Pikmin Eye

Magical Notes - A Tale of Songs and Knights [Hiatus]

A battle against Mary? I expect nothing less than the entire building crumbling to the ground with fireworks somehow. Joking aside, you are gonna have trouble against me. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with.

Pokémon: One (~Looking for one player and a Co-GM!~)

@PlatinumSkink Sorry, I kind of regret that last OOC post. I was having a bad day so I got defensive.

Everyone fought really hard to take on a juggernaut, makes me proud to have been your opponent. So, that was actually my first forum RP battle. I'm looking for feedback on how I did since this is over.

Pokémon: One (~Looking for one player and a Co-GM!~)

@PlatinumSkink I was up way too late finishing that post up. So looking back, I probably made a mistake or two. So apologies if that wasn't a good one. I'm not sure if all posts are final sort of thing or not. I could redo that, but I'm not sure if that would be an okay thing to do. Way to screw up on the last part,me.

Pokémon: One (~Looking for one player and a Co-GM!~)

That moment when you realize the reason you didn't post for so long was because you were trying to get it perfect. Fun Fact: I had to write this two different ways until I was satisfied with my post.

Pokémon: One (~Looking for one player and a Co-GM!~)

The Red Hand

Charley

Dewmeadow

@Morose

Dewbble was running, glowing claws ready to end this. Kira was running in return, anger visibly showing on his face. Both were intent on ending this fight, the question was how who would remain standing. With a mighty roar from Kira, and a cold silence from Dwebble, they met for another clash.

@PlatinumSkink

Again they were destined to end this, until Rowan threw his entire bag in the way. A momentary confusion is what he was hoping for, and that's exactly what it did. Although the thing offered little protection from Dwebble's attack, anything was better than a direct hit. The backpack was shredded through in one hit, with a weakened attack colliding with Kira. Kira in return had to hit through the makeshift haze of fabric. His attack still hit, guided by the bright light on the other side. Rowan saved Kira's skin from a devastating hit, running off to find a Tailow. He knew his plan could fail, but he had to try.

@Hatakekuro

Charley was set on his charge up until he found his world flipped by Yasha. Held high in the air, he quickly realized it was a mistake to fight directly. Yasha easily threw Charlie to the ground, something cracking loudly. Turns out two leers really makes anything hurt, a lot. Being thrown on the ground, Charley was already seeing stars. Woozy, and far too exhausted, he turned to expect Dwebble triumphantly cheering his win. Instead there were scraps of fabric everywhere. What happened over there?

At a first glance, it looked like both were still standing. A few seconds later one of them collapsed. As the scraps of fabric blew away on the wind, it revealed the truth. Slumped on the ground, was Dwebble. It's eyes were rolling around as the fight finally left it's eyes. Kira was saved by Rowan's split second action, being spared a knockout. Food and fabric sprawled over the bridge, with a single unbroken potion rolling away.

-Dwebble is Unable To Battle-

Charley sat there, in disbelief. Not only was Dwebble beaten physically, but so was he. It hurt to stand up, not as much as the thought that they just beat him. With a scowl on his face, he said, "No way, that's impossible. You can't be new trainers, who told you I was here?" with a deep breath he pointed at Yasha and continued to speak, "I will get revenge on you bug boy."

He didn't care what they thought, he walked over to pick up Dwebble. They went through a lot, and both suffered for it. The least he could do was make sure they left in one piece. He gave one last glare, he almost did it, he could taste victory. He simply said one last thing, "I suppose you want a reward too, huh? Take it, just don't beat me or Dwebble any further. Oh, and I'm sure you guys might be tough enough to be in The Red Hand. If you are interested, look for a girl named Pearl" Digging in his pockets, he quickly threw paper on the ground, wads on the ground from a balled fist.

-Charley Dropped 600 Pokedollars-

A horribly beat up trainer carrying his fainted Pokemon, one hand on his side, the other holding Dwebble. He struggled to walk away like the pain was nothing. With a sharp breath, he dashed as fast as he could away from his opponents. Common sense says they might try to take his Pokemon away now. The bridge was cleared finally, with the three trainers successful.

-Mara Esclus, Suzuki Yasha, and Rowan Branchers Are Victorious-

Pokémon: One (~Looking for one player and a Co-GM!~)

Random bump for @Zardoric to pay attention.

That being out of the way, sorry about the lack of post. Amazingly that backpack has set me back. I curse the world where a backpack makes me rewrite most of my post. That being said, I'll get a post by tomorrow.

Pokémon: One (~Looking for one player and a Co-GM!~)

Okay, I see the problem. Man, I messed up back there. Apologies, I thought you were talking of a more recent one. Now I am clear which post was the problem, and I can fix it. Thank you for the feedback, I have edited it to make more sense.

Pokémon: One (~Looking for one player and a Co-GM!~)

Hatakekuro, I'll add Charley's CS if you run into him again.

As for PlatiunumSkink, I dug around. I found the line.

-Snipped quote by PlatinumSkink-
'M-Mara. You won't win.' He stuttered. 'Return Kira to his Pokéball, and let's run.' He continued, directed at both Mara and Yasha.

Kept it short, but this line was before my last one. You didn't elaborate very much on it, but you expressed an opinion. So I merely echoed it. Sorry if I lost the idea on the way.

Pokémon: One (~Looking for one player and a Co-GM!~)

Oh, that's not Charley, the info you read was The Bloody Hand leader. I didn't make a character sheet for Charley. If you want, I can add it.

Pokémon: One (~Looking for one player and a Co-GM!~)

@hatakekuro You know, assuming he's not straight out killed from the blood lust in the air, he might become a rival. Now, where did I say he was 29 year's old?