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The Jedi Master known as Crim Drayson had found his way to Nar Shadda through the criminal element. It was truly the smartest plan that Crim could muster. With the way the criminal underworld behaved toward the jedi, no one would be able to pinpoint him out from the masses. It also helped that he didn't wear the traditional jedi robes, and his face wasn't truly recognizable unless someone was heavily into the politics of the Jedi. Another notable aspect was that his blindness made him seem not as dangerous as he truly was. His mind shifted from thought to thought on his current situation and what may have become of those that survived Operation Knightfall. Memories of watching members he had grown to care for cut down and his own student that he had just helped obtain Knight had laid dead before him. A travesty that needed to be rectified but, what could Crim possibly do on his own against the entire Empire?
He would have to find the other Jedi. Without them to help handle the peace nor to help rally the masses then the Empire could steam roll everything. Crim knew the tenants of the Jedi truly forbid revenge but, he didn't see this as such. Leaving the Empire unchecked could provoke the Dark Side of the Force. The Force led his hand and any others that happened to survive; This fact prodded Crim's mind into the very belief that one must gather forces and face the Empire for the crimes they would one day commit. For now there was nothing he could truly; finding any of those that escaped was a far greater task currently. Words whispered by those stated that the local bar "Smugglers Waterhole" would be a place to catch info.
The walk to the bar was short and uneventful. It was the sense that he felt when he got closer that alluded to the nature of the commotion already in motion. Sound from blasters caught his interest just a bit. His ears picked up on the sound of a lightsaber; such a distinct sound entranced him to activate his force sight. Translucence filled his vision, the force allowing him to see directly through the wall. Many people were scattered around the bar and he could see the young jedi wielding their lightsaber alongside a group. Suddenly there was an explosion at the outer-wall. Too much was happening at the front door and Crim devised a better idea to go through the back entrance in the alley close-by. Crim deactivated the force sight and quickly made his way around the bar's outer area. One force jump sent him soaring over three Nar Shaddian's attempting to go through back with blasters ready.
Orange light from Crim's lightsaber resonated off the metal of their blasters before he swiftly cut through all three using his obvious speed advantage. A hand wave kept them from retaliating as Crim used a mind trick to influence them to turn the other way. Attention diverted back to his comrades in danger. Crim ran into the bar, throwing his lightsaber with deadly precision. The orange blade cut through one of the blasters aimed at the Padawan. "I see others have found themselves back in trouble." Jedi Master Crim commented on the situation.
He would have to find the other Jedi. Without them to help handle the peace nor to help rally the masses then the Empire could steam roll everything. Crim knew the tenants of the Jedi truly forbid revenge but, he didn't see this as such. Leaving the Empire unchecked could provoke the Dark Side of the Force. The Force led his hand and any others that happened to survive; This fact prodded Crim's mind into the very belief that one must gather forces and face the Empire for the crimes they would one day commit. For now there was nothing he could truly; finding any of those that escaped was a far greater task currently. Words whispered by those stated that the local bar "Smugglers Waterhole" would be a place to catch info.
The walk to the bar was short and uneventful. It was the sense that he felt when he got closer that alluded to the nature of the commotion already in motion. Sound from blasters caught his interest just a bit. His ears picked up on the sound of a lightsaber; such a distinct sound entranced him to activate his force sight. Translucence filled his vision, the force allowing him to see directly through the wall. Many people were scattered around the bar and he could see the young jedi wielding their lightsaber alongside a group. Suddenly there was an explosion at the outer-wall. Too much was happening at the front door and Crim devised a better idea to go through the back entrance in the alley close-by. Crim deactivated the force sight and quickly made his way around the bar's outer area. One force jump sent him soaring over three Nar Shaddian's attempting to go through back with blasters ready.
Orange light from Crim's lightsaber resonated off the metal of their blasters before he swiftly cut through all three using his obvious speed advantage. A hand wave kept them from retaliating as Crim used a mind trick to influence them to turn the other way. Attention diverted back to his comrades in danger. Crim ran into the bar, throwing his lightsaber with deadly precision. The orange blade cut through one of the blasters aimed at the Padawan. "I see others have found themselves back in trouble." Jedi Master Crim commented on the situation.
Sep said
That made little sense at the end there.
Force vision, know one of the people on Nar Shadda well, picked up by Beskads clones. Those are your three main ways to us. If you can't think of something tomorrow morning I'll sort it out.
Sorry. It was late and I was tired. My...ability to put words together was greatly inhibited.
I forgot about the useful of Force Vision in seeing when friends or students were in danger. Considering it can be that Crim helped teach initiates from the clan Zak was from and since Jedi Knight Drak is from the same temple...could have been friends in some degree. Either or to make Force Vision work.
To be honest, I never read the Mara Jade/Palpatine Book. I just know of Palpatine's savagery.
Could be a turn and was helping younglings force train. Though it'd a thing if he was enough to send a good images or such.
Could be a turn and was helping younglings force train. Though it'd a thing if he was enough to send a good images or such.
Sep said
That is only between Jedi who have a family connection or another strong bond. E.g. Luke and Mara Jade. Leia and Jaina. Besides in SW Jedi Telepathy you can only really send feelings/images. Some Jedi are better at it than others but still not enough for words.
Actually yeah they can send words. Most jedi actually skilled in telepathy are only able to send short sentences at a time. Palpatine could send telepathic messages from miles to literally star system lengths away to Mara Jade. Those two didn't share a bond of any kind. Kit Fisto, and Plo Koon are notable. But I understand where you are going. Oh and Luke who could mind fuck an entire planet in one of the books. Those are technically exceptions outside of those that lack the bonds needed. Besides I forget in my own idea that I don't know where they are at to even use telepathy if Crim had focused on such a thing to Kit Fisto or Palpatine levels. Lolz.
Never mind that idea then. >_> <_<
MY idea was to connect to another Jedi with telepathy since high level Jedi are known for far ranging telepathy...in EU that is. Could help those at Jorga's palace when it is attacked but I see they are already going to get some help. Could get in trouble with some bounty hunters before running off to the bar. So many ways to do things.
May I ask where they are currently? I was reading few things and saw that someone was in trouble with the troops.
Sep said
Blindness, Okay.Master, Okay with the skill he appears to have.Raised by Parents: This is the only issue I have. Even if his parents remained in the order for whatever reason he would not have been raised by them, or at least not them alone. They would try to keep attachment between them limited. As far as Crim would be aware they were just two extra Jedi knights who took a special interest in him. IF you want however you can add that you found out about them nearer your trials.
If you noticed from his history, his age meant to say 33. I edited that accordingly. Also dropped the dual wield since it makes no sense for someone so deep in using the force to not have a free hand to use it.
I should change words. More so I should change it to the academy raised him more so then his parents actually did. They more...as you said, took a special interest in him in his eyes. I will agree with you. He'd have learned near his trials..
Finally finished. I was extra busy plus I got real sick which affected my quality and creativity a bit. Hopefully its still good enough.
Name:
Crim Drayson
Age:
33
Gender:
Male
Species:
Human
Level:
Master
Class:
Consular
Force Abilities:
Force Speed
Telekenesis
Force Sense
Mind Trick
Force Healing
Force Jump
Force Barrier
Pyrokinesis
Force Sight
Force Stasis
Battle Meditation
Non-Force Related Skills:
Since his inception into the Jedi Order, Crim has studied the history of the Jedi, Sith, and the Force. He holds an intrinsic knowledge over all that pertains to history and is known as a scholar of such. Dabbling in diplomacy and the political aspects of the galaxy sparked an interest in the Jedi standing within the Galaxy. Though Crim is not unlike his brethren, taking up an adequate knowledge in hand to hand.
Lightsaber Forms:
Form III: Soresu
Form VIII: Jun-Sai - Where Vapaad is direct and staccato, Jun-Sai is circular and flowing. The lightsaber, as well as the Jedi wielding it, is treated as a total weapon. An opponent of a Jun-Sai user can face not only the blade of a lightsaber, but strikes from its hilt, punches, kicks, elbows, knees, and head butts.
With the Force guiding the user's movements, the graceful precision of Makashi and the acrobatic movements of Ataru combine to create a dance-like whirlwind of death. The duelist moves his body just out of reach of his opponent's attacks while positioning his counter-attacks at the most unprotected targets of his enemy. By sinking deeply into the Force, the Jun-Sai duelist can anticipate his opponents movements, allowing him to block attacks before they happen.
One similarity to Vapaad is the use of emotions to power the style. Unlike Vapaad, instead of tapping into the feelings of enjoyment combat brings, the Jun-Sai duelist focuses feelings of determination. Fear, anger, and doubt are compressed into a tight ball in the pit of the duelist's stomach, and forged into an absolute Will to defeat the enemy. When facing a Jun-Sai master, it is said that one's life is measured in only seconds after his Lightsaber is activated.
Lightsaber hilt and colour:
Orange Lightsaber
Weapons:
[I]N/A
Other Equipment:
Crim carries quite a few items around that symbolizes his heart, family, and his love of the past. These items include vibroblades attached to his hip in the shape of wakizashi styled in the ancient samurai culture, a pouch that holds a trinket of his mother, and most sentimentally is the kabuki mask constructed specifically by a padawan that he once trained alongside. A commlink is on his person at all times to keep in contact with his allies.
History:
A product of two Jedi Knights, Crim was born in the very temple that his parents had grown up in and fallen in love. Crim was a by-product of an Echani Mother Seriana, and Korun Father Teilo Drayson which gave the newborn a skin tone brighter then that of a full blood Korun but darker than a full blood Echani. Both Knights were reprimanded by the Order for breaking Jedi Law and conceiving a child that could influence their emotions, thereby bringing them to the Dark Side if unlucky. Ban would not be the punishment doled out to the couple as they held a deep connection to the Order and were allowed to keep tabs on their force sensitive child like others before them. Force Sensitivity was found to exist in the young child around his early years near the first birthday. While not outstanding by any means, Crim was noted for having a slightly higher count then his own father.
By the time that the toddler could comprehend the ability to walk and learn, he was enrolled into the Jedi Academy.within the clan of the Falsi. Training and study was the name of the game whilst in the academy. Teachings of the Jedi spurned an interest in history and standing within Crim; this also helped a garner a friendship in a Nikto by the name Gau-Rin. Gau-Rin was a more eager child to learn the physical side of the Force and Jedi teachings. The boys did not agree on everything, subsequently starting a chain reaction that would lead all the way to their adulthood. Several years of Academy training could only prepare Crim for the inevitable
Initiate Trials came swift upon the younglings. Crim and Gau-Rin were ecstatic to finally engage in the trials that would mark them as padawans. The trials were not truly difficult as Crim has once thought they would be. Studying had led him to recite the Jedi Code like he was just taking a breath. Construction of the lightsaber came to him after he was gifted an orange crystal by his mother. Images flooded his mind while he crafted the lightsaber that would guide his hand for many years. A great master known as Mace Windu took a deep interest in the initiate and watched intently on how Crim would handle the final test; a test to survey the dark side. Crim was placed in-front of Gau-Rin. He could feel the dark side within Gau-Rin's aggression but, there was a glimmer of hope, a light that could be salvaged into a true Jedi. The test came to it's completion and both boys' graduated to Padawan.
Mace Windu took Crim under his wing. Training with Mace Windu was an astonishing process. A master Jedi of Mace’s caliber could almost instantly tell just how to work with Crim. He saw the weaknesses and strengths of his padawan, in turn helping the boy create a form parallel to that of Vaapad. Crim’s trained heavily alongside another human padawan. The padawan became close with Crim until several years later when he failed a test given to him and showed how close to the Dark Side he actually was. Before the Padawan left, he gifted Crim with the very mask that Crim would keep for many years.
Ten years passed within a blink of an eye. Mace Windu was confident that his final padawan was ready to undertake the Trials of Knighthood. His trials would be different to accomadate his skills and influence their decision. Lately his father and his Padawan Gau-Rin had went missing during an investigation. Crim left with Mace Windu and they took off to the back world planet. Two days passed before the duo was able to track down Seriana and Gau-Rin. Amongst the two was a steep dark energy of the force and the dismembered corpse of Crim’s father. What Mace believed would be Crim’s fall and explosion of emotion...was quite the opposite. Crim possessed a level of calm befitting a true knight. It was Gau-Rin that attacked first and began to battle between the Padawans.
Gau-Rin was truly a force to be reckoned with in dueling whilst Crim was the better with the force. The fight pushed deeper into the psyche of both men. An end came upon Crim’s eyes and face was badly burned by a near miss of the Nikto’s light saber. Seriana proved to be a match for Mace, able to knock him unconsciousness but not kill him. She knew it would bring the the Jedi upon them heavier than those that would seek them for Telio’s death. Serian and Gau-Rin left the scene, leaving Mace and Crim alive. Crim never understood why she left him alive but, he would find out one day if he could. The return to the Jedi Temple brought Crim back up against the council with bandages around his eyes. Despite the failure, the council explained that it did not matter that he had not captured his mother nor old friend but that his skills, calm demeanor, ability to overcome losing his eyes, and his ability to help his master instead of continuing to fight against such overwhelming odds. The rank of Knight was bestowed upon Crim and he would learn that force could allow to do more things then he ever thought possible.
The following years saw the usage of the force to accomadate Crim’s blindness, his assignments, and raise as a Jedi Knight. Nine years passed almost suddenly for Crim. His first padawan was acquired after the first year of being a Knight. Training was just as arduous for the Padawan and Crim. Nine years it took for the Padawan to ascend to Jedi Knight and Crim proving himself during the start of the Clone Wars when he turned 31. At age 32, Crim attained the ranking of Master. A master of the force and his emotions led to becoming a rank that not many attained at such an age. Only the time would tell now if Crim would become a legend or a faded memory.
Name:
Crim Drayson
Age:
33
Gender:
Male
Species:
Human
Level:
Master
Class:
Consular
Force Abilities:
Force Speed
Telekenesis
Force Sense
Mind Trick
Force Healing
Force Jump
Force Barrier
Pyrokinesis
Force Sight
Force Stasis
Battle Meditation
Non-Force Related Skills:
Since his inception into the Jedi Order, Crim has studied the history of the Jedi, Sith, and the Force. He holds an intrinsic knowledge over all that pertains to history and is known as a scholar of such. Dabbling in diplomacy and the political aspects of the galaxy sparked an interest in the Jedi standing within the Galaxy. Though Crim is not unlike his brethren, taking up an adequate knowledge in hand to hand.
Lightsaber Forms:
Form III: Soresu
Form VIII: Jun-Sai - Where Vapaad is direct and staccato, Jun-Sai is circular and flowing. The lightsaber, as well as the Jedi wielding it, is treated as a total weapon. An opponent of a Jun-Sai user can face not only the blade of a lightsaber, but strikes from its hilt, punches, kicks, elbows, knees, and head butts.
With the Force guiding the user's movements, the graceful precision of Makashi and the acrobatic movements of Ataru combine to create a dance-like whirlwind of death. The duelist moves his body just out of reach of his opponent's attacks while positioning his counter-attacks at the most unprotected targets of his enemy. By sinking deeply into the Force, the Jun-Sai duelist can anticipate his opponents movements, allowing him to block attacks before they happen.
One similarity to Vapaad is the use of emotions to power the style. Unlike Vapaad, instead of tapping into the feelings of enjoyment combat brings, the Jun-Sai duelist focuses feelings of determination. Fear, anger, and doubt are compressed into a tight ball in the pit of the duelist's stomach, and forged into an absolute Will to defeat the enemy. When facing a Jun-Sai master, it is said that one's life is measured in only seconds after his Lightsaber is activated.
Lightsaber hilt and colour:
Orange Lightsaber
Weapons:
[I]N/A
Other Equipment:
Crim carries quite a few items around that symbolizes his heart, family, and his love of the past. These items include vibroblades attached to his hip in the shape of wakizashi styled in the ancient samurai culture, a pouch that holds a trinket of his mother, and most sentimentally is the kabuki mask constructed specifically by a padawan that he once trained alongside. A commlink is on his person at all times to keep in contact with his allies.
History:
A product of two Jedi Knights, Crim was born in the very temple that his parents had grown up in and fallen in love. Crim was a by-product of an Echani Mother Seriana, and Korun Father Teilo Drayson which gave the newborn a skin tone brighter then that of a full blood Korun but darker than a full blood Echani. Both Knights were reprimanded by the Order for breaking Jedi Law and conceiving a child that could influence their emotions, thereby bringing them to the Dark Side if unlucky. Ban would not be the punishment doled out to the couple as they held a deep connection to the Order and were allowed to keep tabs on their force sensitive child like others before them. Force Sensitivity was found to exist in the young child around his early years near the first birthday. While not outstanding by any means, Crim was noted for having a slightly higher count then his own father.
By the time that the toddler could comprehend the ability to walk and learn, he was enrolled into the Jedi Academy.within the clan of the Falsi. Training and study was the name of the game whilst in the academy. Teachings of the Jedi spurned an interest in history and standing within Crim; this also helped a garner a friendship in a Nikto by the name Gau-Rin. Gau-Rin was a more eager child to learn the physical side of the Force and Jedi teachings. The boys did not agree on everything, subsequently starting a chain reaction that would lead all the way to their adulthood. Several years of Academy training could only prepare Crim for the inevitable
Initiate Trials came swift upon the younglings. Crim and Gau-Rin were ecstatic to finally engage in the trials that would mark them as padawans. The trials were not truly difficult as Crim has once thought they would be. Studying had led him to recite the Jedi Code like he was just taking a breath. Construction of the lightsaber came to him after he was gifted an orange crystal by his mother. Images flooded his mind while he crafted the lightsaber that would guide his hand for many years. A great master known as Mace Windu took a deep interest in the initiate and watched intently on how Crim would handle the final test; a test to survey the dark side. Crim was placed in-front of Gau-Rin. He could feel the dark side within Gau-Rin's aggression but, there was a glimmer of hope, a light that could be salvaged into a true Jedi. The test came to it's completion and both boys' graduated to Padawan.
Mace Windu took Crim under his wing. Training with Mace Windu was an astonishing process. A master Jedi of Mace’s caliber could almost instantly tell just how to work with Crim. He saw the weaknesses and strengths of his padawan, in turn helping the boy create a form parallel to that of Vaapad. Crim’s trained heavily alongside another human padawan. The padawan became close with Crim until several years later when he failed a test given to him and showed how close to the Dark Side he actually was. Before the Padawan left, he gifted Crim with the very mask that Crim would keep for many years.
Ten years passed within a blink of an eye. Mace Windu was confident that his final padawan was ready to undertake the Trials of Knighthood. His trials would be different to accomadate his skills and influence their decision. Lately his father and his Padawan Gau-Rin had went missing during an investigation. Crim left with Mace Windu and they took off to the back world planet. Two days passed before the duo was able to track down Seriana and Gau-Rin. Amongst the two was a steep dark energy of the force and the dismembered corpse of Crim’s father. What Mace believed would be Crim’s fall and explosion of emotion...was quite the opposite. Crim possessed a level of calm befitting a true knight. It was Gau-Rin that attacked first and began to battle between the Padawans.
Gau-Rin was truly a force to be reckoned with in dueling whilst Crim was the better with the force. The fight pushed deeper into the psyche of both men. An end came upon Crim’s eyes and face was badly burned by a near miss of the Nikto’s light saber. Seriana proved to be a match for Mace, able to knock him unconsciousness but not kill him. She knew it would bring the the Jedi upon them heavier than those that would seek them for Telio’s death. Serian and Gau-Rin left the scene, leaving Mace and Crim alive. Crim never understood why she left him alive but, he would find out one day if he could. The return to the Jedi Temple brought Crim back up against the council with bandages around his eyes. Despite the failure, the council explained that it did not matter that he had not captured his mother nor old friend but that his skills, calm demeanor, ability to overcome losing his eyes, and his ability to help his master instead of continuing to fight against such overwhelming odds. The rank of Knight was bestowed upon Crim and he would learn that force could allow to do more things then he ever thought possible.
The following years saw the usage of the force to accomadate Crim’s blindness, his assignments, and raise as a Jedi Knight. Nine years passed almost suddenly for Crim. His first padawan was acquired after the first year of being a Knight. Training was just as arduous for the Padawan and Crim. Nine years it took for the Padawan to ascend to Jedi Knight and Crim proving himself during the start of the Clone Wars when he turned 31. At age 32, Crim attained the ranking of Master. A master of the force and his emotions led to becoming a rank that not many attained at such an age. Only the time would tell now if Crim would become a legend or a faded memory.
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