A remaking of a RP that due to school I had left behind, but now am bringing new life to due to having a whole summer freed up.
Now, when playing this expect to have some sci-fi world building on the agenda. I supplied the planets, you supply the societies.
Players from the past iteration of this RP can freely jump back in even with the reorientation to more character oriented play.
In this RP, there is three player classes. Humans, Aliens and Custodians. Humans came to this system a thousand years earlier with just one spaceship while the Aliens are more their own things while Custodians are more part of the ruins than the other two.
The scaling to balance this is that with Custodians you have a individual with drones, albeit a powerful individual while humans can be states who share their tech base with other human societies. Aliens meanwhile can be whole civilizations.
I'll redesign the star system and am open to requests on how to modify the star system as a whole, though the Gabriel moon system should be left relatively untouched. This is just what we are starting with and we can modify things to better fit the vision you have going into this RP.
As the last men and women of Earth, it is our duty to make one last ditch effort to reach paradise... however long the journey.
Millennia ago the human species was rendered extinct.
A thousand years ago, our kind was born again.
From the wombs of machines born to live on a humid tropical world.
From the few thousand raised by machines came the future.
From the first tribe would develop every civilization that exists today.
Having to struggle in a humid environment filled with alien beings.
Worse still, some of them were smart and genuinely a danger to us.
As they would be monitored by custodians and attacks by the natives.
Still, our ancestors persisted despite the constant struggle.
And went on to build the foundations for billions to thrive once more.
And from those foundations we launched yet again into space.
To colonize other worlds and understand this strange place.
It was known the other worlds also had life.
Still, it was a massive shock to find intelligence still.
It became a fact of life, how common civilization is.
As even Solomon proves not as secure as it was initially assumed.
For we have been just scratching the crust when there is far more.
Layers upon layers of underground jungles on Solomon and sprawling ghost cities.
Some still maintained by mindless and mad custodians.
Overwhelming it all can become, the more you take it in.
The whole star system being touched in some way by the degenerative descendants.
Of the true creators of the worlds we live upon.
And every time we look we see swarms of activity.
Be it from the numerous ecosystems of wildlife across multiple worlds.
Giving rise alien civilizations primitive and advanced.
Or how every day a citizen sees specks of light drifting.
That weld the means to oblivion at the push of a button.
The flux and traffic of activity between the orbital cities we have set up.
Has created endless traffic around and between the worlds of Gabriel.
The scariest part is knowing how so few people can affect the lives of billions.
Across multiple civilizations, worlds and species.
Making the only certainty we have now being uncertainty.
May the first tribe save us all!
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Out of Character
The Grand Enigma or "The Grand Enigma of 82 Eridani" is a fusion of near-future technothriller and planetary romance and is the product of a desire to make a sci-fi RP that is neither sol or has a galaxy to worry about. For here there is only one star system, near future technology in the far future and lots of exotic locales to work with across multiple worlds.
In terms of applying for Grand Enigma, all you need to do is PM me your first IC post as a trial after making some lore and promise to work with other players in regards to collaborative world building while not doing the things on the list of NO. For ideas, check the list of YES which you can also add to by saying what you as a player want to have someone else take on the role of.
You are to pick a perspective to play from, with different guidelines for each perspective. If you want a hybrid perspective, you need to hold yourself accountable to multiple sets of guidelines. So if you want to be aliens from another star system for instance, you have similar guidelines to humans along with the alien guidelines.
But first you must understand the Eridani 82 system and the worlds you are to inhabit and figure out where you want to set up.
Overview of the Gabriel System
The Gabriel system is a binary planet system with three other smaller celestial bodies that have managed to eek out gravitational niches in what is a very peculiar arrangement of worlds.
One of the most notable aspects of the Gabriel system is that every world has complex biospheres with the potential for intelligent life.
It is this place that the center of most activity presides in this NRP and more detailed maps for Ezekiel, Solomon, Luke and Ezra will be of great use.
I strongly recommend sticking around this moon system for now, if only because Gabriel has the most hospitable worlds.
Distance is 0.8 Au from the parent star.
Gabriel
Gabriel is the largest world and the main planet of the Gabriel planetary system. It is a world comparable in size to Neptune host to global ocean that runs over a hundred kilometers deep. Gabriel is 13 times the mass of Earth and is for all intents and purposes an ice giant. However, it is a habitable ice giant with massive water-ice cloudscapes with huge pockets of breathable air. Gabriel has all matter of huge creatures dwelling from the clouds to the abyss.
Gabriel is host to a large range of resources, mainly exotic organic products that are naturally produced in huge quantities found nowhere else.
Stats Life: Complex Biosphere Biodiversity: Extreme Ruins: Moderate-low Drone Activity Level: 3 Gravity: 2.6 Gs Atmosphere: Extremely Thick Surface Temperature: 70-90 C Weather: Extremely Stormy. There are frequent lightning storms, turbulent wind systems and huge hurricanes
Luke
Luke is the innermost moon of the Gabriel system and is an icy moon with loose geographic activity and a salty subglacial ocean where aquatic life thrives in high quantities with internal heating from the rocky mantle to keep everything warm. Luke is less like a Europa and more like a Snowball Earth, though with much lees gravity and deeper seas in general with sunken mountains and trenches everywhere. Luke’s surface is barely habitable to humans, having Antarctica-like conditions with only a few pockets of semi-habitability around volcanic vents while the rest of the world is a frigid, endless ice filled place with little to no life to be seen.
Stats Life: Complex Biosphere Biodiversity: Very High Ruins: High Drone Activity Level: 2 Gravity: 0.24 Gs Atmosphere: Thin Surface Temperature: -30 C Weather: Howling Winds, ash storms and blizzards, heat seasons can cause the surface to be unstable Geology: Lots of hotspots and volcanic activity, geysers on the surface.
Solomon
Solomon is a earthlike world with heavily tropical environments. Besides dense jungles, there is also lots of wetlands, swamps and hilly regions, cliffs and salty flood plains along the coast. There are regions better suited for agriculture at the 'polar' regions, but most of the world is very humid and tropical in nature with some dry regions in the southern hemisphere. Solomon is bigger than Earth, at 1.3 times its mass and is a world that is rich in hidden infrastructure including various lost highways that connect the continents and lead to much deeper regions full of extremely hostile caverns & fauna.
Solomon is the world humans landed on and began their current age of humanity.
stats Life: Complex Biosphere Biodiversity: Extreme Ruins: Extreme Drone Activity Level: 5 Gravity: 1.2 G Atmosphere: Average Surface Temperature: 27 C Weather: Flooding is common Geology: Volcanoes, Sinkholes, Earth Wetness: High, there are oceans, rivers and seas with a frequent swelling of ocean levels that caused huge tidal floods in low lying areas.
Ezekiel
Ezekiel is a desert world of a size between Mars and Venus. It is highly xeric in nature at parts due to the large amounts of underground water that has eeked impressive cave systems throughout the moon. Ezekiel is a cold desert world however, and thus it snows on Ezekiel especially in the cold regions spotted about the world in highlands while the low lands tend to have warm, but sterile deserts. Ezekiel is host to a diverse range of life due to the many habitats and the many ecosystems isolated by the stretches of hostile, dry and freezing cold deserts.
stats Life: Complex Biosphere Biodiversity: Very High Ruins: High Drone Activity Level: 4 Gravity: 0.7 Gs Atmosphere: Average Surface Temperature: 15 C Weather: Howling Winds, Sandstorms, Tornados, Blizzards, Cold Snaps Geology: Volcanoes, Earthquakes, Mineral Rich Wetness: Medium, there is lots of water shored up underground
Ezra
Ezra is a world that is by far the smallest of the Gabriel system and uniquely is in close orbit of Ezekiel, not Gabriel. Ezra is a metallic world with extremely, extremely vertical cities that took advantage of the low gravity and all manner of still functioning, massive transit networks exist with many pockets of habitation zones still around even though the mechanisms that once protected the world from harsh radiation storms are long gone. The depths of Ezra tend to be extremely radioactive and it's hard to tell where the city ends and the ground begins with spires budding off spires and various pathways leading to all matter of places.
The original intent of Ezra is unknown, but the drones that inhabit Ezra in the swarm still are building ever slowly and they try to keep things tidy despite the relative lack of occupancy.
stats Life: Isolated to habitation zones Biodiversity: Low Ruins: Extreme – the whole world has been made into a abandoned city far more vertical and deep than anything seen in other parts of the star system. Drone Activity Level: 10 Gravity: 0.1 G Atmosphere: None Surface Temperature: -130 C Weather: Radiation Storms occur at times Geology: Moonquakes, Structural Collapses, Nuclear Plants sometimes destabilize and irradiate a region of the world Wetness: Water storage plants have drinkable water, but the drones tend to undersupply
Vulcan Belt There is a Vulcan belt with two tiny worlds, Romulus and Remus in tight orbit. A variety of fossilized O’Neil Cylinders, some still with functioning habitats exist in the region. At the star itself, there are solar faculties that are near the surface of the star of unknown purpose.
[Paradise - Dead, Strip-mined Super Earth Life: In the ancient O'Neil Cylinders in orbit of the world. Biodiversity: Low Ruins: Moderate, there is old mining sites and fossil O'neil cyllinders Drone Activity Level: 2 Gravity: 2.3 G Atmosphere: None Surface Temperature: 369 C Weather: Radiation Storms are extremely frequent Geology: Moonquakes, unstable grounds from mining cavities Wetness: N/A
Purgatory System
Distance:
[Purgatory - Acidic World with extremely, extremely dangerous life Life: Exotic, Complex Biodiversity: Very High Ruins: Unknown (it is unlikely they survived the hostile environment) Drone Activity Level: 1 Gravity: 1.7 G Atmosphere: Average density but very, very toxic to terran life Surface Temperature: 375 C Weather: Sulfuric Acid Rain, Aluminum Snow and Storms Geology: Flood Seasons, Long but weak earthquakes, toxic fumes, landslides Wetness: The world is mostly clay islands with a world spanning ocean of sulfuric acid
[Vigil - Barren world with lots of crystalline caves and a loose, spread out network of underground cities Life: Habitat area limited Biodiversity: Moderate, there is livable places among the ruins. Ruins: High, lots of underground city centers connected with a still functioning transit network. The architecture is radically different from Ezra. Drone Activity Level: 7 Gravity: 0.15 G Atmosphere: None Surface Temperature: -170 C Weather: Radiation storms Geology: Moon quakes and decaying infrastructure collapses Wetness: Water storage areas
Hell System Distance:
[Hell – A mysterious and extremely hostile world Life: ??? Biodiversity: ??? Ruins: ??? Drone Activity Level: ??? Gravity: 3.4 G (3.4 times that of earth, good luck landing!) Atmosphere: Extremely dense and suffocating. Have fun. Surface Temperature: 486 C Geology: ??? Weather: Superdense smog everywhere you Wetness: ???
[Plato – A barren, strip mined world filled with horded up resources Life: N/A - Unless you count machines as life. Biodiversity: N/A Ruins: Moderate, Various stashes of minerals, all heavily guarded in obscure areas and ruins of unknown purpose Drone Activity Level: 3 Gravity: 0.06 Gs Atmosphere: None Surface Temperature: 121 C Geology: Moon quakes are frequent, mineral rich Weather: None Wetness: None
[Midas – A gold filled world Life: ??? Biodiversity: ??? Ruins: ??? Drone Activity Level: 8 Gravity: 0.2 G Atmosphere: Extremely thin Surface Temperature: 140 C Geology: Mineral Rich, earthquakes and radiation storms Weather: weak dust storms Wetness: ???
Asteroid Belt An asteroid belt separates the inner worlds from the outer zone, with twelve dwarf planets of varied sizes and unknown properties given the months of the year as their names. Mining drones and drone hives are everywhere in the asteroid belt, but there is still quite a bit of resources to mine even if the asteroid belt clearly once was far more resource filled. Distance: 1.5-3.5 Au
Leviathan System
[Leviathan – A more conventional gas giant Life: None Biodiversity: None Ruins: Moderate, gas mines dote the world Drone Activity Level: 5 Gravity: 2.1 G Atmosphere: Very standard jovian atmosphere Surface Temperature: -103 C Geology: N/A Weather: Lightning storms, massive cyclones and extremely fast winds Wetness: ammonia-ice and water-ice clouds Distance: 4 Au
[Kraken – The innermost moon, hosts an abyssal ocean which may host life even this far out. Life: Complex Biodiversity: High Ruins: ??? Drone Activity Level: ??? Gravity: 0.45 G Atmosphere: Extremely Tenuous Surface Temperature: 77 C Geology: Cyrovulcanism and Radiation Storms from Leviathan’s Van Allen Belt Weather: Superdense smog everywhere you Wetness: It’s an ice world and thus extremely wet
[Charbydis – A mysterious and extremely hostile world Life: Exotic Biodiversity: Complex Biosphere Ruins: A Drone Activity Level: ??? Gravity: 1.4 G (3.4 times that of earth, good luck landing!) Atmosphere: Thick enough to obscure the surface Surface Temperature: 486 C Geology: Weather: Superdense smog everywhere you Wetness: ???
[Scylla – A mysterious and extremely hostile world Life: ??? Biodiversity: ??? Ruins: ??? Drone Activity Level: ??? Gravity: 3.4 G (3.4 times that of earth, good luck landing!) Atmosphere: Extremely dense and suffocating, but doesn’t extend that far up due to the extreme gravity Surface Temperature: 486 C Geology: ??? Weather: Superdense smog everywhere you Wetness: ???
Chroma System [Chroma – A earth sized, barren world Life: None Biodiversity: None Ruins: ??? Drone Activity Level: ??? Gravity: 3.4 G (3.4 times that of earth, good luck landing!) Atmosphere: Extremely dense and suffocating, but doesn’t extend that far up due to the extreme gravity Surface Temperature: 486 C Geology: ??? Weather: Superdense smog everywhere you Wetness: ???
[Tangerine – A world tinted with orange colors from tholins and nitrogen Life: Simple Biodiversity: Low Ruins: ??? Drone Activity Level: ??? Gravity: 3.4 G (3.4 times that of earth, good luck landing!) Atmosphere: Extremely dense and suffocating, but doesn’t extend that far up due to the extreme gravity Surface Temperature: 486 C Geology: ??? Weather: Superdense smog everywhere you Wetness: ???
[Verde – A world tinted greenish colors from alien flora that manages to survive Life: Simple (No natives) Biodiversity: Low Ruins: ??? Drone Activity Level: ??? Gravity: 0.3 G Atmosphere: Thin Surface Temperature: -84 C Geology: Low level activities, very calm world on the whole. Weather: Winds Wetness: Aquifers exist under the surface
[Amarillo – Sulfur rich, volcanic world like Io Life: ??? Biodiversity: ??? Ruins: ??? Drone Activity Level: ??? Gravity: 3.4 G (3.4 times that of earth, good luck landing!) Atmosphere: Extremely dense and suffocating, but doesn’t extend that far up due to the extreme gravity Surface Temperature: -107 C Geology: ??? Weather: Superdense smog everywhere you Wetness: ???
Visage & Mirage
[Mirage – A strange, distant world with extremely strange activity Life: Complex??? Biodiversity: ??? Ruins: Extreme??? Drone Activity level: 10??? Gravity: 1.02 G Atmosphere: ??? Surface Temperature: -233 C Geology: ??? Weather: ??? Wetness: Oceans???
[Visage – A large, dead world Life: ??? Biodiversity: ??? Ruins: ??? Drone Activity Level: ??? Gravity: 1.7 G Atmosphere: Thin Surface Temperature: -221 C Geology: Geological activity from Weather: None Wetness: Aquifers???
Beyond Various small worlds are known to exist further out from observation. What they hold is a total mystery.
Please stick to the Gabriel system for now! It has the only human habitable worlds and Solomon is the world humans colonized. As well, it has the most interesting worlds as all of them have complex life, ruins and are places intelligent natives to develop. Now dedicate to one of three perspectives and put your work within said perspective. You can make individuals from another perspective, but you cannot make civilizations or species from other perspectives once you make a civilization for one of the three perspectives.
The first perspective is the perspective of humans or other beings who came in just one spaceship and had to remake civilization from scratch using ancient knowledge over the last thousand years.
Such perspective is a colonial one in nature.
Once there was the first tribe after the rebirth of our species. But that unity lasted briefly, with a original sin that happened after a century of unity and a Arcadian existence that led to us spreading around the world in a dark period (which players define).
Space travel became possible once more around three centuries before the starting time or the year 700-800 Post Rebirth.
Humans landed on Solomon and thus should have most of their civilization on Solomon, with any societies on other worlds being younger and likely having some relationship with a Solomon based human society.
Human technology should be internally consistent, which means that all human players share a tech pool and that every time a human player adds a new human tech, every human faction is likely to also have the tech you want to give yourself (especially if it is common use). So for instance if you decide to have swarm missiles, other human factions also know how to make swarm missiles.
In general humans are more faction explicit and deal with each other in a symmetrical fashion (meaning humans have similar tech to each other in general) but have to deal with the other two perspectives asymmetrically. NPC human isolated colonies and such can be set up by other players to do whatever they want with. As a human you just need a faction sheet.
Terms
PR Post-Rebirth. We still use the gregorian calendar even though day cycles are far faster on Solomon. However, the sheer significance of our rebirth as a species means that a new year one separate from the birth of Jesus had to be established. The starting year is 1000 PR. (Times before PB are Before Rebirth, or BR)
The First Tribe The first several thousand or so humans raised by dumb machines who managed to be united as a species for the first hundred years. One of the few points in human history where the human species was at relative peace. Lots of good press from this time.
Original Sin The undetermined event that caused the first tribe to split for (player determined) reasons and lead to the dark period.
Dark Period The centuries of time in-between the launching of the first spaceship by 700-800 PB and the Original Sin. I leave what happened here to whoever opts to make a human civ as it is in this archaic period your civilization likely began its developments even if your civ has continuity with the first tribe.
Arcology A city that has its own internal farming and is self-contained instead of dependent on outside resources.
Your perspective as an alien is the most unique perspective, for to be an alien is to be of many potential perspectives all different from each other due to the limited knowledge you have. Your biology and life style dictates a way of life suited to the world you evolved on.
Aliens should be alien, not humanoid. You can have a biped, but it can't be humanoid.
When making an alien, focus on making an interesting alien form that is a believable product of the world you want to set up shop. Avoid trying to make something to win a game. Think in terms of asymmetrical advantages and disadvantages instead of trying to match the tech of the humans or custodians. Be creative about this, try to avoid high tech solutions to the human problem. For your focus is on having a cool culture, strange tech and on making them feel like aliens. Weird them to death!
When making an alien, keep the species app separate from the civilization app as all species made are public domain (unless there is some lore reason why it can't be).
For a species is treated as a parent to the civilization, and thus a species can have multiple civilization along with all manner of less developed groups (or your sapient may just be 100% tribal, in which case you don’t need a civilization app).
NPCs of your species can be assumed to exist somewhere on the planet you base your species on. Like with humans, should multiple players share a family of sapients who know each other well, technology is easier to share between them. Tech is harder to share between sapients with larger differences, though you can always trade anyways.
You can set up your sapients anywhere a complex biosphere is.
Sapients should avoid independently developing space travel unless there is a good reason for it.
In exchange, you get to have much higher populations and better adaptations to the world you set up shop on. You also get to define the environment, fauna, flora and so forth of the regions you want your alien to occupy much more than custodians or humans get to. So please be someone who likes making strange, horrifying creatures and landscaping if you seek to be an alien.
The third perspective is that of the custodians.
Custodians are ancient beings, related to the Creators who built the megastructures and systems that keep this star system from falling to total ruin. How you define your relationship to them is up to you and due to not being a primitive or interloper you can set up shop anywhere in the star system. Be warned that the rules regarding space travel still apply.
Custodians are shockingly diverse entities, be it strange synthetic things, monolithic drones with a scary voice, surreal eldritch beings or as some memetic fuzz entity it is up to the player. Custodians have access to the most advanced technology of all three perspectives and are much more individual oriented than the natives or the humans.
Which means as a custodian you are more or less expected to be a character with powerful capabilities. You can be a drone collective unified by a personality too. It's up to you!
When you are in the custodian perspective, you can direct the drones and define the tech of the drones in the region you want to have your custodian make their main basing area (nomadic custodians may have many smaller outposts). You also can be the dungeon master for the various megastructures and define what technological artifacts exist in them. In terms of technology, you can go high-tech more than the other two perspectives can. However, remain within the limits of the NO list. Custodians due to having a pervasive information gathering network have a lot of knowledge in regards to raw data about all the societies inhabiting the worlds of 82 Eridani. There is lots of spying going on in regards to the inhabitants of the Eridani System.
Custodians tend to be independent minded in nature and so often have their own ideas of the past. This is not helped by the periods of generational warfare that break out that distort the past.
Custodians can communicate with any species with ease by nature, they’ve done their homework and have had ages to understand everyone. They even can talk to the giant colonial gas bags that inhabit Gabriel.
Custodians are not invincible. Don’t make them so.
Terms
Primitives- The technologically primitive sapients
Interlopers- Humans and any sapients who come from another star system.
Creators- Vague term referring to the ancients who you have some connection to, however far back that connection is.
Generational Warfare- Custodians have generational wars from time to time, often fought by proxy and in the shadows. It is unknown how long these generational wars have gone thanks to the frequent revisionism the victors engage in, just that it has gone on for a long time.
The Comus
There is a Comus who will speak to you in private privates OOC who has an agenda. Even as a custodian you aren’t fully aware of who the Comus is. Disobeying the Comus has IC consequences, but it isn’t against the rules OOC-wise and if you want you can be a rogue custodian from the start, though this means you are an enemy of all other custodian players (maybe the primitives or interlopers may be of better company?)
The Comus is story important!
You can converse with the Comus in the PM, but remember that the Comus is an authority figure who benefits you in some explicit or implicit way. The Comus is your father in many ways, he cares for you ultimately but expects loyalty from you and to understand that not everything can be explained upfront.
There are also hybrid perspectives and guidelines regarding any potential mixture of the above three perspectives.
Hybrids are a diverse bunch and various players may fall into the hybrid range. What this means is that parts of multiple perspective guidelines may apply to you. I consider hybrid perspectives a more complicate role to take due to the element of making sure they balance right as you can get very unfair advantages if you get the advantages of multiple perspectives.
Here are some examples of hybrid perspectives:
An alien species native to 82 Eridani that once had a interplanetary empire which collapsed into a degenerative state with remnants and lost colonies spread about the system. (alien/custodian)
A non-human alien species from another star system. (human/alien)
A human who is an agent of Comus or a human faction that has a intelligentsia ran by an agent of Comus (human/custodian)
Finally, use the following form to make your app- Name: Perspective: Information:
And PM me an introductory IC post to start playing!
DO NOT HAVE THIS STUFF!!! Other players can contribute.
-humanoid aliens who minus well be people
-Furry aliens
-Interstellar invasions
-Planet killers (it's overkill here)
-Massive space fleets (again, overkill when you just have one planetary system to worry about... Though one filled with drones that hate you and other civilizations who also hate you)
-Pop cultural things (This is not a fandom Rp, please don't treat it like one)
-Anything that has control over an entire world (don't be greedy! These are big worlds with lots of things to control, no need to monopolize it and you probably won't be able to as things are too multi-polar for that... Too many thinking creatures and robots with surface-orbit missiles)
-Elves. Please no.
-AI gods.
-Tech that is advanced. Most advanced I'd prefer people get are orbital killsats or spaceships with kill rods in terms of WMDs.
-Human cultures that have blatant continuity with today's nation-states (so try to avoid having something called "New France" or such). Having something Abrahamic is fine (I am using biblical terms to name the worlds after all). However, please consider the theological impact the environment and its strangeness has had on the human factions. Also consider the dark ages and split that happened centuries earlier. We can work backwards on the details.
-Spacecraft that can go more than 1% the speed of light, no matter what you are.
-Species/entities that are redundant to what already exists. Consider forming a family with said already existing species (give them some trait continuity) or use the already existing species in play but with a separate civilization. Worlds are huge places!
-Anything that is just mindless military emphasis.
A wishlist of things that the GM and players hope to see at some point.
-Multiple human factions based in Solomon
-Native intelligent life for Solomon
-Outsider beings stationed on an exotic world somewhere in the star system.
This is a rewrite of Captain Ereso, basically a different character.
Character Sheet for Ereso Votun
Name: Ereso Votun Title: Captain of the Vishap (a frigate)
Height: 6' 8"
Weight: 230 Kg, metal is heavy! Despite this, his model is that of the leaner builds.
Group: Reaym Corps
Age: 28 years old
Race: Posthuman
Tier: 4
Appearance: He is a lean, brass colored cyborg with goggle-like eyes, and segmented arms. The harder parts of his cybernetic body are his chest and waist. His head is a Romanesque helmet (but without the flare), with various intricate parts to simulate facial expressions using nanotech. His design is very compressible and the limbs are modular, meaning he can swap them out for better limbs on a regular basis and the body too, is modular. Shoot the head. One can see silvery veins in his arms and legs when he is in more intensive situations from the nanites that flow through his machine body in place of blood.
Personality: Ereso is a machine man with a very optimistic outlook on the world who has seen quite a bit having connections in both magical and technological societies, even if he himself remains more or less a technological being. A very friendly person who seeks what is best for the world and is profoundly naive in his conceptions of it. Still, he is very moralistic and believes that he can use his advantage as a posthuman to make the world a better place for everyone. He is somewhat dogmatic, believing that if more people were posthumans many problems of society would be absolved and is very frequent in expressing these beliefs. Ereso is devout to the Reaym Corp's transhumanist cause to the end with a strong sense of loyalty that borders on unshakable.
Abilities, Talents, Traits, Powers:
(4)-Modular body; He is high class enough that he has a modular body that has all its parts replacable, just as long as his personality chip is inside it.
(2)-Expert Pilot; The main breadth of his education has been in piloting ships, especially frigates and exojets (which is another way of saying high altitude jets).
(2)-An adept engineer; Erseo is a decent engineer. Not the top of his class, but he knows how to work with drones on the technical level enough to modify them on a regular basis. His four drones are all modified drones given personalities as a result.
(2) -A Straight Shooter; He is best when using a carbine-type weapon, it's what the nursey trained him in most. He is awful with anything else.
(3)- Nanostrength; Due to being a posthuman, physical strength and speed are better by default to that of a human thanks to the nanites surging through his artifical blood veins that process food better and help with reducing damage from gunshots.
(4)-Backups; He has back up chips of his mind made using modified versions of the Reekai Computer Chip, though he has no memory of anything after the back up if killed too far from his ship (or killed with his ship that incubates the backup mind) and a backup body is not guaranteed.
Items:
(3)-Nanocarbine; A semi-automatic guass rifle with moderate penetration that he uses on a regular basis filled with nanomachines that self-destruct in tiny, controlled explosions within the target's body, causing internal damage.
(3)-Commlink; A internal linking system to his ship that streams his memories and intel.
(3)-Fluidic Gauntlet; If Ereso runs out of ammo on his Nanocarbine, he can use his gauntlets. Fluidic Gauntlets are nanomachine based gauntlets that harden more the harder one hits with them, while being soft otherwise allowing for both combat and civilian use.
History: Born on Vashishka in a military family, Ereso could be what is termed in some places a 'military brat', born into the upper class of society he hadn't really known suffering like so many had and in that sheltered existence proved amazingly oblivious to the coming schism despite all the writing on the walls. For the peacekeeping forces of the federation kept stability. Ereso's father was an officer in the Federation's military and had serve the UFP for decades by the time the galactic Schism broke out. By that point Ereso was already full grown and training to be a ship captain himself, but he ended up learning multiple skills by the age of 23 and for a bit, everything seemed fine in Ereso's life.
Ereso's joining of Reaym Corp came later and came as a result of Ereso ending up the victim of a horrible accident where while at a firing range getting shot by one of his peers in the chest, critically injuring Ereso to the point where it seemed Ereso was just hours away from death. Ereso's father, desperate to see his only son not die before him went to Reaym Corp for solutions and was given one- to upload Ereso's mind so he can continue to live on as a machine. Reaym Corp was basically taking advantage of this tragedy to carry out an experiment.
Despite the moral scruples that came with such a operation, Ereso's father went forward with financing the transfer anyways. But this came with consequences beyond merely the transfer- for Ereso found himself a new man afterwards and a began to view the world in a new light in his freedom from being just a body. Now he was an avatar who could truly do good for the world and ended up to his father's shock, joining Reaym Corp as a captain to fulfill the dream of a world where the races of the federation aren't shackled to mere flesh. Ereso felt an obligation to do so, even when there was none. His father however wasn't able to speak much to Ereso after this, for the Schism began to break out and he was called to duty- thus leaving Ereso to his own machinations as he became a loyal member of Reaym Corp.
@Dark Light I'm fine with it, when it comes that stuff I consider it the jurisdiction of GMs whjether or not it is fine as you justify it pretty well anyhow.
I just check to see if you are violating the two regulations or not (Hence why Heroic's gotten so much flak from me), if you aren't your character is fine by me. Your character isn't.
As for symbiont abilities, perhaps some ability to interface with ruins better would be my suggestion for an alternative to telepathy especially given the ancient origins of your aymbiont.
He's good to join the network, my only critcism in regards to abilities is that I think the chain gun thing is a bit over the top personally (even if justified by the symbionts and/or his upbringing on a higher gravity world), but whatever, character power is not my jurisdiction and it isn't in violation of the two regulations. I just hope to see him develop more for the final app, especially in regards to your character's history and personality.
Interesting idea to combine the relic + symbiont, which balances itself since instead of having them seperate you have a stronger single thing. Telepathy-wise, is that only for other intelligent symbionts? Since symbionts are usually critters with intelligent symbionts being considerably more rare.
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