Katthaj

Born to Fight: Bounty Hunters

If you read what i said you would have seen I have no problem
With names from games but when the names are backwards it becomes weird especially when Terra is a real thing in our world. For example it would be super weird if you had a xeno race called earthlings which is technically what you have here cuz Terra = Earth and Terrans = earth inhabitants a.k.a earthlings aka humans

Ascension Arena: Champion Maker

@Katthaj nice post, but one thing. She has no way of knowing he has four bloodlines. It's clear he's a hybrid/mixed blood though. Mind editing that bit if it's not too much trouble ^^;

@yoshua171

Will do :) thats a miss from me

Veritas Lux Mea

@Shiva He won't cause trouble if the captain says he shouldn't. He won't mess up anyone on the ship unless they start it. The reason he has a bit of a shitty attitude is cuz he literally just doesn't give a shit anymore, he has literally lost everyone he likes and is just no bs at this point. He will lighten up as he gets to know the crew

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Kara Stormborn

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Halfway through her step she froze up by the sound of the lesser being speaking to her. She got furious, how could this cretin dare speak to her, he was unclean but not unpure so she wouldn't be killing him on the spot, just as she was about to turn around with her wings spread out she was stopped a second time by an unclean and unpure cretin also opening its mouth he asked if she and the unclean was going to competing. "Ofcourse I will be competing, these unpure and unclean beings should not be a problem for me, they aren't worthy and neither are you so please... be quiet, you are an abomination of different blood types, you should not even be allowed to fair outside of the deepest of mines, I hope you get stomped into the ground like an ant the first fight you take." Kara said as she started walking away

"The audacity of these unclean beings, how do they even dare speak to me." she thought to herself as she geared up in her locker room.

Veritas Lux Mea

@Shiva I can fix that. Dw ill just change it. I never said he left. I'm just saying he's not around anymore, he didn't really put in a 2-week notice. He just hopped planets and disappeared.

Edit: It aint really hard for a cartel to find someone in the same country or in the neighbouring countries but seeing as he literally jumped from planet to planet and later away to other universes a small unknown cartel aint gonna bother finding him

Edit 2: I fixed the CS now :)

Born to Fight: Bounty Hunters

I have to back Clever bird in the case againts the xenos being called Terrans and coming from something called the Terran Republic as that is literally the human race in Starcraft, not that you cant take names from games, but having a xeno race be Terran and not something like Zerg (still from SC but I would have allowed it) is just a little weird. Please dont take it the wrong way

Veritas Lux Mea

I would love if someone was like "I wanna build a wall around Terra and make the Aliens pay for it"

Ascension Arena: Champion Maker

lmao, Kara's positive traits: kind, helpful, and loyal

reads post

I'm uhhh..... not so sure about that

@Jollan

Maybe I should add "A complete dickhead to anyone who isn't oro pure breed

Edit: Ok just edited my CS with a negative trait ;)

Veritas Lux Mea

@Shiva Ill make him a drifter.

Veritas Lux Mea

I made bud a merc. Didnt know if you could only have one. If its a problem I can change it