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Just your neighbourhood coffee fuelled sociopath

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Ren caught a movement out of the corner of his eye and turned without a break. The pink clad Emiri had sent anhe unfortunately large student sailing across the courtyard.

And even before the dust from that confrontation had ended it looked like an actual fight was breaking out. Ren dropped the remains of the sandwich into his bag and took out his phone, opening the camera app as he kicked off towards the impending battle. Maybe this time he would be able to get something usable.

— Modern Fantasy, School —


"Tamas. Field... Inspector Tamas."

That was almost a slip up. At least he hoped that his confident tone would be convincing enough.

"I would appreciate it if you came to me with anything you might find. I don't think that it would be too had, I'm afraid that I stand out a bit. So who is this friend that might know something about the Drexler Institute? I'd like to speak to them if possible."

@PaulHaynek

— Italian Resturaunt —


Shizuri looked at her water glass for a few moments.

"It's the first I've heard of this girl here or anywhere else. Is she new? There's not a lot of Magical Girls out there that I haven't heard of. The chances that a new girl would show up for the first time in an area that wasn't her own sound pretty slim to me."

She ignored the soft, pulsed vibration of her phone in her pocket with a carefully neutral expression. The two that would mean it was a message for Kuroe. At least the reply was somewhat expected.

— Hollow Space —


All at once she took a couple of steps forward and cuffed Keita on the back of the head.

"Nobody goes to jail for a little shoplifting."

Haruko paused for a second, thinking.

"If you get arrested they might kick you out of school though. Then you'd have all the time you need to sort this out."

She mulled over the other things that were said. There was no telling what form these powers might take or what kind of opposition they might have to face.

"So is this an all or nothing deal? I can't see you bringing all of us here if only a few will do."

— Candaeln —


She stood aside. Wherever they were going and discussing certainly interested her but Salz decided that it would be more prudent to remain in the main hall. Seeing the other knights made it plain that whatever they had gone to do had not ended well. If a solution had been reached at all. It was only after a long look around she realized that she did not see the one face that she would recognize.

Salz panicked for a moment. His last letter had said that he was on his way back to Candaeln. Had some thing happened to him? Was he hurt on this latest mission?

She calmed down after a few seconds. Maybe he was just outside seeing to his horse or something. He was always a man of action and even at home he was never a person that was content to sit and talk. This thought improved her mood greatly and she went outside to take a look around.

— Modern Fantasy, School —


This was a strange world for sure, but recently Tamas had come up against everything from those twisted creations of the Kez to living gods. He kept an open mind and took things as they came. Until he was confronted by one of the students. Tamas squared his shoulders and clasped his hands behind his back.

"Not a teacher, no. I'm an investigator from overseas looking into a criminal organization that might be operating in the area. Maybe you've heard something that might be useful to me."

That was pretty good, maybe even something inspector Adamat would have come up with.

@PaulHaynek

— Italian Resturaunt —


"I don't really do much. I read and browse the net but I don't think I have any special skills."

This was easier than she expected. Maybe it was because Kuroe knew The Major and it wasn't at all like talking to a stranger. Maybe it was a good time to get some information.

"Kuroe had a shout out to this new dragon girl on one of her accounts today? Have you heard anything about her?"

It was as good a way to find something out as anything. There was no way she would be as lucky as to actually bump into this new girl or something silly like that.
@VitaVitaAR@HeroicSociopath what if it were a bet with other students or from his class? Maybe he was seen as letting them down in a group fight.
@BCTheEntity

Not just that, the character as a whole isn't very interesting. His personality and powers just feel generic.
The ability seems really cliche. Some others here are but they're simple enough that it's not a big deal but this one is so specific that it just seems really over the top.

Ability aside, the whole point of the school seems to be to train students in using their AEDs. The club is pretty redundant and this makes most of the biography irrelevant. No other character is in any club remotely combat related and instead use their club to expand on their character. It just feels like you're trying too hard to make your character be this quiet, strong, mysterious loner that I doubt any of the others characters would want to interact with. To be honest, the character is just boring.
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