ReaptheMusic

The Mary-Sue Acadamy for Speshul Gurls and Bois. (Mary-Sue RP)

@Unfortunately There's a special video on the internet for that character name@Izaka Sazaka https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ABC5TRSj9gE

The Mary-Sue Acadamy for Speshul Gurls and Bois. (Mary-Sue RP)

@The book of bad jujuOh NO omg XD This looks amazing

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<Snipped quote by ReaptheMusic> Oh. I thought I get to control both of them fully. Oh well I guess I'll control the Russian guy. I prefer playing as the wacky revolutionary. <Snipped quote by ReaptheMusic> URA!!

@PaulHaynek

So Yuri?

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...New Society...

Rain beats down on the flooding pavements of what used to be San Francisco, once a landscape of hills, a nostalgic sense of old city scapes, now a blue and white glowing city. A beacon of hope amid the darkness surrounding it. Cities didn't always have artificial rain. But nothing was real anymore. Weather was always controlled based on the polls of citizens on their holographic touch pads provided by the sparkling and sleek Mechangels. One could guess they were tired of the sunshine. It was easy to do so, what with the atmosphere modified by specialized robots. Global warming was a thing of the past. Was that really such a good thing? Water rushed down the mass hills of the city, the streets deserted with the exception of a few people leisurely strolling through it, completely dry thanks to the Mechangels who shielded them with their bodies. The rain was already getting into their slightly exposed gears, wearing away at waterproof materials. It was like it was trying to force them to rust, but they wouldn't. Mechangels were more powerful than a little rain. Near an alleyway, a small mouse washed its furry cheeks in the puddles near its home. As one of the large mechanical angels came by however, it scurried. As the mouse passed a garbage can on the side of an alleyway, already nearly full of water that washed the debris into the rest of the street--which would later then be picked up by the vigilant trash-bots--it did not care to notice the body of a young woman stuffed into it. As synthetic as the rain itself. Her dead eyes were turned to the sky, her mouth hanging open in awe, or perhaps horror, at the things place before her. The rain fell harder, giving the illusion of tears going down her cheeks. Her green hair was soaked to the core, already beginning to rust. Everyone knew Cyborgels were not stronger than a little rain. Her lips trembled. Her eyes began to show life. The Cyborgels body thrashed in malfunction, taking the trash bin down and her along with it. The water that had been collecting in the bin poured all over her naked back and caused her to stumble. She couldn't feel the ground below her scrape against her palms. She would never feel them scrape against her palms. Her small body scrambled for cover on the opposite side of the alley, which had shelter from the rain beneath an exposed overhang. She clung to the wall, gasping. She had never needed the air before as badly she did now. Her pale forehead pressed against the grimy wall before her. Naked. Alone. Unsensory. She began to wail, the misery of her existence returning to her as it did to others of her same kind all around New Society. The rain drowned the sound of misery. The rain drowned the sound of ignorance. But for once, the rain didn't drown out reality.

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@Aeonumbra@Mr_Pink@Fairess@PaulHaynek Congradulations, you made it in just in time. Finish (or for Aeo, start) your Character sheets. Since you didn't get in too late you'll be happy to know that the IC is about to begin and you won't be too late for the party. To Everyone Else Welcome to New Society

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@Fairess First of all, I love the detail you put into her appearance. Before I even read her bio I can tell a story about her just on the information given to me there alone. It's short, it's delicious, and complex but simple at the same time. I applaud you. I could read your writing style for hours, and Nemesis legitimately scares me. She seems to be a force to be reckoned with within reason with discernible flaws to nicely balance out her character. However, on the topic of your Bio I ask you to PM me about what you mean by dispatching troops, exactly. That might interfere with my future plans for this rp depending on exactly what you mean by that. @PaulHaynek I'm thinking I may only accept one of your characters at this time. We have other people working on getting in too and I think I'll make the cutoff after you [Aeonumbra and Mr_Pink's characters will be the last ones I'll allow]. That being said, I'll critique both characters and you can choose which one you want to edit or keep. Your writing contains a few typos, but nothing bad. The style is very refreshing. I'm a little confused as to why the village was attacked, but I like that you've set a goal for them to achieve within the rp, and as the GM I'd be more than happy to give you a climactic battle when the time is right with me playing the rival of whoever you choose as an NPC. Of course you would still have your hand in it so that I could provide for you the best experience possible whenever they may clash, just pm me about it. To answer your other question, no, mankind doesn't know that the politicians are demons, as they're disguised and have always been disguised as humans. In truth not even the revolutionaries know. Nobody in New Society knows how deep this rabbit hole goes, and They'd go mad if they realized it led straight to hell.

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Before I go over these CS's,@PaulHaynek@Fairess We were going to start the IC today since we have five, however, you still have the chance to be accepted granted I approve. I have warned you in the Rules that I am very harsh when it comes to critiqueing and helping to shape these characters to fit the world. And Paul, the example pic for the Mechangels is under the hider (within the said hider)

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Alright! We got enough to get this ball rolling! The first IC will go up sometime tomorrow

Titans Together!

Marilyn shakily made herself get up, groaning and clutching at her chest in discomfort as she went to bite into the next one. The alarms were still blaring loudly, starting to give her inorganic mind a severe headache. The red light flashing was enough to make her go mad. Her teeth rested against the crystal, bracing herself for impact. Then she pulled back. "Wait a minute," She thought aloud as she pulled back, her pupils shrinking. "I'm dumb." She set the crystal down on the floor-gently-instead of eating it. Her strength was returning with her discomforting meal, she found herself able to run again. She started laughing as she shoved crystals off their pedestals left and right, moving much faster than she had been. Faster due to the blood loss, but just as durable, she was getting close to completely discarding the ships power source.

Titans Together!

I know all ya'll are doing your own thing but 5real Marilyns situation... is pretty hilarious.