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In Starfire 11 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Eight watched the carnage unfold behind him on the view screen. It was not a pretty sight. On both ships bodies had piled up and in space a number of fighter crafts lay dead in space, their pilots exposed to the vacuum. Since the encounter had begun Eight had been running a recursive scan of the pirate ship. He had not recognized the configuration of it which bothered him but the outer design had to be completely unique. It was possible it was more standardized ship under all of that decoration.

Now amidst the carnage that scan was finally complete. Underneath the skull and cross bones it appeared the invading ship was a modified Thorium Class attack cruiser. The boarder anchors were from another type of vessel but according to Eight's scans the primary defenses of the main ship seemed undamaged and unaltered. That was very very dangerous. Eight frantically opened a comm link to the fighters outside the ship. "Attention, do not target the main ship with energy weapons." The Thorium vessels were designed at a time when the Xenovian system was at war. It was an antique by today's standards but the basic principles that it was founded on still applied to modern technologies. The Thorium Class ships personified the mantra 'a good defense makes the best offence'. The outer hull was designed with a type of composite plating that redirect and channel great amounts of energy. The Thorium ships had been designed to absorb energy weapons, then reverse their polarity before firing the same energy back at its attackers. It had gone out of style because the ship's capacitors could not maintain the energy they absorbed. The moment the enemy refused the fire on them the Thorium weapons became inoperable.

"Cy, the energy being. The main ship is capable of reversing the charge of attacks aimed at it. If you target it and are hit in return the energy could react violently to your unique physiology." Eight was no expert on alien anatomy but he simple physics dictated that positives and negatives cancelled each other out and when high yield plasma was concerned that reaction could be disastrous. Not only for Cy but for anything in the immediate vicinity.

With that done Eight checked the Bablyon IV once more. Johanna Hawkins and Krull were doing a decent job keeping the pirates at bay. That was until they sent in a mechaniod battle drone. Eight used the Bablyon's internal censers to identify it. According to his records it was a Type 40 CFR Combat Mech. It was designed for all terrain battle but where ever the pirates had stolen it from it was not designed to be used on a ship or in such cramped quarters. However that was the only bit of good news. The Type 40 was designed to be ruthless. It would tear the ship apart before it let any of its programmed targets escape elimination and Eight had to assume that the crew of the Babylon plus their Starfire escort where on that list.

Eight glanced down at his tool kit. A plan had started to form in his mind. One he knew he would regret the moment he set it into motion. Eight got a couple of spar parts from the Babylon's engineering crew before he put together a small device. It was about six inches long, cylindrical and about an inch across. It had a glowing light strip in the center. With this device and his tool kit in hand Eight left his post at engineering and went to join his comrades. Luckily he still had a route to them though it was not exactly straight forward. It required extensive use of the ship's maintenance tubes before Eight popped out in the corridor where Johanna Hawkins and Krull was waging war. The tubes on a disposable ship where not large, even for Eight it had been a tight squeeze. There was no way one of those burly pirates could fit in one.

Johanna Hawkins had set up the crates for cover just as Eight had instructed. The Type 40 had crushed most of the pirates in the corridor, now it was just the metal beast that Johanna Hawkins and Krull were facing off against. "I am here to help." Eight said as he settled behind a crate next to Johanna Hawkins. The T-40 was getting closer. Eight took in a deep breath preparing himself for what was about to happen. Then he took his small device in hand a threw it like a grenade aiming for the section between the robots legs. The magnetic clamps locked into place as the device touched the metal. The light on the device switched from red to blue and a wave of energy blew out of it. As the energy touched Eight he collapsed to the ground. He didn't cry out or scream but pain was wracking up and down his body. He lay on the floor shivering, a cold sweet breaking out over his back.

Luckily he was not the only one to have collapsed. On the other side of the crates the T-40 had shut down. The small device had been an improvised EMP bomb. It disabled electronic equipment which unfortunately also included Eight's own. His technological make up was so unique that he was still functioning if painfully however Eight needed to return to his regeneration chamber within the next hour or his condition would worsen considerably. The ship's electronics were safeguarded against EMPs. It had been a popular raiding practice to disable a ship's systems with EMP waves before taking it some fifty years previously. Now it was mandated that all ship's systems be properly shielded.

"Johanna Hawkins." Eight said, his voice labored but steady. "I have detonated an EMP. It disrupted the electrical signals the battle droid was operating on. However it has a redundancy system that will reboot it in six minutes and thirty eight seconds. Use the tools in my pack. You need to open up the maintenance cover on its back and disable its primary power stabilizers. I will walk you through it but you must hurry. If it comes back online it will detect tampering and initiate a self destruct sequence which will decompress this area of the ship.
@PyroDash888 (There's no way I'm quoting that whole thing) it might be more relevant in Germany. I don't know, I've never been to school in Germany or been their period. I respect that it might matter to you but the fact is that even if I understand the differences you're trying to iterate (I understand what you're saying but I still don't think any of those characteristics relate to one genre over another) it doesn't really matter to me. If you want to write a story with all animals for characters you're welcome to, (though I'm not really sure how exactly that would work out). In Canada the difference between fables and fairy tales is more or less none existent, though now that you mention it I do remember feeling like I'd been hit over the head by the morals of some fairy tales as a child (The Ugly Duckling most notably). If you pick up an English dictionary (or perhaps I'm thinking of a literary dictionary... whatever) and look up "fairy tales" and "fables" you'll find both definitions to say something to the effect of "a children's story involving fanciful forces that is meant to convey a moral".

Does it have to be Western style fairy tales/fables?

Or can I go a slightly different route, I was thinking Arabian Nights for instance.


As long as I'm not hearing the story of Scheherazade retold with HOB characters you are more than welcome to conjure up a different type of fairy tale(fable).

I personally want to go towards the myth/legend route. Basically a "historical" event which was "enhanced" "slightly" by magic or other stuff.


And you are more than welcome to do that. Just try not to make it too much like a typical story. The kinds of stories I'm looking for would be the kinds of things that got told around a campfire. Generally speaking in campfire stories you wanted the children to go away content with an ending, not worried about the implications or whether the hero did the right thing.

I'm going to shut up now with the advice. Read the prompt, read what I've said and write a story. Once Judgement Day comes I'll tell you if you hit you're mark or not.
In Starfire 11 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Do you only participate in one RP at a time?
In Starfire 11 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Dude, its only been four days. Not every RP moves at lightning speeds.
Yeesh, Prince. Is this what you do for fun?


The contests are meant to be fun, not about splitting hairs. I outlined pretty well what I wanted in the prompt (at least I thought so) whether anyone wants to call it a fable or a fairy tale doesn't really concern me.

Might sound a bit cold but it's the truth.
Yes, but the modern Fable was popularized by Germans at the start of the 19th century during the romantic-period, as were the so called "Volksmärchen", literally "people's fairy tales", like Rapunzel and the Golden Goose and Red Riding Hood, called "Rotkäppchen" here.
Mostly because of the desire for an identity as a nation, as Germany was divided up into hundreds of smaller states where the people felt they all should belong together in one whole country.


Popularized and invented are two completely different things. Words are important, don't make use of them hastily.

As you can see the whole "moral" thing is not a fairy tale thing, but belongs to the fable. Fairy tales are more or less "epic adventures with magic and stuff". Fairy tales mostly have the conflict of good vs evil, whereas fables try to teach morals like "do not steal" or "do not lie" etc.

Yeeeah and fables have talking animals and plants which always have the same character, the lion as the king, the raven as the misleading character and the magpie as the thief.


So what do you call the stories that have fairies, epic adventures, talking animals and a moral?

Fables are different from fairy tales in a whole matter of ways.
This describes it pretty accurately for a website in English. German websites are a lot more in-depth.

Fairy Tales and Fables


That websight contradicted itself, according to its own criteria Red Riding Hood is a fable, lacks fairies and magic, lacks an epic journey, has a moral, has talking animals playing iconic parts, yet it uses Red Riding Hood as an example of a Fairy Tale. I will admit that at one point in history Fables and Fairy Tales were different styles of story telling but at this point in time the line between the two has become blurred to the point that the two words can be used interchangeably. Their are classics that use and discard elements of both, perhaps not the originals but a number of adaptations bridge the gap between the two to the point where the gap is virtually non existent. However not wanting to start a war with the nation of Germany I'll answer your question.

It is completely up to you. If you wish to write your definition of a fable you are welcome to, if you wish to write your definition of a fairy tale that is also perfectly valid. If you want to mix elements of both I don't really care. Logistically speaking dust, aura and Grimm could easily take the place of magic so perhaps most of the stories by the broad definitions would be fables. However if you want to include fairy like creatures, that is (depending on your interpretation of fairies) beings that bestow good fortune to the hero, or those that have other worldly powers and use tricks of the tongue and deceptive speak you are more than welcome to do it. I'm sure all of you have read or at least know the classic stories, Red Riding Hood, Sleeping Beauty, Snow White, Mulan, The Little Mermaid. Take your idea of a fairy tale (OR A FABLE!) and write what you want to, I'll judge them based on how much I enjoyed the stories and in small part how much of a children's tale they were. I'm not going to be judging you on whether you stayed within the lines of Fairy Tale Vs Fable.

Also for those of you that do want to include talking animals you could always convert some of the faunus characters. Like you could have Shiro the White Tiger and Emerald the Cat and Mokuren the Fox if you wanted. Just a suggestion.
@Abillioncats So is Zelda disguised or not?
If we're getting clinical I believe fables have a more structured and poetical writing style but past that their is very little difference between them and fairy tales. If you want me to choose I'll say write a fairy tale but I don't believe there is much difference.

Also I believe the earliest written fables date back to Greece in 550 BC but as a style of story telling that was propagated by oral tradition it is more than likely that they are older than that.
#15 - Contest - Once Upon a Time

Judge: Prince of Seraphs
Type: Writing Challenge
Deadline: August 28th

Your task is to take the provided prompt and craft a 3rd-person, non-canon short story involving your Heroes of Beacon character based around it. The minimum length for this challenge is 1200 words. You are going to use the HOB characters and settings to craft an original fairy tale. As this is meant to be a bit fanciful you are free to alter things like the time period, geography and stuff like that in the process of telling the story. Most fairy tales have certain rules to them that are traditionally followed.

  • Most fairy tales have a moral, a message or point to the story. Red Riding Hood it was "don't trust strangers", some others have been "love conquers all" "beauty isn't everything" that sort of thing. I'm not asking you to choose one of my examples (though you're welcome to) but the idea behind a fairy tale was to teach children a lessen about life that they might not understand if it was simply explained to them.
  • It ends Happily Ever After and begins with the main character either in trouble or about to get themselves into it.
  • The stories themselves do not get overly complicated. They were designed to be understood by children.


Nowadays their are a number of cliches that surround fairy tales. Rags to riches stories, evil queens or powerful sorcerers, a story of true love. I don't mind if you incorporate any of these into your fairy tale but try to be original about it. I don't want to feel like I'm reading Snow White with all the character's names changed.

Past that just have fun with it and create something interesting to read. Above all else I'm looking at how much I enjoy the stories themselves.
You judge the contests you create, Serephs.


Yeah I know... I want to create and judge the next contest. I assumed the former was implied. It wouldn't be any fun to judge someone else's contest.

I specifically liked yours.

Yes, if you make it.


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