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Dragon's Oblivion (High-Casual Fantasy)

No, please, next time do! Im such a scatterbrain sometimes. Dx
Working on a post now.

Dragon's Oblivion (High-Casual Fantasy)

Wait, its only been a few days. RPs always slow down after they start.
-realizing it was me who was supposed to post-
Ah, shit. ><

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@AllIsOne No problem! I made this bed, I shall have to make a bunch of tiny edits over the course of this and that's okay.

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@Riaxh I see you there, lurking.

@AllIsOne and @Razqua, because I have changed the CS so many times, I kinda edited the two of yours. Please make sure they are still the same when you get a chance. :]

(Sorry for double posts, edits dont send mentions)

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Name:

Jakken Pantyr

Age:

269

Race:

Moon Elf

Appearance:

Jakken is 6"3 in height. His hair is black like a moonless night, cascading down and ending at the middle of his back. His skin is pale white, his face long and clean-shaven. his eyes are blood red in color. He wears leather armor, including greaves, vambraces, boots, gloves and a belt. Over that he wears a robe that reaches just under his knees. Over his shoulder is a quiver filled with steel tipped arrows laced with Hemlock. On his back he carries an ash flatbow.

Personality:

Jakken is quite arrogant and condescending. He looks at any non-elf as a lesser being, unworthy of his attention. He is brave, almost to the point of foolishness, because of his thinking that no creature can defeat him. Some might call him selfish, but he does care very much for his brethren and he does his best to assist any Moon Elf he encounters. Regarding his enemies, he is merciless and ruthless.

Morality/Religion:

Before The Great Decent Jakken was a devout follower of Sylsetria, as were many elves. Since The world went dark, Sylsetria has become weak and almost helpless, and so Jakken left her following, with the belief that she has deserted her people. Now Jakken pays homage to Elanom, The Lady of the Night. Nothing is wrong to Jakken when protecting his people.

Biography:

Growing up as the son of the king of Marduil, the biggest Moon Elf tribe in the land, puts a lot of pressure on a young elf. He was supposed to be smarter, faster, stronger and better looking than all the other elves in the tribe. His father was very distant, showing him any attention only when he would win a competition or come back from a good hunt. The only time he saw his father show any kind of feelings was when Jakken's mother died.

His father's expectations, as well as the rest of the tribe's, caused Jakken to put almost his entire time into studying. Archery, tracking and magic were only some of the things he learned during his first two-hundred and fifty years. On his two-hundred and fiftieth birthday, he set out into the dense forests on his mission.

It is a Marduil tradition that when an elf comes of age at his or her two-hundred and fiftieth birthday, that elf must choose a mission for himself. Then he proposes his mission to the council of elders who decide if it is a honorable mission or not. If they agree to it, the elf will set off to complete his mission, and not return until he has done so. If the council disapproves the mission, the council will choose a mission for the elf, which the elf then will have to complete.

When Jakken came forward before the council with his proposal, the elder elves were amazed. They quickly agreed to his proposal, and so the next day, Jakken set off. His mission: To speak face to face with Sylsetria, his matron goddess. He was out in the forests when The Great Decent happened. With everything falling and dying around him, he started to believe that Sylsetria does not really care for her followers. Caring for his tribe, Jakken returned to his tribe's city. What he saw there made him fall to his knees and weep.

Only ruin. Ruin and death. All the beautiful buildings he remembered from his childhood destroyed, huge pieces of stone laying in the streets. It was as if a huge fire-breathing giant had ran through the city, utterly destroying everything in his path. Jakken walked among the ruins, searching for life. So many bodies lay in the streets, pouring their blood into the gutters.

Jakken left the city with one goal in mind. Find Sylsetria, and avenge his tribe. He has heard whispers that a man only known as "Demon Hunter" has arrived in Uranda who has found a way to kill a god. He is known to have a huge red beard and carry a great battleaxe. Jakken must speak with this man, and find out the truth. If he will not speak, Jakken will make him.

That is how Jakken arived in Uranda.

Other Notes:

(Anything you want to add)

Class:

Ranger

Skill Points:

0 / 6

Fighting Style:

Fighting Style: Archery - 0 SP

Magic Style:

Arcane Knowledge of the Wild: Jakken spent almost his entire life training with royal rangers and royal mages in the art of the wild. The mages taught him to tap into his mana and cast Primal spells, though Jakken specialized in the Natural Aspect and the Illusion Aspect. - 1 SP

Weapons / Tools:

• Ash Flatbow - 1 SP

Skills / Abilities:

• Tracking: Jakken has learned the basics of forest tracking from some of the best trackers in the realm. Using all of his senses in their fullest, he tracks his prey. - 1 SP

Natural Abilities:

• Moon Elf: Jakken has the ability to see in low-lighted areas and with infrared (heat) vision. - 0 SP
• Natural Affinity: Quickness - 1 SP

Spells / Magical Abilities:

• Animal Tongue: Through studying Natural magic, Jakken has gained the ability to telepathically communicate with most animals. - 1 SP

Miscellaneous:

• Young Gray Wolf - 1 SP

General Equipment:

• Water Canteen
• Some Food
• Small Knife

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@Tancuras Alright, that sounds good! I didn't know if I was alright with your magic having an effect on the plane itself, but because the world is in such a state of unravel, its okay if it escalated to that after the Descent, because its been 20 years he could've gotten to that by now. Spells are good and background is good. Night vision can just be an enable/disable effect.

I actually just noticed that your character would have been a 15 yr old at the time of the Descent. I'm not sure he could've been married by then, could you just make his like 4 yrs older? It won't have any other effect on him. Sorry I hadn't noticed before. >>

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The only problem was that he was a threat to the kingdom;

After several skirmishes, Taric’s rebellion was quelled, but he fled into hiding once more.

@Tancuras

I completely missed this sentence; I was too distracted by the one before. >.< That makes it a lot better, actually. Sorry, my bad. The only issue I have with it now is it attracting the attention of the king. Just lessen the extent and its fine!

@rocketrobie2 That's alright. Thank you for letting me know!

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@AllIsOne Looks great! Accepted. I shall move him!

@Tancuras Oh, hello, he's different, I like him. I think he's leveled fine (his magic style is a bit vague, though thinking about it, you probably copied the older version of the CS that didn't have it explained, and I hadn't elaborated on it before that). I only have one issue with character, and it's his background. Mitchin came to Reath because the world entered a previously unknown state of harmony. There were no major wars or issues going on (except the Orcs, but they weren't considered people). His background contradicts that. He could've had a roaming band, but they wouldn't have been a threat to the kingdom. I think you can keep every other aspect. I love that he's a former noble, and even more love that no one would think that without knowing his history because he's frankly a bit batshit.

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@BCTheEntity Again, I take responsibilities for not making that clear in the initial post. v.v That was a mistake on my part. And, for what it's worth, I am sorry. I know having to rework a character several times can get tedious. :/
But don't think just because they aren't super powerful that they're just a step above the common person. There's a big difference between being a master of something and being merely somewhat stronger than others. It's a long process.

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@Kimiyosis Well, seduction would be Charm. But life draining would be Blood or Necromancy, either would work. (Though you can do it sexily for free)