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The Crazed Kingdom, Gabaras

@WanderingDragon

Your character looks great!

I especially like how you've described your magic and how their mana flows through their body. I should probably emphasize how mana veins affect magic but so far everyone's doing really cool stuff >:D

I just have a few questions, your character is a half-elf and 20 would most likely be like elven stages of infancy or childhood, but I'm not too certain since your character is HALF HALF elf-- ashdahdas, either way, there's not BIG problems here it's just a slight nitpick.

Other than that your character is good to go and can be thrown into the Character Bin!!! >:D

Another note--

Your character spells "Arcane Sense" is just a flavored Arcane Sense that every mage knows so if you want to replace that ability-- that's totally fine!

Grimoiric Heart - A Magical Girl Adventure

Height : 174cm | Weight: 140lb | Age: 16

Name: Ayaka Meru
Appearance:
Transformed

Details

In Ayaka's transformed appearance she sports the same exact outfit from the reference but without the headband and glasses. Her physical appearance stays primarily the same as well but her hair has lengthened to her back and a long amethyst-colored ribbon holds half of her hair up.

Description: A lackluster and lazy student, Ayaka is brazen as she is broad. Open with her opinions but simply too lazy to tell them. Sleep and the lack of is her prime enemy and attacks her anytime throughout the day. But the few occasions when she is focused or awake, she's either serious, often cold, or ready to win any sort of battle. Determination may not align with Ayaka often but when she hones on one thing, in any situation-- she will get the last say.

Grimoire:
• Title: Merlin's Prophecies
• Description: A tale of an old wizard and his exploits. Known for his patience and wise guidance, he has fought off dragons and aided a king to rise for their nation. Well known for his magical gifts, Merlin is an exotic sorcerer who helps from the shadows.
• Abilities: The Prophecies of Merlin grants Ayaka the ability to conjure a staff of which she mainly uses to aid her teammates from afar casting shields and healing injuries. But can also cast heavy-hitting elemental magicks, although, in exchange for destruction, she must wait patiently to thread her more offensive spells together via runes, magical circles, or a sacrifice of an object.
Misc:

Weaponry

Sidhe Staff
Instead of a white crystal and a smaller dangling crystal both are purple.

Grimoiric Heart - A Magical Girl Adventure

@TheWendil

AYEEEE LETS GO!

The Crazed Kingdom, Gabaras

If anyone is still interested-- four spots are open!

The Crazed Kingdom, Gabaras

@Pirouette

The Amber Grove's are specifically a collection of cities/tribes that function under a council. The Kogan's have the Kogani city and the people of Gabaras have the city of Gabaras. So you're completely fine in that aspect!

I should also provide this image for anyone that isn't in the discord!

old map

Toyomo is now Kogani, and Au'sara is now The Amber Groves. Anything outside of Somnius is considered the old world!

As for your actual sheet, it looks amazing! And worry not, the way you've described your magic is a perfect fit! Surprisingly everyone currently is in some manner leaning towards hand-focused mana-veins.

DROP YOUR CHARACTER IN THE CHARACTER BINnNnNn

The Crazed Kingdom, Gabaras

If anyone else wants an invitation to the discord please tell me! I can help a lot faster but if you're completely uncomfy with that then we can discuss through PMs on roleplayerguild if you have any problems! Otherwise, anyone who was accepted is free to make their post! I'll start pestering people if a week and a half passes by with no progress c;!

The Crazed Kingdom, Gabaras

@vietmyke

LOOKS GOOD, THROW HIM IN THE CHARACTER BIN AS WELL!! :D

The Crazed Kingdom, Gabaras

@TheWendil
Mavis is looking amazing! Throw her into the character bin! :D

The Crazed Kingdom, Gabaras

(Include a basic list of spells a maximum of five should be perfectly good. Your spells should be moderate in a way that they won't decimate cities or one-shot a powerful enemy. They are base-level magicks like a fireball or "water-shot". I suggest for the spells that you have 1-4 basic magicks and then one more 'ultimate' spell. You will be continually advancing in magic as you progress the story so you don't need to feel as if your character is underpowered! )

@DesperatePerson

@WanderingDragon

Ooh you could put into play that fugitive status-- with the arrival of the Reclamation of Gabaras, the adventure guilds have offered you a chance to "work" through your jail-time by joining the quest? :o

Otherwise, everything else sounds pretty pog

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I'll get to working on a discord and I'll send invites through PM!

Grimoiric Heart - A Magical Girl Adventure

I've updated my character sheet! it's finIsHED!