@lostandfoundme if you have any questions then just ask
@TruckKun so whcih one do u want....the one where she stops and realises the claw stuff, or when she enters cave, or the edit now
@TruckKun I changed it .... but perhaps maybe you should give us the feedbacks on this OCC, not on the main one where we write the story.....@AftonsBlessing I noticed you are a charcater who likes to observe more. If you want I can take some of the characters from the party and also make them play along so you have more observations to make? Only if you feel ok with it.