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I made bud a merc. Didnt know if you could only have one. If its a problem I can change it
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@Katthaj Yeah I had only planned on having one mercenary as part of the crew.
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Also I love how all of the characters so far are adored by their mothers lol
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@Shiva Ill make him a drifter.
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I would love if someone was like "I wanna build a wall around Terra and make the Aliens pay for it"
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@Moskau Spieluhr The captain is going to have a very love/hate relationship with Cora lol


I really enjoyed seeing that there's a couple of characters that are likely to start off with some slightly difficult interactions.

Namely Andrea and the Judge, the Captain and Cora, and potentially the Judge and Cora, given that she might have done things that border on terrorism.

Also I love how all of the characters so far are adored by their mothers lol


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@Moskau Spieluhr There will most certainly be some interesting dynamics lol
And true.

@Shiva Ill make him a drifter.


That works. I'll mark him down as "other."
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Alright, he aint done yet, but here's the wip so far. Couldn't get him wrapped up before work.

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@Katthaj So I do have a little bit of a concern about your character, now that I've had time to read over the CS more in depth.

I'm not really sure how well they'd do with everyone else in the gang, dynamic wise. The captain isn't in this business for personal gain, she's in it because she hates injustice, and it is highly unlikely she'd hire someone who used to "bash up aliens."

Secondly, aliens didn't exist in the human universe. I'm not sure if you just missed that, or if you didn't fully read the information I put up or what, but in the original universe humans lived in they didn't know aliens existed until interdimensional beings showed up and brought them to the alternate universe where intelligent species besides humans existed.

Thirdly, from what I know of cartels (which is admittedly slim), it's kinda hard to just up and leave because they tend to track you down.
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Some minor changes to the mercenary and I picked a picture to use.

Still mulling over a useful/fitting character quote.

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@Eisenhorn I was a little worried there for a minute that he was just going to be an angry mechanic with no depth, but he redeemed himself lol. He should be alright (as long as him and Maria don't start to tear into each other. That would be ugly).

@Moskau Spieluhr I had trouble with that one too lol. Like the picture! She looks fine so far. I'll let you know if I see anything particularly concerning.
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Character Quote: "I am iron, and I forge myself."


Is it bad I want to put my first mate's quote as "Pizza time!"

Yeah, that's pretty bad
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@Shiva I can fix that. Dw ill just change it. I never said he left. I'm just saying he's not around anymore, he didn't really put in a 2-week notice. He just hopped planets and disappeared.

Edit: It aint really hard for a cartel to find someone in the same country or in the neighbouring countries but seeing as he literally jumped from planet to planet and later away to other universes a small unknown cartel aint gonna bother finding him

Edit 2: I fixed the CS now :)
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@Shiva Yeah, I wanted to toy with angry mechanic but actually have some room to develop and play with development. First impressions might be rocky, but I have high hopes for him. Curious what was the redeeming point of the WIP, if ya don't mind me asking?
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@Shiva, I should have my Ithlo Medic completed by tomorrow.
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@Katthaj I still have a tiny bit of a problem with his attitude. As long as he's respectful and doesn't cause issues, it should be okay, but the captain really hates needless violence and isn't likely to take kindly to him causing issues lol

@Eisenhorn As long as he can follow orders and is generally respectful to her, it should be okay. She can handle sassy, but blatant disregard for her command will get him in trouble. And his redeeming points were in the personality section where ever it shows that he's not just an angry mechanic looking for a fight lol

@Hellion Sounds good!

@The Fated Fallen That would be hilarious, but also bad lmao

@Moskau Spieluhr I did notice something. She's not quite old enough to have been born on Earth (it was one of the first planets to go) and also there haven't really been a lot of military operations on Artemis. Some, yes, but nothing terribly major.

Also you guys can all disregard the weight section in the CS.
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Sorry I've been a no-show, you guys, been busy. Characters are looking interesting so far, can't wait to see them all in action, huehuehue
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@Moskau Spieluhr I did notice something. She's not quite old enough to have been born on Earth (it was one of the first planets to go) and also there haven't really been a lot of military operations on Artemis. Some, yes, but nothing terribly major.


Noted, changed her home planet to Neptune (cold places are cool) and tweaked some of the military information to make it more clear it wasn't referring to some major wars or operations but more keeping the small folk in line.

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@Moskau Spieluhr That works lol
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Now I need to hear everyone's theme songs
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