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Good thing they locked that High Casual Rant thread because I was on the verge of making it a Spider-Man thread.
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Two months later, my Hunger Games BNR (But Not Really) RP is actually ready to launch. Still room for like ten people. Just waiting on character submissions now.
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The best MMO ever was Club Penguin.
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@Eldarionl Sho Minazuki and Baklava are two very talented artists here. Talk to them.
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I have a Deviantart account for my art now. Please don't go to Deviantart if you don't have to. It makes me sad that there will always be a furry version of literally anything you create and it will always look better.

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Allison Hawthorne

Location: City Hall

Time: Sunday, 7:30-ish PM


Allison sat quietly, idly drumming her fingers on the table as she waited for Kriss to get back. He hadn't said where he was going. Maybe he needed to make a phone call or something. The table shifted suddenly as it was nudged by a young woman with long blonde hair.

Sorry about that. Distracted, Lovely dress by the way, have a good evening.

"Oh, thanks! You have a nice evening too, uhh..." she said cheerfully, attempted to call her by name even though she didn't know it. Allison frowned as the other lady slipped away. That was a wasted opportunity to meet someone new.

She glanced around again at the mass of people and noticed for the first time just how much alcohol was running at this party. Her nose wrinkled and she suddenly felt very out of place. She didn't need EMT training videos to shy her away from booze. Her memory of being in the hospital at the age of 4 was so vivid that it still gave her nightmares. The beeping of machines, the hardness of the bed, and the burning. The horrible burning in her throat. Her father had finally decided to spend some time interacting with his daughter for once in his life. He wasn't drunk, which just made it worse, because somewhere in his mind he thought it was a good idea to give his 4-year-old a shot of whiskey. Even though she threw up (and threw up again at the hospital), the doctor had said she was extremely fortunate to be alive. If they hadn't been able to revive her from unconsciousness, she would have been dead in less than a day.

Even now, thanks to her father's love of variety, she could identify several different substances by smell alone all the way from her table. Scotch, rum, and whisky were the most notable. The clear liquid in the glass at the next table were probably vodka. She glanced down at Kriss's water glass and for a moment wondered if it was actually water. She didn't smell anything, but hard vodka is odorless, and this place certainly looked like it could afford the best. Now curious, she lifted the glass to her nose and sniffed. To her relief, it was water.

"Why are you smelling my drink?"

She jumped in surprise, turning to see Kriss standing awkwardly nearby. A trauma bag was hanging from his fist. She carefully lowered the glass to the table and raised an eyebrow at the bag.

"Did someone get hurt?"

"You did not answer my question."

Allison looked away, embarrassed. She could sense Kriss's irritation and knew that he was not going to let this go until she answered. She sighed.

"I was wondering if you were drinking vodka."

He scowled. "Yes, that is what I suspected you were doing. I am not drinking alcohol."

"I know, I was just..." she trailed off, returning eye contact and offering an apologetic face. "Sorry. Honestly. There are just a lot of drunk people here, and...I wanted to make sure."

"I do not drink," he said, lowering himself into his chair and plopping the bag on the ground. "It is unhealthy."

"Yeah, me either. Alcohol brings out the monster in people," she said, rubbing her stomach. The scent in the air was starting to turn her stomach. Kriss noticed and pointed in the direction of a buffet table.

"There is a buffet table if you are hungry."

She perked up immediately. "Oh, awesome! I'm gonna grab a plate."

Without another word, she hopped up and began carefully making her way through the crowd. Snippets of dialogue made their way through the air with varying degrees of slurred speech and grunts of discomfort. She sighed quietly to herself. Her stepdad would kill her if he knew she was at a party with booze. Hopefully the perfume would help counteract it. Snatching up a plate and plastic fork, Allison helped herself to about as much food as she could lift. Her mother teased her frequently about how she could each so much food and seem to not gain a pound. Metabolism is apparently magical. She jabbed the fork into a bread roll and trotted carefully to a less occupied bar, taking a deep breath before approaching.

"Do you have soda?"

He nodded and directed her to a soda fountain. She filled a wine glass with as much Coca Cola as it could hold and left, letting out a huge breath. There had only been one man at the bar, but he was still drunk enough to shoot a rather immature comment her way. She brushed it off and returned to Kriss, who had refilled and re-iced his glass. He noticed her holding a glass of wine and narrowed his eyes until she lowered it to the table to reveal the carbonation bubbling along the top. The two sat in silence for a while as Allison set about emptying her plate. She looked around the room again and perked up.

"Ashton is here!" The woman was wearing a different outfit, but her hair and figure made her impossible to mistake.

"Yes," Kriss replied, having already noticed.

"You should go say hi."

"I would rather not."

Allison rolled her eyes. "Ugh, Kriss, I know you don't really care, but it's better than sitting and doing nothing. Snap would not approve."

"Snap is not here."

"She's with us in spirit," she said dramatically.

"I sincerely doubt it," Kriss responded with even less enthusiasm.

"Come on," Allison said, standing up and nodding towards Ashton. She had missed the chance to speak to the woman earlier and wasn't about to let another opportunity go by. "We're gonna go say hi."

"No, we are not."

She dropped her plate on the table and crossed her arms.

"You wanna sit there and argue, or you wanna go talk to someone for a change?"

Her tone grated on him and he felt his brow furrow in disapproval. "Neither."

"Okay fine, we'll compromise. I'll do the talking. You just stand there and look uncomfortable."

"Why would I do that when I could sit here and look uncomfortable?"

"Think of it as exercise. UP!" she barked, putting a slight edge on her voice to suggest she was not going to debate this. He gritted his teeth, then dragged himself into a standing position. Snap would probably want a report of the evening and he would get an earful if she found out he hadn't talked to a single person. Maybe she'd lay off if he did. Though he wasn't going to give Allison the satisfaction of his approval. She collected her plate and still half-full wine glass of coke and headed into the crowd. Sighing in frustration, he tagged along at a safe distance.

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@PrinceAlexus@Silver Fox
@CollectorOfMyst Actually the first one is supposed to be like Portal. And yeah, I just forgot to add an appearance slot.
KRISS MAUSER

LOCATION: CITY HALL

TIME: APPROX. 7:30 PM


The last hour and a half had passed very, very slowly as Kriss sat quietly at a table and waited for Allison to arrive. He had fetched himself a glass of ice water just so he had something to look at. A few people nodded in his direction or commented on his uniform and badge. One or two even thanked him for being on hand. He had responded with a nod and monotone word of thanks each time. Someone had paused to ask him if he was alright, since he had been sitting alone staring at an empty glass, but he assured them he was fine. He couldn't resist a grimace as they left. Like they really cared. The alcohol had been flowing freely and already some were beginning to slur their speech and grip their chair to keep their balance. He ran over SOP for alcohol poisoning and concussions. If any of them made it on stage and attempted to dance, he would probably need to lend a hand. Maybe even apply a bandage or two.

Speaking of bandages, the nearest trauma bag was out by the edge of the road. He wondered if it was appropriate to carry a first aid kit into a gala and place it on a chair. A quick glance around the room confirmed that many people here would be too drunk to care in the first place, and frankly it didn't bother him if they were offended at all. He was a paramedic. He could carry his kit with him if he wanted to. Mind made up, he stood and walked to the front door, where he nearly bumped into a woman in a dark floral dress.

"Excuse me," he muttered, sliding past and heading for the exit.

"Um, excuse me, Kriss," he heard a familiar voice say over his shoulder. He turned and found himself facing Allison, though it wasn't the Allison he knew from the squad. Allison the EMT was a clumsy, cheery girl with a goofy sense of humor. The woman in front of him was prim and elegant, with just a hint of pride. She narrowed her shadowed eyes at him and unslung her purse, holding it in front of her in both hands so that the lights glinted off her silver bracelet. She was otherwise free of jewelry, but the air of power about her more than compensated. Her heels elevated her to eye level with him, and she lifted her chin with a frown of disapproval.

"It's rude to shove a lady aside," she said sternly, moving one of her hands to her waist. For the first time, Kriss felt small near her. She may not have been physically taller or stronger, but she outclassed him ten to one. A long moment passed as he tried to find a proper response. She was silent, but her stare gave the firm impression that he was supposed to apologize.

"I apologize."

The girl scowled, her eyes growing even colder. Kriss was suddenly concerned that she might physically attack him. He was on the verge of backing away when, to his total surprise, the scowl vanished and Allison threw her head back in laughter.

"You...you looked like you were going to pass out!" she said, giggling and placing a hand over her mouth. "Oh, Kriss, you should see the look on your face."

She laughed again, carefully wiping tears from the edges of her eyes and placing a hand against her stomach to try and compose herself. Her face burned red, slightly embarrassed at the scene she was creating.

"Honestly, Kriss, you take everything so seriously. Lighten up a little!"

The familiar smile was back, and the hand on her hip now made her look cocky rather than indignant. She tossed the purse back over her shoulder and looked around.

"Wow, this place is hopping. Sorry I'm late, I just was busy being an airhead. Did I miss anything important?"

Kriss blinked a few times, still trying to process what had just occurred. Allison made a face, then stepped closer and snapped a finger in front of his eyes.

"Hell-ooo, Earth to Kriss, is anyone in there?"

He shook his head, bringing himself back into focus. The color returned to his face, as did his look of irritation.

"That was unkind."

"Yup. Totally worth it, though," she chirped, grinning.

"Snap will not be joining us tonight."

"Yeah, she texted me," Allison replied, tapping her purse. "Oh hey, do you like my purse? I seriously almost drove off and left it in my bedroom. Pretty bad, huh?"

"Yes."

"You're so mean," she said flatly. "Which table is ours?"

He winced, then nodded in the direction of his seat, which was still empty.

"I will be back in a moment," he said, turning and vacating the building. Allison watched him leave, then spun around, flipping her hair back behind her shoulder, and strutted over to his place. Fortunately, the empty glass seemed to have scared away others, and she happily claimed an adjacent seat, setting her purse gently on the table and watching the faces go by.
KRISS MAUSER

LOCATION: CITY HALL

TIME: 6 PM


The trio had met at Snap's Camaro as the race concluded. Snap had been eager to pose nearby and talk cars with anyone passing by. They had decided to split up and meet back at the squad. Kriss had taken the opportunity to go and get a quick meal and refuel the ambulance. He had returned to his spot on the couch in the lounge long before Snap arrived with Allison in tow.

"So did you have fun?" the CO had asked. Allison had smiled and nodded. Kriss had done neither.

"Alright, well the gala is next. It's a formal occasion, so please dress nice."

"Is a squad uniform acceptable evening wear?" Kriss had asked dryly.

"If you have a suit, wear it. If not, fine. Allison, do you have evening wear at home?"

"Yep!"

"You're dismissed, then. Go get changed and meet us at the city hall. I'm going to go home too. Kriss, meet us there around 6."

Kriss was a punctual individual. He was at the gala, with the ambulance, in his cleanest set uniform (pressed polo, pressed black dress pants, black leather shoes), along with his SCVRS badge, which was now pinned to the front of his shirt. He never wore it, but hopefully it would satisfy Snap, since he didn't have a suit. Well, technically, he did. Unfortunately, it was at his parents' home, and he wasn't going to drop in just to pick it up. He had parked along the edge of the road and was seated at the nearest table to the door, patiently awaiting for Snap to arrive so he could avoid interacting with the crowd, which was rapidly growing. He felt his phone buzz a single time in his pocket. He slid it out of his pocket and glanced at the tiny front screen.

[New Message!]

Kriss flipped the phone open and selected the message. It was from Snap.

Kriss. Can't make it tonight. Just you and Allison. Keep an eye on things. -Snap

He gritted his teeth. Snap had set him up. She really was going the extra mile to make Kriss interact with society. Apparently she was not above ditching him at a party. Irritated, he closed the phone and stuffed it back in his pocket, glancing vaguely in the direction of the main entrance. What exactly what she expecting him to do? Talk to people? Already uneasy, he folded his hands on the table and sighed. This was going to be a long night.




Allison Hawthorne

Location: Apartment

Time: Sunday, 4 PM


"Mom, I'm home!" Allison called, opening the front door and tossing her keys onto a nearby hook. She was greeted by a grey cat, who purred briefly and brushed her leg. She scooped him up and headed for her room, passing through the rest of the flat on the way. No one was home. She scowled, rubbing the cat's head and checking the fridge for information. A handwritten note has been attached to the door with a magnet. Apparently her mother was working tonight. Initially she had been a stay-at-home mom who wanted to focus on caring for her daughter, but the rent had increased and Allison was responsible enough to take care of herself now, so she had taken on a part-time job. Her stepdad was off work, but he had been invited to a get-together race day celebration by an old friend. It was a "guy's night," but he had extended the invitation to Allison anyway. She had declined.

"Oooooh, it's so quiet, isn't it?" she asked the cat in a sing-song voice. "Poor baby, all alone at home. And I'm going out to a party, so you're gonna be alone again. Don't worry, mommy will be home in a little while."

She dropped the cat onto her bed and stretched her back with a grunt.

"Ugh, Snap needs to get a new front seat for that car," she said out loud to no one. "Alright, I better get a shower. Wait, I already got a showed earlier. Do I need another one? That race track was pretty grimy and I-" she lifted the bottom of her shirt and sniffed it. "I smell like an exhaust pipe. Or maybe it's just the shirt. But if I shower now, and something happens at the party, I'm gonna have to take a third one when I get home, UGGHHHH."

She groaned, tilting her head back and staring at the ceiling dramatically. The cat cocked its head and meowed at her. She twisted her head in return and frowned.

"Yeah, but my dress clothes are all clean and I don't want to make them smell bad if I smell bad. Alright, hang on."

An hour and a half passed as Allison constructed an outfit. It turned out that it was (mostly) just the shirt, so she decided to wait until returning home to shower again. Fortunately, her evening wear selection was limited. After a long discussion with the cat, she decided on a floral midi dress, complete with white two-inch heels and a thin silver bracelet. Satisfied, she grabbed her purse and posed dramatically in front of her bedroom mirror.

"What do you think?" she said, spinning around and placing her hands on her hips with a wide smile. The cat blinked slowly at her, then stretched and jumped off the bed. She giggled and ruffled the fur on his head.

"Thanks so much! Are you gonna be okay by yourself?" she asked, applying just enough perfume to mask the hint of smoke that still clung to her. The cat meowed and gave her a dirty look. She was using the sing-song voice again and it irritated him. Allison picked him up and cuddled him for a moment, then returned him to the floor.

"Wish me luck!" she called, grabbing the keys and heading out. The cat watched the door close, then turned to look at the purse Allison had left on the floor nearby. If anyone needed luck, it was her.
It's been a while since I've seen a mystery/puzzle RP with rooms and lateral thinking, so I'm considering making one.

Basic Unoriginal Premise

You wake up in a strange place with no memory of arriving. You find yourself among strangers, also lacking any knowledge of their whereabouts. A voice echoes out around the group of you announcing the beginning of a rather unorthodox experiment, with words of warning and encouragement. Ahead of you stands a single unmarked door, waiting to be opened...

OR

You were warned not to enter the strange house. An abandoned mansion, it is the pinnacle of ghost stories and eerie rumors. You and your companions were told to stay away, but you knew better. It was too exciting, too mysterious to be avoided. One day, you meet together to properly explore the place and put the rumors to rest. However, once you are all inside, the door slams closed behind you and locks tight. You see a note on a table in front of you that describes the house, with words of warning and encouragement. Ahead of you stands a single unmarked door ahead, waiting to be opened...

Basic Concept

This is essentially a group puzzle solving experiment, but with a threat of danger, more interaction, and some bizarre humor. Everyone is a simple human with no weapons or special abilities. I will provide details and directions in GM posts, so I will not be RP'ing a character. I'm going to shake things up a bit by giving everyone an inventory, which I will keep updated in the 0th IC post and in GM posts. I'm planning on making it more abstract and silly than serious and gritty, so don't expect continuity between rooms. Some might have no gravity. Some might turn you into animals. The premise is just a way to get everyone to the location. CS sheets will be pretty simple. Character development is not important, but interaction is.

The game with have an underlying story. I have a few ideas below. I will have a conclusion determined before starting the RP.

-If we go with the Sci-fi route, it will probably be collecting items and assembling them, or something to that effect. That'll be simpler, but that's not always a bad thing.
-If we go with the mansion one, it will probably be solving a murder, possibly with some characters being a factor. That'll give it more depth but it will depend more heavily on everyone being active.

To make this work, I'm going to need a Co-GM to help design puzzles and manage activity. If you are interested, PM me. You will need to be creative and committed for this to work. You'll also RP a character, so that you can guide other players in the right direction if they need help, rather than giving everyone a "Hints" option from the GM.

The only thing I know for certain is that the RP will have a maximum of five players, Co-GM included. Large groups just do not work well for this kind of thing. However, If you want to participate but five have already shown interest, go ahead and post anyway. You never know when someone may decide to drop out early. If I end up with too many, I'll announce a launch date and ping everyone when the OOC goes up. First five to post (including Co-GM) are in.



Aight that's it. Feedback is open.
So each cloud has a silver lining? Okay, good enough.

Silver Linings


"Huh, so it begins again," a certain man said aloud to no one as he stood on the sidewalk and glanced up at the sky. The gentle blue was being rapidly hidden by grey and black clouds, signalling the start of yet another rain storm. For you see, it was always raining here. The Sunless City, some called it. Statistically, it was very much like any other modern city; dense buildings, costly housing, and terrible traffic at certain hours of the day. It would have been a decent enough place to live if not for the weather. Some liked the rain. Some did not. Almost none liked it for at least three hundred days every year. Take into account the lightning strikes and occasionally power outages, it was not a very happy place to live, and more than a few struggled with retaining happiness.

The man on the sidewalk was not one such person. He saw past the clouds to the cheery sun that was still glowing overhead, and anyone within earshot would invariable hear a "silver lining" to whatever situations and storms had come on that particular day. Not a single thing had happened in his life that he had not found a way to look over or around to it eventually dissipating.

He was not a particularly fortunate man at that. He was merely a blue-collar worker with a simple job, one that he had retained for going on forty years. He lived alone in a small house with just enough income to pay the rent and feed himself, yet he managed to stay positive. This was a trait that had followed him from the womb, since his name was, of all things, Bartholomew Goodheart.

Anyway, dear Bartholomew had been on a morning stroll to enjoy a rare sunny day. There were still puddles and dripping eaves, but at least the glinting rays gave the water a lovely golden shimmer. He had glanced up at the bright blue expanse with a twinkle in his eye and had given it a proper smile.

"Huh, a good bit of sun in the city. Pleasant change, it is," he said in his strange form of speak. As usual, a passerby gave him a strange look for a moment before continuing on their way, phone pressed to ear as they engaged in a bitter conversation. Bartholomew watched them pass, then shrugged his shoulders.

"Ah well, there's a silver lining. At least the man is being productive. More so than myself, I should say."

No sooner were the words out of his mouth than the clouds began to return to their place. The man audibly grumbled as he attempted to open an umbrella without hanging up his phone.

"Ah well, at least ye have an umbrella," Bartholomew called to him, showing the man his empty hands. All he had was a brown leather jacket and ragged pants, as he had left his own umbrella at home. The other fellow rolled his in a most rude manner and scurried away. The first of many raindrops splattered the shoulder of his jacket as he began to walk back across town. He had traveled some distance, you see, and was not within running distance of his place of residence, and so he did not bother. He hummed a tune that was almost impossible to hear, now that the rain was in full force.

"Ah well, at least there's no lightning," he said.

No sooner were the words out of his mouth than a brilliant bolt of electricity flashed across the sky, soon accompanied by a deep roar of thunder.

"Ah well, at least it's air-lightning," he said.

A moment later, a similar bolt flickered through the sky, drawn to a rod on a nearby building. It crackled loudly, causing him to wince ever so slightly.

"Ah well, at least we have the lightning-poles to keep it away from the ground," he said, increasing his pace.

To his surprise, a third bolt of lightning tore its way through the air and hit a nearby street lamp, causing the bulb to for a fraction of a second glow brightly before bursting into a shower of glass fragments.

"Ah well," Bartholomew said after a long pause, making a turn and heading into the last straight towards his residence. "At least I'm within eye-shot of home and heat."

He jumped as a car zoomed by him, swerving across the road and, to no one's surprise but his own, crashed directly into his house. A large portion of the car was now occupying his living room. The engine came to an abrupt halt and, with a grunt, the driver shoved the door open and climbed out, apparently unharmed. Bartholomew nodded at him in approval.

"Ah well, at least the driver's not hurt."

The driver looked down at his stomach, turned very pale, and collapsed dead on the pavement. Bartholomew stood still for a moment, then shrugged.

"Ah well, at least the car can be towed. Shan't be an easy repair but it's only a building after all."

A quiet crackle came from the vehicle as a loose wire in Bartholomew's home sparked, making contact with the gaseous fumes that had been spilling into his house from the now empty tank beneath the car. With a brilliant glow that would make the sun ever so slightly jealous, the house erupted in flames.

At this point, one would likely stop pressing their fate and perhaps seek shelter elsewhere. Bartholomew Goodheart was no such man. Absolutely refusing to turn aside his stance from five or six consecutive coincidences, he spoke again:

"Ah well, at least I've got a little money in me pocket."

"Oh?" a harsh voice said beside him. He turned and found himself facing a man in a hoodie who had just emerged from a nearby alleyway. He had covered half his face with a scarf and was wielding a rather large pistol that was aimed in the direction of Mr. Goodsoul's head.

"Hand it over. Now."

Bartholomew raised his hands in surrender, then slowly removed his wallet and tossed it to the man, who scooped it up and shoved it into a pocket. He turned to retreat into the alley as a voice called to him.

"Ah well, at least I've got good health."

The robber turned back around in surprise, still waving the gun haphazardly. He was a rather inexperienced sort of robber and, as a result, did not have the safety engaged. He shot Bartholomew in the leg, causing him to collapse to the ground in a poorly-placed puddle. Wincing in pain and grabbing the injured limb, Bartholomew searched his mind for a good thing to find about this situation. He admitted that he was running short on them by now. The robber was still standing nearby in shock, seemingly unsure of whether he should run or call for help before his victim bled to death. Bartholomew caught sight of him and forced a smile.

"Ah well," he said weakly. "At least I've only been shot once."

The robber shot him again for, at this point, no real reason. Somewhere deep inside Bartholomew, an organ exploded.

Aware that he likely only had minutes to live, the poor man uttered one final positive observation. One that absolutely could not be altered. One that was so conclusive that it was at this point in history no more than a joke.

"Ah well...at least...Hitler is dead."

The robber paused, then lowered his gun and removed his hood and scarf. Bartholomew's eyes widened in shock as he saw a familiar cut of hair and mustache, one that had not been seen for many years. The man grinned an evil grin, staring him down with dark, sinister eyes. He said the last word Bartholomew Goodheart would ever hear:

"NEIN!"
Concept seems intriguing, but...

Picture of a real person I even allow face claims of stars

Name

Age

And a Novel of your character’s daring deeds, flights of fancy or a description of height or weight.


This seems a bit too barebones if there's going to be any kind of exploration or combat, or activity at all for that matter. If nothing else I'd rather list out my character's story, perks, flaws, etc. by bullet point rather than sunk into a novel. It makes referencing much simpler for myself and other players.

Just knowing what my character looks like and how old they are, like in your current CS, isn't enough to work with. I can find out all that information the first time my character meets yours.

Also, I'd advise caution with open-world freedom. I would recommend having some kind of underlying objective (talk to this person, go to this place, do this sort of task) so that, when we are done wandering around, we have someplace to go to advance the story.
Allison Hawthorne

Location: Race, Main Stands

Time: Sunday, Noon


Bouncing gently on her toes, Allison waiting for a verbal response. Ashton's body language suggested she didn't know who Snap was, but at least she didn't seem upset about the mention of her height. Or did she? She smiled, at least, but didn't speak. Allison became increasingly anxious, seriously concerned that the woman was giving her some form of silent treatment. Had she been rude? Was Ashton waiting for an apology? Would she accept one? Sometimes people didn't like hearing apologies, kinda like Kriss, but that had definitely been her fault. But this wasn't her fault. Was it?

Allison's thoughts spiraled out of control as she silently rewrote her introduction in her mind and wondered if the outcome would have been the same. Her eyes, still concealed by the aviators, began to glaze over as she attempted to restart her train of thought. Fortunately, Victoria cut in.

"Hey, Ummm I have spent too long with doctors... Sorry... Ii just... Defensive."

The girl's head visible twitched as she came back into reality. Blinking several times, she turned her head slightly to speak to the other woman.

"Oh, that's okay!" she said, reverting back to her normal perky self. "We're not doctors though, so no worries."

She nodded politely as Victoria continued to speak, forcing herself to avoid tilting her head back to make eye contact with Ashton again.

"Oh, no, she's not a race car driver. I think. I dunno, I guess I should ask her. I mean, her car is pretty much a race car, but I don't think she drives like, professionally."

She began rambling haphazardly through a variety of unrelated topics, full aware that this may not be a very good strategy. Every so often she paused for a response but none came, which prompted her to speak further. She turned her head to look back up at Kriss and Snap but their faces were lost in the crowd. Eventually she ran out of things to say and simple stood awkwardly nearby. Time was on her side though. She sensed tension in the stands and glanced up at the leaderboard, which indicated that the cars were on their final lap. Several people began chanting the name "Joel" as the unmistakable roar over the horizon signaled the approaching pack. Allison slipped her shades off to get a clearer look and noted that two cars were pressing hard at each other's sides, nose and nose for the finish. The raw energy radiating from the people in the stands made her hair stand up. The noise grew louder and the cars screamed closer as people moved to the very edge of their seats.

It was over in seconds, the cars screaming over the line and past the stands. Eyes turned upwards to the overhead screens.

[P1 Nicolosi, SCR, OHI, Nissan 300. 0]
[P2 Sato, Nissan F1, Nissan GTR,+0.035]

"Which one was our g-"

Her sentence was cut off as the crowd exploded. People everywhere were cheering, pumping fists, and giving each other high fives as the rest of the pack buzzed by almost silently in comparison to the stands. A voice called over the intercom that Victoria seemed to recognize. She turned to Allison and Ashton, beaming proudly.

"City Hall, 7.30, dress up, there's a very good event on! Our car won!"

"Okay!" Allison replied as she left the area. Ashton had silently shown support with applause and it finally occurred to Allison that perhaps the woman could not speak.

The winning car sped by again at a slower pace. The crowd erupted for a second time at the sight of the stars and stripes flying proudly from the window, and moments later the "U-S-A! U-S-A!" chant reverberated through the stands. Allison joined in instinctively. A lump formed in her throat as the flag passed her and continued down the track. Old Glory. She was never excessively patriotic, but there was a tremendous power in that flag as it danced in the breeze that everyone present could feel. Most removed their hats and either held them over their heart or threw them into the sky. Tears formed in the eyes of some. Nearby, an older man wearing a "POW - MIA" shirt held a trembling hand to his head and saluted. The elderly woman beside him wrapped an arm around him and laid against his shoulder as the rest of the onlookers on the bench saluted with him in unison.

There was something about that flag.

As the cheering continued, Allison realized that it would be more difficult now to find the rest of her squad. She noticed Ashton was looking at her again and had tilted her head towards Victoria's seat. The meaning went completely over the poor girl's head and she shrugged, flipping the sunglasses back onto her face.

"I dunno where she went. Sorry! See you around," she yelled, hoping her words were audible. She hesitated just a moment longer, again unsure of whether she was being rude or not, before twisting away and lunging up the stands, navigating carefully and moving in the general direction of where she hoped Kriss and Snap were.

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@Cyrania I don't know if you have any interest in the Deus Ex series, but someone mentioned that Adam Jensen would be a good character.
Holy CRAP this filled fast.
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