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@Sep Understood.

So maybe when the WC Avengers finally form, Gambit can join them?


My WC Avengers team will probably be more like a Thunderbolt's team, although many of the characters will be WC Avengers (Hawkeye, Wonderman, Tigra). Therefore, since I am planning on using either ex-villains (Wonderman) or people who cannot quite blend well into human society (Tigra), Gambit could fit in.

@Dedonus Is Deadpool or Kid Pool taken?

Just wondering because I'd what like to go for one of them too.


@Gowi has Deadpool, as Drew already mentioned.

Player Name: Chaotic Chao (Formally CallMeChaotix)

Character You Wish To Play: Remy LeBeau

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Looks good, although I feel that some parts of the biography seems a little too much like the Marvel Wikia and Comic Vine articles on Gambit. I understand that some things can only been said in a few different ways. However, I would like you to try to make it "your own". While the whole thing does not need to be changed, I recommend that you read what you have written along side with whatever resources you consulted to write it and rewrite parts that looks too much "word for word".

Let's just look at the first paragraph of my Ms. Marvel CS. And here are the links to Marvel Wikia and Comic Vine.

Carol Danvers was born in Boston, Massachusetts to Joseph and Marie Danvers. Even though she was the eldest child in the family, her father, Joseph favored his two sons, Steven and Joseph Jr. No matter what she did, whether Carol excelled at school or athletics, nothing pleased her father. It almost seemed as if he expected one of his two sons to carry on the family name. Even though his sons did not perform at the same level as Carol, their father still preferred them.
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Obviously, that first sentence is really hard to put it in any other way, so that's fine. However, the rest of this paragraph communicates the same information that the Comic Vine and Marvel Wikia does, but in different words.

Again, you don't have to start from scratch. There are just a few parts that need to be edited.
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@Dedonus Re-Check it please.

Is it better? Because I can't think of anyway to rewrite the story unless it's okay to make up a new origin for Gambit.
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unless it's okay to make up a new origin for Gambit.

Why wouldn't it be?
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@Gowi I would, but I'm not creative like that. So I can't think of jack-shit.
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@Chaotic Chao That's the point of this whole thing, no?
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@Dedonus So are alternate versions of characters acceptable? Like Kid Pool or Ultimate Deadpool?

Anyways, do you have any ideas to make an original origin for Gambit? Because that sir, would be very helpful.
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@Gowi You don't even know how lucky you are to be able to play Deadpool.

I'd kill for that role...
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Hey guys, sorry for my prolonged absence. RL issues cropped up this week and my online stuff was last on the agenda nearly every time. However, I should hopefully have another Moonknight post up soon...
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@Dedonus So are alternate versions of characters acceptable? Like Kid Pool or Ultimate Deadpool?

Anyways, do you have any ideas to make an original origin for Gambit? Because that sir, would be very helpful.


As long as it fits the setting of this game, then you can use alternate versions of characters that don't have a character sheet. So, Ultimate Deadpool would be out because we already have a Deadpool.
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@Dedonus So. Is Gambit accepted, yet?
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@Dedonus So. Is Gambit accepted, yet?


Before I accept it, I just want @facepunch to make sure it doesn't conflict with his Wolverine character. I really like that part of the Gambit character sheet, but I'm not sure if that Wolverine scene happened in this game's canon. I just wanted to check.

Also, I'm note sure if I want the Mutant Massacre to be just a footnote in a character sheet. I don't know what everyone else thinks about that story line.

Unless Facepunch has any things to say, Gambit is accepted.
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@Dedonus Okay. Well, lets wait for the punch of faces.
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@Dedonus To be honest I do kind of want to make a new origin for Gambit.

But I can't think of anything, because my ideas would screw with canon stuff, and other peep's stories.
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@Dedonus I plan to also make a Black Panther sheet soon.

Using the Ultimate Marvel origins where T'Challa is now T'Challa Udaku and was experimented on in the Weapon X program. Would that be okay if you if Black Panther was a part of Weapon X and in Team X?
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@Chaotic Chao@Dedonus Wolverine only recently escaped the Weapon X facility, so that's a no-go.
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@FacePunch Understood. I'll take it out.
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@FacePunch @Dedonus Replaced it with some made up mission.
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@Chaotic Chao I made Gambit a former CIA agent in my iteration of his story. I wish I had time to flesh that out cuz it was a totally badass path to take Remy down. Perhaps you should think of another life path Remy could have gone down that doesn't just involve the thieves guild and joining one super team or another.
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Not bad, not bad.

Mind if I use your idea?

Actually, what if I make him a S.H.I.E.L.D. agent, @Dedonus?

Also, did you see what I asked about Black Panther?
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