Syben

Deadland Wasteland. [Beware Zombies! They Bite!]

Feb: That CS was perfectly done (though we have wait to see on the equipment) Playing the technologically advanced survivalist in the group, I welcome his primitive counter part. I don't see it as a direct encroachment onto his role as a survivalist, but more of a cohesion that can prove interesting withing the roleplay.

Since I am in the (incredibly slow) process of converting everything to a google doc. (Haven't had a hell of a lot of time to do that, but I will) I'd be willing to give you the Khu'lu faction, as in creatively, but only if you want it. I will have a Faction CS up thursday. Otherwise I will rewrite it and make sure it fits with your shaman, but if you had a certain vision I'm willing to give you the creative freedom with them. As reap will do with something she is thinking up. (Unfortunately Fire if you're reading this, The Silver Hand I have grand schemes for and cannot release their custody. They will be a part of the main storyline eventually, and it will be important.)

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Snow: I've never been one to lie. The biggest differences I see between casual and advanced players are the time they take to flesh out their writing. What do you think when you make that decision to time-line skip up to this point, and look back on the single paragraph you have? The biography is supposed to be meaningful information to help us understand your vision of a character. You started when she was child, did nothing else happen during her life to affect the out come of her development as a person? What's the inbetween, I want the story when she was 7 and the cat tied to kill her. I want tales of her time in the wild, how it shaped her as a person, how it molded her. I want the in-between.

Just so you are warned. At no point in this roleplay will I accept less than two paragraphs. That being said, you're CS was not half bad. Lacking in the bio, the gear could use some updating but we'll get to that. What I want write now is for you to show me that you want to be here, that you're willing to put in the effort to advanced yourself creatively when you write. If you can show me that through the biography, then we will work our the rest of the minor kinks and get you over to the IC.

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It is 5.am and I am going to bed. I will check up tomorrow if I can, my lady is coming down and we have things to take care of, so Thursday at the latest.

Final decisions will be made when I return.

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It's all fun and games until someone wipes their ass in the water supply

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Monochromatic Rainbow said
I claim the role of the dedicated asshole socially awkward handywoman!EDIT: Should I say "I just went and demanded information from the first person I saw." instead, hmm?

Because you wanted it to be that way. Even you cannot resist the pull of Kapu's leader-esque character!!

data549 said
"Eh? Looks like someone will be having a... Accident."

Oh man, I don't think they have diapers on this world.

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Monochromatic Rainbow said
Alice just went and demanded information from the first person she saw. That being said, Lily's a lot more likely to be the leader than most anyone else from what I see.

You make it seem like you didn't make your character do that haha :P

SEE Kapu. We're going to put a crown on that sheep bahaha.

Deadland Wasteland. [Beware Zombies! They Bite!]

Go ahead and make a CS. I highly suggest looking at a couple of the others.

I will help you (and by help I mean nit pick) with cs ideas (ie: skills, gears, etc.) (I did it to everybody else, it's not a bad thing, just me being ocd)

Secondly, if you consider your level of writing under advanced that is not terms for dismissal. But I will push to you to improve.

I look forward to seeing your CS if you wish to stick around. PM me with any thoughts and questions.

Also keep in mind we use a roles system here. In the second post on the main page you'll see "the cast" , next to each character is a [label]. Try not to stray into those identifiers, one of each makes for diversity and challenge.

If you want ideas on specific roles your character can assume PM me. (Because only I know what the future holds).

If you want to see how NOT to make your CS, scroll up to musketeer's.

Deadland Wasteland. [Beware Zombies! They Bite!]

Go ahead and make a CS. I highly suggest looking at a couple of the others.

I will help you (and by help I mean nit pick) with cs ideas (ie: skills, gears, etc.) (I did it to everybody else, it's not a bad thing, just me being ocd)

Secondly, if you consider your level of writing under advanced that is not terms for dismissal. But I will push to you to improve.

I look forward to seeing your CS if you wish to stick around. PM me with any thoughts and questions.

Also keep in mind we use a roles system here. In the second post on the main page you'll see "the cast" , next to each character is a [label]. Try not to stray into those identifiers, one of each makes for diversity and challenge.

If you want ideas on specific roles your character can assume PM me. (Because only I know what the future holds).

Deadland Wasteland. [Beware Zombies! They Bite!]

TheMusketMan said
Hey, just wanted to say that I'm not gonna be in this one. One of those things where this requires a lot of thought and attention and with school and other things I don't think I would be able to make something acceptable or have the time to do so, hope you guys have fun ^_^

I though so, but it's cool. I understand making the jump from casual to advanced isn't the easiest of things. Enjoy life, may you prosper in bountiful roleplays.

Hanami said
Phew, finally finished up. Sorry about that, I'll be more prudent in the future.

It's not bothersome. Nobody has any complains at the speed our little roleplay trolly is tugging along.

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I'm telling you Kapu, Lily is a leader. Everyone is flocking to her.

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Mob guy isn't so useless, just saying.

Now that meditating bastard, oh man, he really get on my nerves.

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Bright_Ops said
It took you this long to figure it out? Still, you beat everyone else. You get to live.

Am I the only one that thinks he was eating some damn good ex-fiance stew?