^ Uh, compared to all of us that seems kinda... Weak.
We'll find out when the rp starts.
It will probably have something else later that will make it viable.
Maybe, maybe not.
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I think it's pretty fuckin' badass. Rippin' shit, bitin' shit, generally being a savage.
That's the plan.
I think the worst part about it that the bio just says its hands and its mouth and does nothing to help outsiders understand why its hands and mouth are weapons. what about these parts are special and why should they be feared by anyone beyond whatever norm may exist for one mech being punched by another.
As a side note the character is also a year too old.
And back to whatever hole I am supposed to be coming up with a character in.
I added in some more info. Thank you for telling me that, I didn't notice that Gnar had changed the age range from the previous version of this.
•Name: "The next potential pilot's name is Zan Carter." •Appearance: "He is 6'3" and weighs 200 lbs. He has short black hair, brown eyes. He has an above average amount of muscle for someone his age. He could be described as handsome. For noticeable markings, he has a scar on his face that goes from below his right eye to past his bottom lip." •Age: "The potential pilot is sixteen years old." •Personality: "From what we observed he seems to have his friends' back no matter what the situation is, and would die for them. He tends listen more that talk. People seem to come to him for advice, quite a bit. He seems to be an all around nice guy." •Motive to live: "His reason to live appears to be to kill the Cruxi." •Background: "From what we could find was that his family was average. He had five younger sisters. He became an older brother when he was eight years old. The last one was born the year he turned twelve years old. Both of his parents worked, so it seems he helped take care of his sisters. His mom and dad both worked, so helped take care of his younger sisters. The potential pilot had an extremely average childhood, until the planet he lived on was attacked by the Cruxi. It appears his family died on the planet, while he lived and made it off world onboard the last military ship. He became a ward of the state on account of having no living family. Later on, he was forced to go to a military boot camp for his behavior, which is where he is currently." •Notable Deaths: "His entire family appears to have been wiped out by the Cruxi attacks. •Other things: "He needs medication to sleep."
•Framewerk Code Name: Пожертвовать •Signature Weapon System: This Framewerk uses it hands to destroy enemies, mainly ripping them apart. This Framewerk has reinforced joints and strong actuators ('muscles') compared to other Framewerks. •Secondary Weapon System: The mouth of this Framewerk is full of razor sharp teeth meant to bit through Cruxi armor. •Flight-Capability/Thrusters: Basic thrusters on it's back and shoulders, just enough to maneuver in space. •Special Ability:
I can change the way I wrote the pilot's cs to a normal way if you don't like the way I did it.
@Thanatos No worries By the way, if you want, I've got a character that can be your grandchild, but can we discuss a few things, which may require the change of the bio a bit?
Sure, we can do that. I have no problem changing my bio.
"You gonna let an old man show you up, youngster?"
Name in Real Life: Akita Mashai In Game Name: Ojiisan Age: 70 Birth Day: September 25th Gender: Male
Short Bio: Mashai was born into a slightly above average family, money wise, in Kyoto, Japan. He got average grades in school, did normal school-boy things. He was just an average, not a memorable person. When he was 24 years old, he took over his family's restaurant. Which after a few years, he opened a second restaurant. Mashai fell in love when he was 30 years old, and got married a year later. He ended up having three kids, two boys and one girl. Eventually Mashai handed his two restaurants to his kids and retired. He spent his new free time spoiling his grandchildren. Recently he has gotten into gaming, because of his grandchildren. He heard from his daughter that she and her husband where going to be getting a copy of Sword Art Online for his granddaughter, Hanako. So he worked a little of his "magic" and bought his two other grandchildren each a NerveGear and copy of Sword Art Online. So they all could play it together. Of course he bought himself one so he could enjoy it with his grandchildren. Personality: He is a kind old man, most of the time. He is not afraid to stand up for what he believes in. He would without hesitation throw his life away to protect his family. Sometimes he acts like he is senile, just to mess with people. He tends to use semi-insulting sayings to motivate people. On occasion he will do or say something that would be classified as perverted.