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Loving everyone characters!

Sorry Dark Cloud, it's really hard to be panicked, have thoughts about previous death and notice everything. I really wanted to bring Dexter in on my last post, but I decided it might be a bit meta-gamey and it would probably best to just get the hell out of this tiny room before we start trading interactions.

But yeah, the demon boy hiding in plain sight has 100 stealth XD

@Conejitoooo I'm sorry to you too, I didn't wait for you to get a 1st post in before I charged in with a 2nd. Are you hanging back on purpose? Should we just keep rolling?
In the dimly lit room, it was hard to make out every detail, but MacKensie could see he was a kid. A teenager, more accurately, and looked like he might be a little lost himself. This notion of a shared, miserable situation, seemed to calm the young woman even if she did remain frozen.

"Uhm...Hello. Do you...know where we are?"

His reaction to his own voice, MacKensie just guessed he was scared of being too loud, but he didn't sound scared at all. If anything, the kid just sounded annoyed. But then why.... oh, like it matters, Mac, she scolded herself.

Visions flashed in her mind - the hysterical plane isles, filled with screaming athletes; her friends, coaches.

"I..." was the start of her reply to the boy, before being distracted by another one waking up, this one a man, not much older than her maybe.

"Where the hell am I?" he asked. He pressed his questions further, MacKensie shaking her head and telling them both that she had no idea what was going on. It was clear that none of them did. "Umm, My name is David Markovia....I think it is at least."

David's last announcement was disconcerting. He didn't seem 100% sure of his own name. Much like the boy's reaction to his own voice, MacKensie didn't (couldn't) dwell on it, instead introducing herself.

"I'm MacKensie. MacKensie Trydant," she told them, straightening her posture and giving them a clipped courtesy, before leaning back against the wall. As she did, she noticed for the first time that she had some weight around her hips, and she realised that she was wearing an old leather belt satchel. Also on her belt was a smaller pouch and a knife. "I err... I think I..."

I think I died, she wanted to say. It was just so ridiculous. But those final moments on the plane were real. That terror. The impact.

MacKensie suddenly realised she was at the door to the chamber, when she heard the hard-heeled steps of someone outside the room. Out of instinct, she moved away from the door and back to her coffin. It was then that she saw she'd left some items behind in it, so she scooped them up to inspect for clues. Then the chamber door opened.

"Everyone up? Everyone good? Functional? Hmm?" The man that entered was well-dressed and groomed, older than everyone else, and clearly not so confused like they were. He shared his gaze with the room, before cutting right to the chase. "This...never has a good explanation, but I'm going to need you to ready to fight, soon. Yall familiar with it?"

MacKensie bristled at the idea. Fight who? Why? She had another look at the items in her hand and now realised they were weapons. One was a small crossbow of sorts, and the other was some kind of wrist contraption. She looked at the boy beside her and saw that he had a sword. And not a rapier for fencing. It was a bloody full-on knights swords, like something out a fairy tale.

Perhaps this is a dream, she thought. Perhaps it's the ultimate dream of death. Then her thoughts spilled out of her mouth. "This is the afterlife."
She was dead, right? Yeah, she definately died. There was no way she'd survived that plane crash. But then, why was she thinking? How was she thinking? Was this the afterlife?

This train of thought was the spark that restarted MacKensie's five senses. The first thing she was aware of was her heartbeat, which would steadily begin to quicken as her anxiety grew. The air was musty, and above the faint sound of the her own breath, there was a throbbing hum coming from... outside? The questions began to pile up on top of the already important conundrum. She moved her hands and reached around to find that she was in an enclosed space, and that's when her eyes shot open in fright to total darkness.

Forgivingly, she wasn't made to panic in the claustrophic environment as the front of the box popped open and the young woman rushed forward to freedom, tripping in her hastiness and sending her tumbling out of the stone coffin, unceremoniously onto the floor with a whiney shriek. The pain from the fall had her fleetingly think that this was absolutely not the afterlife. She looked at her outstretched arms, not recognising her clothes. Her eyes went on to spy the dimly lit room, the strange glowing blue light in the walls, and eventually the seven coffins behind her.

She gasped, paling with fear, eyes wide. There were literal coffins in the room. And yes, she had just jumped out of one. Butt-scooting away from the wall with the coffins, as others began to awaken, MacKensie was way past screaming in alarm. She was mute, at this point.
She simply rose to her feet, against the opposite wall, an unwilling spectator to whatever might happen next.
I'm sure you'll settle on a good motive for the villain. You got this brother.
@LordOfTheNight Are you still looking to start this? I'd be very interested.
@Jaredthefox92So, you in?
Ooh, I just had a wicked idea for the Witch's motivation: what if the Empire were secretly trying to build a Void army, and the Witch found out? That could definitely explain her animus against the Empire...


Isn't the witch supposed to be the big baddie of this story? Seemingly invincible, building armies, GM controlled... probably best to keep her fairly simple. If you play her like you're just another player playing your character, then we have a bit of a 'DMPC horror story' scenario.

I'd suggest just keeping her as the big baddie. Maybe a twist down the line. She's already a huge driving force in the plot and world.
I can already imagine MacKensie's reaction to Dex once she realises he's not dangerous



lol
@Dark Cloud The squad's got Dexter's back. They'll just say he's a costime performer and he's with them. Maybe get a paid gig while they're at it. A bit of juggling, stage comedy...
Me too actually. She looks older on the old one. I'll change it back

For story arc. I figure... just vaguely... start her off a day or two into her new life, skipping the emotional intro and starting the whole learning about the world process. She's the type to get confident quick and charge head first into challenges and situations. And that, mixed with her heart's attraction to grand causes, I can see her getting involved with The Witch, Ru Bain. With her or against her, for the fate of the world.

She's a brand new character so I'll need to explore her a little before I can figure out what kind of emotional/maturity development she might journey through.
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