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I also want to point out to any of the older people here, she had no idea Jorick was the name of one of the old regulars on this forum. I had a hearty laugh at this.




And sweet. Can't wait to see where this goes. And yes, I promise to stick around this time.
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@Rtron@Fallenreaper Dex does get a say in who she wants to sleep with right????

Just don't forget she's got a nasty left hook that is a little electrifying. ;)
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@DearTrickster Serena certainly isn't gonna be attempting to sleep with her, and I'm sure Vellios is classy....
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Are you Mofos excited?! Becouse this mofo is excited!
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@Dervish Hey Derv, thanks for the feedback on my character, one thing that I wanted to mention though was that the work the Colonel had him do was part of the info that I wanted to leave out of the sheet, the one that I am supposed to PM to you and Hellis but I thought it'd be best to wait for the character to get approved before cluttering yours and Hellis's inbox. If you want I can add part of it I suppose but apart from that, thanks for the feedback (and will include the changes that you mentioned, including adding a better description in lieu of a picture)


You didn't really make it clear that's what you intended to do, but we do need that stuff because it is technically a part of the sheet.
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You didn't really make it clear that's what you intended to do, but we do need that stuff because it is technically a part of the sheet.


Yeah, you are right. My apologies, want me to PM that stuff to you and Hellis? Or, maybe add it as a hider in the sheet? Apart from that, I have done most of the changes pointed out (although the sheet could still do with some refi in in some points, mainly in the description area)
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I am not sure about you guys. But I like listening to music as I write. And I think this song is fitting for our crew. Becouse you know, there ain't no rest for the wicked ;D

youtube.com/watch?v=5t99bpilCKw
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@Hellis Hahaha, to be fair to some degree everybody has participated in criminal activity. It's pretty endearing <3.
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@Dervish To address your first point:

Afterwards, Tia was essentially adopted by a Turian named Matius Ruflin, a disgraced former captain who had deserted after a poor tactical decision resulted in his unit being annihilated by pirates.


Matius had deserted rather than admit responsibility for getting his men killed. It was this revelation on his deathbed that caused Tia to turn her back on him, since he hadn't lived up to the values he had instilled in her.

On your second point, I think I've already made some wording changes to clear that up. Tia was recruited by the Eclipse shortly after Matius's death, and was a member for the next 115 years of her life. I think it would be a little much to expect me to detail everything that she did in that time span.

For your third point, I must be wording things wrong. I don't mean to imply that Tia would kill people at the slightest offense done to her (it's kind of hard to get paid when you kill the guy who's supposed to give you your paycheck, and as you say, past a certain point you are considered a liability to the gang). What I'm going for is that, while her particular sense of honour did make her very reliable, it also made her something of a target for people who would use less scrupulous methods to get ahead, but would find that having a sense of honour does not mean she is naive.
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@Dervish Special thanks goes out to Dervs for taking the time to read through and give his sincere critiques on all the character sheets. In my case in particular, he really helped me develop my little nuggets of ideas. I wouldn't have been able to get a sheet up in time otherwise. He is a total fountain of lore knowledge as I'm sure some of you are aware of. I am totes mcgoats biased but I have a good feeling that this RP will be absolutely successful regardless of who participates, because this is Dervs little brain baby. I only hope we can as a group really make something worth remembering while having a fantastic time.

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@Thundercrash Things look pretty dandy since your last edit and most of my concerns are alleviated, so thank you. I apologize if I missed a revised version when I did my review, it was a lot of stuff to go through. Everything's clear on my end, I'll just ask if Hellis has anything to add before putting Tia into the roster.
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Thanks for checking over Alex! I'll make a few adjustments, maybe keep a brother or two alive (it's just Alex and her dad).
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@Dervish Hey Derv, sent you and Hellis a PM with the part of Khosin's backstory that I kept out. Hopefully it's ok (and if it's not I am willing to change it)
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Alright, I took a look at what you had to say and I tried to fix them as much as I could. And the sheet is finally done as I finished with his appearance.



Also, I wish that everybody doesn't know that Marco is gay right away until his loyalty mission happens.

EDIT: Also, thanks for reading my character sheet, even if it wasn't finished.
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@Dervish

Duuka got a bit more backstory to him about how he got to Ilium.

As for the speech patterns, keep in mind that I also have to mix in some quarian as well.
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I'll be looking at revised stuff tomorrow because I have to force myself to study, but glad you guys are getting on top of that like a face hugger trying to do the Kylie Jenner lip challenge.

@The Grey Warden Sounds good about the whole hidden sexuality thing, but I am curious why Marco being gay would be a huge deal in this time period. I don't think anyone would give him a difficult time for it. O.o
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@The Grey Warden Sounds good about the whole hidden sexuality thing, but I am curious why Marco being gay would be a huge deal in this time period. I don't think anyone would give him a difficult time for it. O.o


I think it's more of the fear that he has if his sexuality was discovered, after all his own family disowned him.
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I think it's more of the fear that he has if his sexuality was discovered, after all his own family disowned him.


There's always a few.
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Maybe.

Maybe, I'll join this, but there's only 2 things though...

I don't know shit about Mass Effect...

And I hate Dervish.
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Maybe.

Maybe, I'll join this, but there's only 2 things though...

I don't know shit about Mass Effect...

And I hate Dervish.


Did you miss the sign on the treehouse where it told the filthy gaijin to go home, because that was for you.

Also we're fuller than your tender butt cheeks.

Lern2readscrublord lololol
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