Silver Carrot

Axxx Drk - Female Prison for The Supernatural

Try this with Aelotte, she'd have taken your face by now.

Rose Of The Nations

Nation Name: Kraal Thauken

Population: Around 700,000

Religion(s): Though no deities are worshiped, the Thaukon people give thanks to the land, sea and sky for bringing them life. The three together is called the Trinitum, and prayers are given in thanks.

Government: Monarchy, though strength is respected over bloodlines. Once the current king (called a Rostor in Thoukon tongue) dies, a tournament is held, and the winner is crown the new Rostor. Individual settlements are watched over and taken care of by females, often elderly, who act as mayors, and the males and young, strong women are needed as soldiers or farmers.

Geography: The Thaukon inhabit a land that is mostly hills, mountains and valleys. Any land flat and fertile enough for farming or grazing is used as such, meaning that the Thaukon mostly live on hills or mountainsides.

Size: 13,500 Square Miles

Inhabitants: Kraal Thauken is run by a population of Wolf-men called the Thaukon who have been on this earth for as long as human records have been kept. They have a simple way of life, agriculture being only a recent addition to the previously hunter-gatherer culture. They are a very tribal people, though blood does not matter to them as much as strength. Village elders organize and take care of settlements, but it is the strong who are feared and respected. It is the strong whose order are followed by word of raven.

Is this ok?

The Skytower Rebellion

When the gun was pointed at Taleste, she froze, and put her hands up. She did not want to get shot, but she also did not want to get taken in. Getting arrested was a better alternative to getting shot, but escaping was the best option of all. The scary guy's attention was drawn. She could try to run past. No. She would definitely get shot. Why did she have to come here? A leather jacket isn't worth this. If she survives, she's enjoying every second of life she has, and never taking risks like this again.

What if the mob find the corridor she came down? She couldn't just stand here either. No, her only option of survival was to stand behind the scary guy and then let him take her in. Her biggest problem was trying to disuade him from shooting her. Sometimes the simplest answer is the best one.

She held her hands up in the air and jogged towards SID, shouting "Don't shoot! Don't shoot! I surrender! Arrest me if you have to but protect me, please!"

Rose Of The Nations

I might wait until somebody else posts a CS so I know exactly what's expected of me in terms of length and detail.

Axxx Drk - Female Prison for The Supernatural

I only edit on the fly if my post is under two paragraphs, which happens a lot to me.