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@KoL Just wanted to let you know that I've been having difficulty with a strong enough internet connection to post. Hopefully, the situation has resolved itself.


Roomie lives!
You're going to set the thread on fire with those.


Then I guess it's about to get....



Lit.
I AM ALIVE! *FIRE WORKS!*



Sarah lightly yawned into her palm as she sat on the train heading for Saint Hirst Academy. The break had been far too short; she always adored spending time with her fun loving father. But she knew this was exactly where she needed to be to attain her goals. She blinked lazily as she looked around the filled train trying to spot anyone familiar. Though from where she sat most of her view of blocked by small groups of friends giggling among themselves.

Before she knew it the train faintly screeched to a halt. After just a moment the door opened and Sarah pushed herself to her feet; grabbing her bags off the ground with a faint grunt, the poor straps straining under the weight of her books. With a small heave she anchored the strap over her shoulder and off she went; swept up in the crowd filing slowly off the train. As the stream of people began to break apart back into their group of friends she carried forward alone. She was too tired to try and find anyone she knew though she forced the simple yet alluring smile on her naturally faint pink lips.

Getting to the ceremony hall she pushed herself through the double doors and found it nearly vacant. She went to one of the back rows and found herself a seat in a dark corner; wanting to give her eyes a bit of rest before the ceremonies began. She yawned again as she stuffed her bag under her seat before adjusting herself comfortably. She crossed her right leg over her left under her skirt before leaning her head back and closing her eyes. Absent mindedly she scratched her nails in small circles on the arm of the chair; her best effort to now tap annoyingly.
Hey everyone. I am going on a weekend vacation so I don't think I will be able to post during that time. So I am going to make a quick, BB post to get my character introduced and in the ceremony hall. If anyone wants to interact with her that's fine just know I won't be able to get a response to you til the earliest monday night; though it's not a guarantee cause I might be tired from the drive.

PS. I am totally on board for a Mystery club. :)
Given my characters personality i would love to have her on the council or, if we go that route, disciplinary council. Though given her age I would assume she only be a secretary or some lower on the rung position; leaving the more important roles within the council for the older students.
@Grape

That's a very good character sheet.

Simple and yet with enough details to be a nice read.

The only thing I can notice that's really out of place on it is the usage of 'electronic' as a term. That kind of tech isn't uspposed to exist in this time frame. If you change that to 'mechanical' she'll be 100% ok.


Thank you! ^-^ And can do!
𝓒π“ͺ𝓻π“ͺ𝓱 ℱ𝓲𝓷𝓷𝓲𝓰π“ͺ𝓷


5'6" | 115lbs

Name:
𝓒𝒢𝓇𝒢𝒽 ℱ𝒾𝓃𝓃𝒾𝑔𝒢𝓃.

Age:
ℱ𝒾𝒻𝓉𝑒𝑒𝓃.

Grade:
β„±π‘œπ“Šπ“‡π“‰π’½ π“Žπ‘’π’Άπ“‡ (4α΅€α΄΄)

Nationality:
πΏπ“Žπ“‡π’Ά - A small country bordering the Empire of Germania. Not known for much other than it's famous wine and lush farming lands.
Vast majority of its people are low income leaving a wide wage gap between the inhabitants; virtually no middle class.

Theme:
π’±π‘œπ’Ύπ’Έπ‘’ - Her voice and tone are very distinctive; almost melodic. Her speaking voice flows very elegantly as if she spends several hours a night practicing how to speak in such a way. Beyond that Sarah's singing voice is remarkable. She is often found humming beautiful melodies under her breath; especially while she is absent mindedly studying.


Bio:
𝓒arah grew up in the small country of πΏπ“Žπ“‡π’Ά on a small farm owned by her father. It was only her dad and herself; except the several animals of course. Her family was one of the many family living on near scraps. They made just enough to sustain themselves and not much more found its way into their pockets. Sarah didn't mind it too much, she had her animals and her singing; it gave her plenty of time to learn the few instruments she could get her hands on, not to mention minor tinkering to get junked mechanical keyboards operational once more.

Though she never felt bad for her father, he wouldn't like that, she always wanted to give him an easier life. This brought her an immense desire to give her all in everything she did. Not using short cuts or half-efforts; simple God honest effort. She applied to get a scholarship with Saint Hirst Academy. Through her hard work and maybe a bit of kind favor from the God's above she received the last offering. She was overcome with joy. Her hard work paid off and she would have the opportunity to come back to her father and take him away from that life. Give his life comfort her hadn't experienced yet in his long life.


Sample Post:
A sudden and loud snore broken Sarah's slumber; jolting up upright in her desk chair she had past out in the night prior. She blinked quickly to force away the blur of sleep and look around frantically for anyone who may have heard her snore. Seeing she was alone she relaxed in her chair, giving a big yawn and shake of the head. She rubbed her tired eyes before staring down at the mess of notes on her desk. Absent mindedly she adjusted them into a neat pile. With a sigh she finally submitted to the terrible fate of getting up and getting her day started. With a shove off the arms of her chair held held herself upright after a wobble.

She scuffed her feet into the bathroom and gave her face a splash of cold water. After a little mental pep talk she grabbed her make up and gave a little concealer under the eyes to hide the faint dark circles that had begun to form from sleepless nights. Happy with the results she began to fix her hair with a brush before immediately messing it up again with her fingers to give it style. Giving another quick look over she left her dorm room, grabbing her book bag on the way out; putting on her sweet smile as she past the door. A few people called out to her. She turned to them and gave them a simple wave and smile.

Down the hall she went to class, mentally running through the notes she read over the night before. Giving her seemingly effortless facade of happiness and cheer.


Extras:
She has a nervous tick. She often taps, hums, or bites her lip.
I would most definitely be interested :) I shall get to work on a character right away! Slice-of-life, mystery, possible fantasies checks all of my boxes! ^-^
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