ReaptheMusic

Obsolete Angels

Aw well hey yourself. ^^

Monsters Hotel

No, don't worry I'm quite flattered.

Monsters Hotel

waiting on oakman before I post again ^^ Also I think a plot, a silly one even, perhaps, would be nice. For now, however, let's just develop what we got! :3

Obsolete Angels

Ethan believes that Mechangels are a step backwards in progress. The biggest appeal Cyborangels have to Ethan is their unique techno-organic composition, and that once they are made they will continue to function and serve. He sees a story with each Cyborangel that he works on. Every small notch, damaged component, and broken piece tells a part of its tale and Ethan feels good knowing that he is repairing something that will go out to do great things. He almost thinks of them as individuals without being aware of it. Mechangels on the other hand, feel cold and lifeless to Ethan. Whenever they arrive at his shop they are branded obsolete because a new model pops up. The old ones are immediately decommissioned (cannibalized for parts) when he receives them. Ethan thinks there is no real story to be told in a mechangel. They are a simple cog in a machine. He probably wouldn't have cared unless it was for the fact that Mechangels are gradually replacing Cyborangels.

@pure493

Alright then, he's accepted ^^ Go ahead and put him in the characters tab.

Obsolete Angels

Okay, never mind, I shall withdraw from this RP. I don't feel like I'll be having much fun with all these analing, Nazi-ing and OCD-ing being in the way. I don't want to spend the next few weeks scrutinizing and fretting over every goddamn post I make. It also helps to be civil and to show respect to your fellow RPers, GM, or not, if you expect the same. I could spend the next post attempting to justify why I organized the CS the way I did, but I really don't want to blow this up. So, have a nice day, and enjoy the RP. No hard feelings. I respect the way you do things, but I'm just not agreeable with your style. So let's agree to disagree. Just to let you know, I did not half-ass the CS. I spent the entire day at work perfecting it, scrutinizing it, ecetera. It's too bad I won't get to be playing her, but that's alright. It would have been nice if you were patient and understanding with your critiques, because at least, the effort poured into character sheets deserve their due respect.

@Silverlight138

If you choose to give up after one critique, then I suppose you simply didn't want to be apart of this rp bad enough. The critique given to Scarlett was far harsher than it was to you. That being said, I wish you the best. Have a nice day. @pure493 I like him a lot. You don't have to add this to your CS but I'm just curious before I accept him. Why, specifically, does he dislike Mechangels?

The Mary-Sue Acadamy for Speshul Gurls and Bois. (Mary-Sue RP)

I too like Drakengard, though I feel I prefer Nier. (I've only had the misfortune of playing the second Drakengard game, but eh.)

Titans Together!

BANG! Pant pant pant ....gulp. BANG! The pale alien continued to get up and run back to the power crystals on all their separate pedestals. Each time she lifted one and shoved it into her mouth, she was blasted back against the wall again. But damn those crystals tasted good, and the ship surely would be dying from the lack of power soon. She was beginning to make her-shaped craters in the sides of the power room. But every time she was blasted back, she ran forward, persistent, crystal 'crumbs' left behind in her wall-crater. Thank Gaia she was durable. Never before had it payed off to not be organic to another planet so well. BANG! Again, her body skyrocketed backwards with the force of the crystals, but slowly she was getting her strength back from all the blood lost. Even better, with her persistence she'd already eaten through a third of the crys- BANG! God she was going to have such a headache later. She groaned as she pulled herself from the wall, panting. Ogh... c'mon she could do this. Her petite belly was already so full of crystals. She stopped, sweating and leaned over on her knees. "Wwwwhhhheeeeeewww...." She exhaled. All this running and momentum of being blasted back was starting to get to her. Like a rollercoaster where the only option was to stand instead of sit. And be only held down by your ankles. "Aagghh...!" She picked herself back up and continued on her cy- BANG! T-this was worth it- BANG! For the good of the- BANG! It w- BANG! E- BANG! Marilyn peeled herself off the crater ridden wall, laughed airlessly, and fell onto her face. "A...ahaha....haa...hooooo...." A little over half the crystals had been eaten and taken off of their panels. Maybe it was time to get a to-go box...?

Obsolete Angels

<Snipped quote by ReaptheMusic> To answer your first request, no I wasn't able to find an adequate picture to summarize how she looks like in her current state. Thus, to make up for that, I provided lengthy descriptions in my character sheet. Regarding the latter part of your msg, I sort of sneaked in her personality description under bio. But if you'd prefer it, then yes, sure, I can input something under personality. Also, for the sake of everyone's convenience, I'll rename her Zaneria.

@Silverlight138

You seem to miss the point of the name. You can keep her original name, just shorten it with a nickname into something that citizens wouldn't feel they were tripping over when they said it, like 'Eldvi' or something. I don't care. I want the personality where it belongs, in the personality tab. Your first picture shows her original self and hides a lot of her features. With her new appearance, those would be showing. You can keep your description of what she looks like (Please move that under 'appearance' as well instead of where you currently have it) but have another photo of what she looks like now, just as a reference of what to go off of. There is no description of hair or eyes so I really don't have any idea of what she truly looks like, which is why I implore you, for the last time, for a photo of her without her garb. It's not difficult to follow simple directions, and put things in their proper place. Right now you're showing me you can't follow basic instructions. Fix this as soon as you can. I will go over your CS in depth later.

<Snipped quote by ReaptheMusic> Let's go with 42

@Mr_pink

He would be 22 then when the angels descended and have a pretty good opinion on how quickly the world shifted around him. (it was only twenty years ago, not a long time for Earth to become the highly futuristic and developed New Society it is today)

Obsolete Angels

@Silverlight138 Okay so I can't go over all your stuff on your CS because I'm about to get to class, but in the meantime, if you could provide a photo of what Eldvestia (the name should be shortened to the convenience of those she worked for) of her current state? Also, PLEASE provide the five word personality description. It's five words BECAUSE it will shine in the rp, declining to give me that small bit is almost pointless.

Obsolete Angels

My CS has been completed. Do refer to page 1. EDIT: On second thoughts, allow me to make some slight edits. EDIT again: Okay, now I'm done. I feel like there are gonna be questions rocketing my way @.@ Oh dear. I spent quite a bit of time tossing the turning the viability and realistic-ness of my CS over in my head, so hopefully I don't have to deal with issues like 'mary stu' or 'plain illogical nonsense'. XD ps: I really hate my time zone. It's like in the day for me when y'all are sleeping, so the most common problem I've always been dealing with throughout my RP experience is waking up in the morning to find that I have to catch up on a whole loada crap T_T

@Silverlight138

Don't worry about it. We go by the two-post rule for when the IC is up, BUT! If you feel left behind I can take it down to one post per day, that way everyone has a chance to catch up! ^^

Oooh, I'm interested. Question, can one play more than one character? (One revolutionary and one military, hehehe.)

@PaulHaynek

Certainly given your CS is up to my standards! Have at it :3