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I'd been saving that one but...NAY!!


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I'll be working on getting up both my Cap and Ivy posts up today. (But I did something to my back... and sitting for too long is painful. So if it doesn't go up, I've primed my excuse!)


Hey! Who needs a back anyway? Heh, in all seriousness though, I hope your back is alright. Back pain is one of those things that you don't realise is a big deal until you have it. One of those "quality of life" things.
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@Morden ManEh, I live with it. I'll never truly go away at this point (Yay for having a bad back. I've been working around it for a few years now. If only I could go back to my teen days when I didn't have these problems yet). I'm doomed to get even worse too. No matter how much I take care of it. (Go Family Medical History of Bad Backs! And Knees. I'm just waiting for my knees to go out in my thirties. I baby those suckers like no tomorrow. Walking is too good to give up!) But your well wishing is appreciated.

I'm working on Ivy as we speak type. :)
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Trying something a little different with Hulk here than I've done elsewhere. Rather than just describing what he's doing I'm trying to give y'all a view of what's going on in his head.

Feedback is heavily appreciated :P
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Ivy's up.

And it kind of ended up a lot more morbid than I planned. Maybe I shouldn't have switched POVs? I had just done it on a whim, but I did not expect that result. :|

(And it looks like we just got 3 posts in quick succession. Go us!)
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Ivy's up.

And it kind of ended up a lot more morbid than I planned. Maybe I shouldn't have switched POVs? I had just done it on a whim, but I did not expect that result. :|

(And it looks like we just got 3 posts in quick succession. Go us!)


Woulda been funnier if I took longer.

Then it woulda went from Clark weeding to Ivy.



Make that Four.... but are they fantastic?
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4 IC posts in twenty minutes? Well, today isn't quiet.
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I'm impressed myself.

Trying something a little different with Hulk here than I've done elsewhere. Rather than just describing what he's doing I'm trying to give y'all a view of what's going on in his head.
You asked.

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I'm impressed myself.

<Snipped quote by Sep>You asked.



How dare you help when I asked you too!
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@SepSadly, I've gotten that response legitimately before. :o
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4 IC posts in twenty minutes? Well, today isn't quiet.


Full disclosure; I cant produce posts nearly as quickly as y'all.

Doing my best here, but I cant manage much more than two a week.
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@SepSadly, I've gotten that response legitimately before. :o


Nah I appreciate the help, the transitional sequence between Hulk/Banner (Such as the bit you highlighted) I feel has always been one of the hardest ones to write. So I do appreciate the input.
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@Kingfisher Heh, I wish there was some rhyme or reason to posts coming all at once sometimes but I think it's just a happy coincidence. Ultimately all but one of those posts were standalone so there's no pressure to get round to reading them straight off the bat. You take your time and tell the story you want to tell at the pace you want to tell it. As long as you're happy with what you're putting out, I'll be happy with it.
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Nah I appreciate the help, the transitional sequence between Hulk/Banner (Such as the bit you highlighted) I feel has always been one of the hardest ones to write. So I do appreciate the input.

I hope it helped you some. I've always struggled with being too long winded in sentence length (during action scenes like that). Just something to think about for next time.
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I hope it helped you some. I've always struggled with being too long winded in sentence length (during action scenes like that). Just something to think about for next time.


It is actually a more interesting way to do the transition.
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[@Modern Man] Thank you for your understanding. I'll try my very best to keep posting at a respectable rate.

Great writing all round, BTW everyone. Some really awesome stuff.
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Oh, if anyone finds the little easter egg cameo in my last post you win...umm...a virtual high five :P
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Oh, if anyone finds the little easter egg cameo in my last post you win...umm...a virtual high five :P


I'm pretty sure I noticed that Thor was in it.

Am I right?



In terms of why Colossus has his own post it's because it looks neater, and doesn't have me double posting.
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I'm pretty sure I noticed that Thor was in it.

Am I right?

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