[OOC] <Animorphs>

[UrbanEvolution]

cant particularly disagree with @UrbanEvolution, here. if there's snipers about, just be faster about hammering it out. or something. point is that's... it's sad looking, friend. it makes me sad. :(

@dead anime dad

Done be sad friend

Have you received my PM? Hopefully it answered your question well enough.

[Wade Wilson]

Life is hard. deleted.

[Wade Wilson]

Hopefully that's better.

[Little Bill]

Kudos for completing the interview this time around, Andy. That being said, it needs some work before I can accept it.

Andy's personality seems to be one giant middle finger, and his only hobby is parkour. It also strikes me as odd that he's a professional parkourist at the age of 17, but I'll give you a prodigy pass there. However, balancing having a social life with school, being a professional athlete, and a cat burglar is too much to suspend disbelief.

Anyway, more than half of his sheet is taken by one-liners, so I can't really critique anything there but length. Once he's more fleshed out and real, I can accept him, but until then, homeboy needs a lot of work.

[dead anime dad]

Have you received my PM? Hopefully it answered your question well enough.

@UrbanEvolution

absolutely did, friend. even in spite of the shitty way i asked it. so, gold star for you, man. � (hopefully that star shows up)
i just got back from cleaning. a bit scatterbrained at the moment, but i'm slowly sifting through thoughts and stuffing them back in the right bins. i'm gonna fire a pm back @ you asap.

[tobiax]

I missed a lot in my sleep. I mean, it was longer than I wanted, but yeah. Also, Wade, that's totally David Henrie. Just saying.
But yes, Andy is markably abrasive, yet, other than that, not distinct.

Also, @dead anime dad@UrbanEvolution, I should mention I'll be playing a female Andalite, and I was thinking she could get into an oddly close relationship with Keira, if that would naturally develop, but that could work with Kimmy as well.

Sorry, my brain's just going a thousand miles an hour and I have so many ideas and I already got in character mood for like... two hours at a time, so... I'm jazzed. Jazzed as all get out.

[UrbanEvolution]

Yaaaas @tobiax

We're developing a triad of girl power and I love it.

[tobiax]

Woot! Cause Wynaut!

[Renny]

@DeadBeatWalking@dead anime dad@UrbanEvolution

Perhaps you guys can help me out with this one ^^

Even if with the critique I'm having difficulty figuring this out. I'm usually pretty good with fleshing out a characters dialogue in Rp. Most can tell how my characters are saying something by the actions their doing. But, when it comes to just dialogue, I'm having difficulty.
HELP!?

[tobiax]

It is a unique format, but vom your character's 'tude and personality and stuff in between the actual answers, ya' know?

[Renny]

@tobiax Welp, I'll try to flesh him out.

Get some better dialogue in there. VOM? I never heard of that one.

[UrbanEvolution]

@tobiax Welp, I'll try to flesh him out.

Get some better dialogue in there. VOM? I never heard of that one.

@Renny

He means vomit.

From our perspective he looks like an american apparel mannequin. To you, he probably looks fine, but that's because his personality is inside your head and you know him while we dont. Push that personality so hard it's impossible to miss.

[Renny]

-Delete, double post-

[Renny]

Alright I fleshed him out even more, added somethings I think you guys will like. Or not.

Either way, I'm a bit happy with the improvements.

[tobiax]

@Renny Personally- improvement. I like what you did with it. Not as snarky as everyone else, but he doesn't have to be. There's at least something to him now. Meaning- there's insinuation of a later of depth that's now obvious, as opposed to only what you get on the surface. I mean, I'm not the GM, but I also don't have any reservations against your character.

[Little Bill]

I PM'd you Renny, hopefully we can figure something out.

As for the rest of you lurkers, we've still got two spots open, so get 'em while they're hot.

[Punished GN]

"Cooler than Verthaven"?

...

Possibruuuuuuuuu~

[UrbanEvolution]

@Celsius

Ayy

@Mr Allen J

What are you doing here I thought you hated animorphs because of @Dragonbud and @Maxx.

[tobiax]

@Eklispe
I see you there.

Why don't you come say hello?

[Punished GN]

@Celsius

Ayy

@Mr Allen J

What are you doing here I thought you hated animorphs because of @Dragonbud and @Maxx.

@UrbanEvolution

I saw the title, of course. It takes every bit of will to remain on this thread.