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    1. Inuyasha 12 yrs ago

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6 yrs ago
Current Where did they move to?
6 yrs ago
Is it just me or did there used to be way more original RPs on this platform? Seems like nowadays everything is some fandom or pre-established universe RP
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8 yrs ago
I just want to let everyone know I am currently 17 and have been using this platform to RP for about 5 years now, so you may or may not have RPed with a 12 year old at one point and not even known it
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10 yrs ago
its 1 am and i havent started that 3 page calculus packet.... but these roleplays are so intriguing
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10 yrs ago
Who else is getting smashed by testing season?
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Well for starters....

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This doesn't really explain what the power is, and one sentence isn't going to cut it for a power section. :P

Try writing the power section like you're tryna explain it to someone who doesn't know what it is.


I have no idea what happened there, I wrote an entire section on it and I guess I accidentally cut it out somehow...? Don't worry Im not that stupid haha
In Never mind. 10 yrs ago Forum: The Gallery
Well if you want me to pay you to do something that is the whole reason that I signed up on this forum, you could at least show me some samples of how you write.
I swore it was teleportation for the longest time, but eh.


So whats the verdict homie

In my humble opinion, its the same school of though but not the same power. It's just like how opening portals is different from teleportation -- one cuts holes through objects, one is manipulation the spatial plane to travel through space and / or dimensions.

To be frank if it's any issue at all Ill just change the power as it's not that big a deal to me and I'm very flexible.
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To my understanding it was opening portals through objects on contact. So basically, he could open a hole to get to the other side of a wall, but not the other side of a city


Ah, well if thats the case then my power is quite different. Is power is basically a variation of walking through walls whilst mine is a variation of teleportation -- the only thing they share is that they both have dimensional qualities
So if I say, just had portals, I suppose, would that be different enough? None of this dimensional stuff?
I dunno, when I was read his power I was very confused it was like cutting stuff with portals? I didnt quite understand it.
Just wanted to let you guys know I havent gone anywhere.. I've been super busy and Ive been getting home at midnight everyday this past week. Dont worry though, Im still looking to join and Ill be editing my CS whenever I can fit it in.

EDIT: Updated my CS with a new power, would love to hear what you think and / or how I can make it better @Mr Allen J roleplayerguild.com/posts/3482721

And looking back, I recognize my power is somewhat similar to FamishedPants' but let me know what you think
Allen, I think I might try and go with a different power just to be hitch free :) I was thinking portal creation or dimensional manipulation as possible ideas.
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I hope you don't mind that I did 150x200 instead. the 200x200 one wasn't working out for me. :/ If you still want it, I can do it. :)




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That's the thing, in absence of light, there isn't really anything to manipulate. You could just say that it's a form of light manipulation - but I can't really make sense out of solidifying it. Maybe the teleportation/pocket dimension - but not solidifying it. Even then, the "darkness portal" power's aren't well defined as say Alice's (What are the weaknesses?).

The other big thing I noted is that Wei doesn't seem like an original character. It kinda feels like you took Wei Shen from Watch Dogs, gave him a different backstory (With some differences), and threw superpowers on him.


Im going to try and think of ways I can make umbrakinesis make more sense, possible ideas are
  • Elaborate more on the cloaking/teleporting/pocket dimension whilst completely axing powers of solidification. This would operate under the presumption that cloaking was a light manipulation (manipulating absence of light in this case) and explore darkness portal powers more thoroughly.
  • In terms of physics, an object is said to be dark when it absorbs photons, causing it to appear dim compared to other objects. For example, a matte black paint does not reflect much visible light and appears dark, whereas white paint reflects much light and appears bright. Therefor manipulation of darkness on a scientific level is a manipulation of photons.
  • Shadow dimension (?) [this would hinge a little more on paranormal]


As far as the Wei Shen qualm goes; I see where you're coming from. I did take inspiration from Sleeping dogs (as evident by the picture and appearance & name), however changing his backstory kind of seems like a different character to me. I mean isn't that what makes a character; his story? I would not say I copied Wei Shen's character, however I drew inspiration from that cast of characters as I wanted to make a Triad character. For instance, if I was to take away the name and appearance of my character you would not believe my character was Wei Shen. I dunno, just my thoughts.
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My thing with darkness manip is that you're basically manipulating nothing. It's the one elemental power that doesn't make sense... unless you really work with it.


I sort of think of it as manipulating the absence of light. Nevertheless, I've finished my character, and I did base it off of umbrakinesis. If you read it and find that it doesn't really make sense then I dont have qualms figuring out an alternative :) Also, please lmk anything else that is wrong with it and I will happily oblige to fix it.

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