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    1. Louis Dabout 9 yrs ago

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Shit, I had planned to get my relationships tab done before this started ICly. I guess I'll have to do that afterwards haha.


You and me both! :D I'll have mine done by the time I touch down in Qatar... hopefully.
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On note about the picture: It is fine for as long as no-one else objects to it.

Some people may not like such imagery.

Also five points to you.

That was a hella fast response.


Ah alright then, yeah that fast response was nothing more than great timing for waking up and checking this site. :D
@Louis Dabout First off your bio and personality should be separate (among other formatting errors), what you have put down for what I assume is your bio is not very well written. You also have multiple spelling errors along with some weird grammar errors. There is not an example in the star wars universe anywhere where a non-stormtrooper officer has worn stormtrooper armor, logically if it was to survive some sort of gas attack or being pushed into the vacuum of space I would be ok with but willingly no. The rest of your bio simply lacks any real substance to put it lightly. If you're willing to rework the character I would reconsider accepting you but as of now it is a no. (Picture is fine as I'm fully aware of the history of the production of the original films)


Alright then, yeah it was late at night when I started writing. I'll work on this during my flight today.
@Louis Dabout I'm not going to comment on background/history as I am leaving that on all Imperials upto CQ.

However can you please bold your headings and either move your image to the top of the sheet, hider it or move it so it isn't on the same line as your text.

This way when CQ reads it it will be easier to review.


Done! :D

Name: Captain Oskar Stanzl
Age: 35
Species: Human
Appearance: If you feel this is too offensive, I'll at least try to explain myself. Basically it's because Star Wars is modeled off of them and it's an instant idea of his appearance.
Abilities/Skills:
Commander training

Blaster training - highly skilled

Expert in tactical urban environ engagements - He knows how to kill in the 3d space on a planet.

Equipment:
Stormtrooper armor
Updated commander HUD and tacom
E-11 Blaster rifle

Personality/Motivation/Biography: Oskar was raised on Alsakan to a rich faily and has been a part of the High Human culture movement since birth. Since young he has been taught by his parents that the true place for other species was beneath humanity and that the Republic with its filthy multispecism was destroying humanity. When the Clone Wars came he'd been only 25 and had just begun working at his father's shipyard. He quit and volunteered for the army as an officer. While the Republic was decadent and a destructive force the CIS was openly alien dominated, something he would not stand for.

His graduation as an officer came a year before the Clone Wars ended and he was assigned to Coruscant. When Grievous struck he played a pivotal role in the suppression of various incursions down below in the city, here he earnt his reputation as a master of tactical urban combat and proved himself in the harsh arena of war. When the war ended and the Empire rose from its ashes Oskar was glad, a human such as Palpatine would make sure things were done right.

To him the Empire is the savior of humanity, the final judgement of the lesser races and the putting down of them into their rightful places.

Oskar is logical, hardbitten and in the interests of humanity and the Empire anything goes.
Relations: No one else but the Colonel... because she's my commanding officer. They don't get along since part of High Human Culture is that women are inferior, and while he respects her work ethic, they will never get along.
Oh gosh... Anyone want to help me with the relationship sheet? Who wants to be a friend :3
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Oh, I'm also in a similar boat. Just thought it'd be worth making a point of that.


Ah! Well that makes things easier! I live in Australia but in a day I'll be in the Middle East for work so I'll be on at near the same times :D
@Apokalipse
I decided to revamp the character. I felt that they were a bit one-dimensional so I tried to give some more flavor and depth to them. I also changed the last name as Crimmy was right in that it was inspired by the Hohenstaufen's. I decided to use Von Tronje as that is the family name of the Lord who apparently patronized the Nibelungen saga and I felt that was a good connection to German mythology. I also decided to make him not prejudiced since I couldn't use the excuse of him being the child of a Grindelwald supporter since that had happened too far back.


@Louis Dabout Very well I understand. I thank you for your timely withdrawal now, rather than dropping out midway through the RP. Would you mind me using your house for a NPC house?


Yeah I'm very sorry though that I couldn't continue :( You defs can, Henri's very arrogant and willing to believe that he can use martial might to triumph if politicking goes awry.
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