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Shattered and broken the fallen king shall sing,

A song of solace in the memories of another: a blood brother,

Eye of thunder upon him, with knowledge gained, he will tear the world asunder.

With a thunderous roar and a revelation of lore, a cataclysm revealed and his fate sealed,

The power he shall seek, he will surely reap,


Fuck yeah, I did it.
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Shattered and broken the fallen king shall sing,

A song of solace in the memories of another: a blood brother,

Eye of thunder upon him, with knowledge gained, he will tear the world asunder.

With a thunderous roar and a revelation of lore, a cataclysm revealed and his fate sealed,

The power he shall seek, he will surely reap,


Fuck yeah, I did it.


That actually deserves a standing ovation from la société intellectuelle de la poésie. Are you absolutely sure that you've not done this before?
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That actually deserves a standing ovation from la société intellectuelle de la poésie. Are you absolutely sure that you've not done this before?


No I copied and pasted it off the internet.



Thank you though.
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Upno deeper contemplation I feel that trying to retain anonymity whilst posting the prophecies is both pointless, and well...contrary to what we seek to do?

I say it is pointless because I think that my writing style is easy enough to discern (though maybe that's my ego speaking ), and likewise the prophecy of most of us could be identified with some effort if only due to the text's voice, verbage, topics, etc.

I say that it runs contrary to our objective because the purpose of prophecy is foreshadowing, is it not? So with that spirit in mind, I'll actually share a somewhat pertinent part of that rather long-winded and crappy prophecy I had been working on 11 months ago.

When the time is meaningless, the new brother, our father

shall cause end amain to our suffering and end to the divine.

The First Breath was cursed by its own ruth.

Sith time forby and unto days erelong, 'twas forsooth.

After fire comes rain, joy follows pain.

As the moons' light meets its demise, the Son will rise.
An excerpt from that crappy prophecy I was working on


In exchange for me openly sharing, you lot owe me an honest critique: is the poetry as awful as I think it is? Is it terribad?
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And there, the first part of the super khollab.

My child was butchered It's been sliced into a somewhat-readable post of some 50,0000 characters. More sections will follow at some point in the (near?) future, depending on how quickly Kho and I can iron out the part concerning the Realta invasion in Vetros and then he'll probably throw in more Shaqmar stuffs and then I have more stuff for Y'Qar and Ommok and Ventus...
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I was reminded of a few things while reading that post >_>
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remindin myself

= Do stuff


Forgot to add

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I was reminded of a few things while reading that post >_>


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Throughout my career as a roleplayer, Kho is the first person I've ever witnessed being able to write a two paragraphs, 582 words long text doing nothing but praising the divine beauty of a horse.

I'm in awe.

(sorry Cyclone)
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Forgot to add

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I was reminded of a few things while reading that post >_>


What, did you not like it? That was the new and updated form of my poetic prophecy.

ARE YE CRITICIZING ME POETRY?

Edit: New rule, me no write things when I feel tired
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Throughout my career as a roleplayer, Kho is the first person I've ever witnessed being able to write a two paragraphs, 582 words long text doing nothing but praising the divine beauty of a horse.

I'm in awe.

(sorry Cyclone)


I always wondered why Philip was a name, not anymore.
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Throughout my career as a roleplayer, Kho is the first person I've ever witnessed being able to write a two paragraphs, 582 words long text doing nothing but praising the divine beauty of a horse.

I'm in awe.

(sorry Cyclone)


At the time I wrote that I had just finished reading Moby Dick.
That book is a behemoth. Half of it (at least) is just Melville going off about how perfect the whale is and how heroic the whaler is...
It's madness. Then the conclusion, the climax of that leviathanesque journey towards the end, is literally one paragraph. All the action happens in one bloody paragraph. Needless to say, he's my role model. I aspire towards such verbosity.
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Ok, first things first, if or when someone makes a sheet for the shamanism created in that post, please don't forget to add a more specific title to it. Since shamanism has such a wide meaning, it has been kinda present in the RP way before people started to mention it by name. In my sheets for example, I call it the halagan shamanistic tradition simply because other posts (and my own posts) had already set up for a wider meaning of things that isn't limited to just the one thing one of my heroes is involved with.

What is more curious is that actual central asian shamanism only appeared now, meanwhile, the wider use of the word, the one that includes basically anything no matter if centered on a wiseman, a babalawo, a miko, a pajé or even the rivaling incan highland kubu and lowland piais, has been around for longer, with the earliest being the weekly slough post, I believe, with the hain worshipping slough in peculiar ways.

Religious terms are such a drag to deal with, especially since the nature of our world makes everything a loan word, even the loan words, so meanings get a bit hazy. When the concept of sin showed up without a proper moral code to contrast against, for example, it was kinda amusing.

For a certain storyline, I thought a lot about if I should use or not the word Nagual, mostly inspired by the deliberate use of nagualism in academic texts to describe certain guardian spirits (In the same vein as the totem and the aforementioned shamanism).

If it was just the case of using a localized word versus one word within your own language it would be easier, but then you have cases like the word Fetish in my language, originally used by the Portuguese to poorly describe western african religious practices ("feitiço" being a word of meaning similar to spell, like the stuff Harry Potter does), then popularized in france where it got a new meaning, which returned to Portuguese under the word "fetiche" (which means both the religious stuff and the kinky stuff). That of course, not counting the fact the word had a root in latin with yet another meaning.

There is another amusing example of such behavior, but not only does it spoil Ilunabar's stuff, but it also has nothing to do with my suggestion of avoiding just using the word Shamanism when dealing with a possible creation sheet. (just like most of this rambling/post)
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Ok, maybe I will need to rewrite my whole post tomorrow.

But to give the overall idea of it:

I just suggest that it would be better to not write down it as just shamanism if they eventually make a CS for what Ventus created, described in the summary as just Shamanism, but couldn't possibly be the case since shamanism has such a wide meaning that it has been around for a long while in the RP and mentioned multiple times, hell, in my case I even had spent some Khookies in a shamanic tradition in particular.

Then, I note that the narrow/original meaning of it, based in central asia, is indeed just showing up in this new storyline in particular. Then I start to talk about loan words like shamanism in general and how it is a bit tricky to use certain religious words in the RP (and in real life, as for example, my native language has basically the same word having two different meanings and spellings because the french loaned it.)
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Ok, maybe I will need to rewrite my whole post tomorrow.

But to cut it short:

I just suggest that it would be better to not write down it as just shamanism.


There, I fixed it for ya.

I jest.

Anyway, I agree with you.
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@Double Capybara I'm not sure if early hain Slough worship needs a creation sheet. 'Shamanism,' in that case, is an umbrella term for decentralised nature worship. Nothing with any significance that I'm going to attach to with my stuff. If anyone wants to expand on hain Slough worship, be my guest, but it can otherwise die out as other beliefs spread, no problem.

Also, now that you mention fetiche, I can't help but think of...

The associated video is a grey area in terms of safety for work, I think. It's hilarious anyway.
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@Double Capybara The word 'shaman' is not the only word used to describe the Rukbanian shamans - they're also called witch-doctors and magickers. The term shaman was only really used because...well, the closest they resemble, as you point out, are Altaic shamans. So it made some sense to use that as a term.

But to ensure that we butchered these nuanced terms properly, in traditional Divinus manner, we've used magicker and witch-doctor also (already written, coming soon to a post near you). I belive witch-doctor refers generally to the healers and spiritual guides in Africa, whereas shamans are more of an Altaic and Native American thing (it's actually amazing how similar these two distinct shaman types are with regards to their manner of dress!)

We could, of course, just create a new term altogether. For instance, the Eskanadran variant (closer to Rabbi than to Shaman given the different nature of the Eskanadran religion) is Qarqaz.
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A horse! A horse! My kingdom for a horse!
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So I've been training kickboxing with a couple guys lately, one of them is a master but often gets into street fights and stuff and the other one is a guy so strong and huge he's called The Monster.

I sparred against the Monster and I nearly fuckin died, wow

I got hit so hard on the head that I almost got knocked out
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