is eventually going to be a time to cycle her out. To eventually have the two personalities combine, and end the horrible wicked girl's games and desires.

Triple T's

Talents
- Writing: Mu likes to fashion herself a bit of a writer. It is the only way she can truly seek to express herself without allowing Yama to take control of her body.
- Genjutsu: The Kurama clan possesses a Kekkei Genkai. Where once every few generations, a child possesses genjutsu so strong, that if you die in the dream, you die in reality. This place her so far above the average shinobi that to place her among even prodigies could be considered an insult. Her own split personality is probably the only restraint on this. As her own personality while possessing genjutsu capable of stopping other shinobi, she is restrained from using the killing genjutsu of her other half.
- Kurama Clan Kekkei Genkai

Tools
Standard shinobi weapons, like wire, kunai, and rope. Mu also carries around a series of bells, often attached to the ends of kunai, so that they ring when they strike nearby objects.

Techniques
A Rank:

B Rank:

C Rank:
Eye-Contact Genjutsu
Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Demonic illusion: Shackling Stakes Technique (Yama only)

D Rank:
Bell Ring Genjutsu
Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique
Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique (Yama only)

E Rank:
Academy Techniques

Miscs

Appropriate Theme for Mu / Yama.

@Reflection

Here's my review:

In terms of personality you came clean because you followed the lore of the Kurama Clan, their dual personality shenanigans is creepy and it turned me off but it's alright because it followed the lore. You're my bro Ref, please do me a favor and redo your entire sheet and here are the things you need to understand; many people suffer because they lack knowledge and idiocies like that lead to bad circumstances. Let it sink in that as the GM of this RP, I don't give preferential treatment towards my friends in real life and even in RPs.

The things we need to correct and facts I need to lay is the lore of my universe.
1. Unlike the canon Naruto. This RP does not play with reincarnations, Jinchuriki, Rinnegan, Tenseigan. To quote on quote a friend of mine with my inserted emphasis:

Read with care

Masashi Kishimoto is a creative individual who has throughout the publication of Naruto created an extensive list of jutsu of varying levels of power that in a RP could be frankly bullshit. But unlike other Naruto RP’s I will be clear and say sometimes bullshit is okay— if it’s approvable bullshit with a merit to the story progression or character depth. A genin with abilities that can rival a Kage or Sage? No-no. But given the nuances of prodigies, fools, and kunoichi there is a lot of room for margin of suspension of belief. Even in the canon’s earliest (and most sane) moments, we had characters straight out of the academy who had skills/affinities/talents their teammates didn’t.

For example— Sasuke had a variety of techniques that were beyond “Academy Techniques” as he was not only talented but from a prominent clan with various affinities. Sakura had chakra control down so well she could walk up trees whereas her comrades couldn’t. Naruto utilized creative jutsu like his perverse twisting of the transformation technique. If we keep this in mind during character creation we can create clever and dynamic characters that make sense but even more than that are fun to interact with because everyone has their own niche.

How does this apply to “approvable bullshit”?

That’s a large question—but use your imagination in the character creation process, talk to me and your peers, and see what works and what doesn’t. Hell, if you’re a player I know really well that might not even be necessary. Academy Students should have all academy techniques (or presumption knowledge of them) listed in their E Rank hider. Beyond that they should have a total of 3 D Rank abilities, and 2 C Rank abilities(3 for prodigies). If you have a good argument for one more then make it in PM or notation; else wise this is fairly concrete. Presuming I accept chunin (and jonin) the scale would increase.

Non-canon (aka Custom Jutsu) should be written in with rough description of a fundamental definition, weakness, and general mechanic.

Inkarnate

2. If you have read point 1. Please proceed to this checkpoint and I will reiterate it again.

I simply do not accept reincarnations because it ruins the development of a character and to an extent those in their social circle.
Reincarnations are the most absurd trope I have encountered in media because all the hardships that a character would go through won't mean anything at all. Same goes for the vessel bullshit, it doesn't work in my universe because it also equates to reincarnation. Please let it sink in your mind for a second that Kakumei is a Naruto RP that patches up the wrong and go with the logical route.

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Backstory
Of all the crazy baloney here aside. Don't argue with me about a baby that can kill a Kage, I find it absurd and they won't be able to and I repeat don't argue with me about it because once everyone's sheets are accepted. My GM Team and I will answer everyone's favorite questions; power levels and history. The Kurama Clan in my rule of grounded; they possess a Genjutsu that affects the five senses. Period. Don't argue.

Moving forward, this will be your starting point and I have given you this consideration to think on how a Kurama's genjutsu abilities should be. I suggest that you be creative and create your own custom techniques. I trust you because not everyone have the balls to take on a challenging concept like illusions. If you are able to fix this problem, the rest would follow.

To tell you the truth, abilities more than often explains the character. However, I do not want the abilities to define the character. It is the character that should be defined.

Keep in mind that we are in a time of peace. There's little to no conflict, why? That is because Uchiha Satoru, the former Police Captain of the Military Police Force is the Hokage, he is the 12th Hokage. Satoru is the equivalent of President Rodrigo Duterte of the Philippines, he gets shit done and he wars on crime and makes sure that there is little to no crime. That is why Konoha in-universe is ranked as the most safest place to live because of Satoru's achievements. Furthermore. Satoru is the strongest man in the entire village. He shouldn't be worried about a little at all.

I believe and suggest that Mu has lesser control of the second personality which could be a bonus plot point to her backstory and how everyone in her social circle treated her. No reincarnation BS.

I don't have control in your backstory but please get rid of the reincarnation. I can suggest to put on a twist: Mu can be made to believe that she is the reincarnation etc.

Personality
It comes hand in hand with the backstory too. This is my take, please elaborate her personality more. I need you to make her more human but nevertheless I trust you in your ability to write a complex character. Honestly I never thought that the Kurama Clan replaced the Uchiha' batshit craziness in this universe, the fact that the Uchiha here are less emotional and not crazy. So good one.

In a nutshell. We need you to make a character, it doesn't have to be a complex one and I believe you can pull it off. I am motivating you to do better alright!

Conceptualization
In a nutshell. Mu is the typical Ojou-sama who hides her emotions and all. I see where this is going. Please proceed neatly. You got concept right. As for the second personality, it's okay. It's just that we don't accept reincarnations.

If you want a good example, go watch Elfen Lied or ask RaijinSlayer because he is the expert of batshit crazy OCs.

Triple T's
I am fine with it.

I need you to create custom Genjutsu techniques. I am gonna have to reject part of current techniques altogether because only Uchiha can use it.

My verdict
Polish your sheet and focus more on the character which follows up the backstory and techniques. I am here to motivate you and not demotivate you.

The fact that you're eyeing for a prodigy alerts me and pushes me to have high expectations. So do your best from here on out. The only thing I need you to do is re-do your sheet and come up with a better backstory, concrete personality and better techniques.

Kakumei

@Inkarnate Rei-chan can use it.