Leolycan

The Edge of Damnation [A Warhammer 40k/Dark Heresy RP]

I'd be interested in either path we take, but it might be better to revamp the story.

Shepards of Ivalice: The Wings of Ruin

@Crimson Raven

I'm sorry if that is the case, but I'll be more than happy to readdress the section. However, I do my best not to railroad the characters, allowing pcs control over minor NPCs to some degree. For example, you could include the girl in whatever response you have (I.E: Jo-Anne and her two (now one) npcs). I also included the inclusion of the stone to draw attention to so Gabranth could possibly comment on. There are some subtle things I include for you to pick and choose to interact with to craft your own story for your character- with me acting more as a narrator while your story plays out. Once again, I can do a rewrite if you wish. Still learning the whole GM thing and how to interact with my players, so I apologize if you felt neglected.

Edit: I also don't care about the length of your post. I'm more concerned about the quailty. If you can sum up your character and his actions and reactions in a few words, that's great, but at least give something that others (including myself) can work off of. I expect you guys to hold me accountable to that same ruling as well.

Kingdom Hearts: Unity of Keychains

Sporty Tunas.

Shepards of Ivalice: The Wings of Ruin

Dorter, Trade City

@Cyrania

The Viera paused for a moment, seeming slightly conflicted as Jo-Anne spoke. Livia gave a heavy sigh as she put on a subtle smile, "This one is going to meet with her sisters shortly. They must be told of the towns plans. We have kept separated ourselves for to maintain our way of living, but we cannot hope to survive on our own... There are too little of us left." As she spoke, Jo-Anne could tell she was somewhat saddened by her own remarks, but the remorse slowly changed to curiosity.

"What of your own kin? You have strange powers, some that this one has never seen before. Is everyone of your clan capable of this feat?" As she asked her question, she'd motion for the Taguel to follow, both of them heading towards the gates of the city. Normally there would be guards stationed here, however almost no one was present. Almost everyone in town was busy gathering their belongings and readying carts for their treks... Others were preparing to stay here, refusing to follow the rest of the towns populous. It's obvious the divide was coming, but for now Taguel was being led into the forest to meet the Livia's clan.

@Evanist

As the moogle led his mount to the stables, he couldn't help but notice the activity of the city. After the assembly, the towns-people seemed to spring to life, though seeming more desperate than ever, families darting back and forth between houses and carts, shop owners raiding their own stalls for potions and other useful items. This chaos would continue all the way to the stables, oddly the only calm place as the mounts seemed oblivious to the hustle and bustle. Erion had no problem leading Boco to his own stall, Erion could see that the human from earlier was no where to be seen. It seemed odd, but nothing seemed too out of place... However, that Wyvern from earlier was no longer there, yet the multicolored chocobos in the stables from before still were scratching around their pin.

@Lugia

Despite his attempt to warn the people about him, no one seemed to pay the Black Mage any mind. As he stood in the now emptying square, Robert could see all manner of people scurrying about in preparation for the approaching travels. Nothing seemed to really catch Robert's eyes, the trio on the stage had left for the headquarters located further into the town.

@Crimson Raven

As Gabranth waited patiently inside this interior room, having been escorted to the 'HQ' by the same soldier that had been speaking on the situation at hand. There wasn't much in the room to speak of, merely a long table with multiple chairs, a few candles, maps, and other tomes and texts scattered about. It seemed this was where the leaders of this town planned their actions, several pins and knives posted around the map seeming to mark several locations. Off in a corner was the woman who he had first seen upon waking up, her clothes dirtied and torn slightly- though the woman herself seemed no worse for wear. It was obvious she was uncomfortable here, making it a point to not make eye contact with the armored warrior as she sat in silence.

The silence didn't last long however, a sudden slamming of an outter door causing the woman to practically leap out of her chair to attention. Heavy footsteps could be heard outside the room to where they both sat, steadily approaching the door before it was slammed open. In the doorway stood a man similarly armored to Gabranth, though the metal plates were of a darker hue. In fact, it was odd... It was almost as if the metal seemed to absorb all light around it and cause it to fade into darkness. The visage on the pale elder warriors face was that of anger, marching forward towards Gabranth as he held a bright green jewel within his grasp.

"Who are you?" his voice seemed to demand an answer.

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Forest around Dorter

@Eklispe

The forest seemed to grow more twisted and thicker around Arus, making even the open forest a claustrophobic experience. Yet as he steeled his will, he'd eventually come to the opposite edge, a large hill looming over the area around it- atop it sat a rather small church. The tracks from the chocobo definitely led towards the stone structure, Arus following without delay. Despite the unfamiliar symbols, it was clear that this was a holy place- the odd welcoming presence a stark contrast to the ominous feeling just outside it's walls. Sure enough, there was Holliander's chocobo, actually tied to a stone statue. However, the elderly knight was no where to be seen.

Kingdom Hearts: Unity of Keychains

Just so we can get this moving- I pick Submariner- I mean Aquaman- I mean Atlantis... One of these, right?

Persona - The True Self

Warakuma High

4/5/15

Having spent the majority of the previous on his own, Masahide had plenty of time to prepare himself for the return to school. Catching up on his studies and putting aside some time for his kendo drills. As he sat idly in his seat, gazing out the window, he couldn't help but recall his experience at the cafe. At first his focus was on his own unease, being around so many people he had never met and the awkwardness he felt. It wasn't often that he found himself in the middle of crowds, having made it a point to spend most of his time alone in his work or studies. Still, it wasn't all bad... He met a familiar face, and actually did something helpful for someone who hadn't asked for it. The thought brought a meager smile to his lips, though fading rather rapidly. His eyes flickered about the class as he took stock of his usual classmates; noting that the girl from the brutal brawl was among them.

'How can one draw that much attention to themselves? And for something so stupid as a fight?' His thoughts echoed in his own mind, turning his gaze away and back to the front of the class, 'Is she not embarrassed? There are far better ways to draw attention to yourself.' Shaking his head with a subtle sigh, he'd attempt to dismiss the thoughts. He sat silently through the rest of the class, his attention never wavering from his teacher or his papers until the final bell had rung. Packing away his supplies in his satchel, Masa wasted no time in preparing his departure. Soon, he'd be among those in the kendo club, and have his chance to unwind.

Shepards of Ivalice: The Wings of Ruin

Will be posting at some point either later in the evening or possibly tomorrow morning. I appologize for the delay, but between the chaos of two kids and the hell work was today, I'm kinda shot.

Shepards of Ivalice: The Wings of Ruin

@Crimson Raven

All good. I will be progressing the story, but will include something for Gabranth to react to. As such, I was going to introduce a twist in this post, but now the next update is going to be doubly surprising.

Shepards of Ivalice: The Wings of Ruin

Another curveball. This should be interesting.

Shepards of Ivalice: The Wings of Ruin

@Lugia

The rationalization is that it takes skill to hit your opponent, and opposing skill to dodge. Luck would determine how well the strike actually struck or how the blow barely knicked you out of luck. Still changing the formulas around.