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Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Mike the Bloodwolf
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Shall change it pronto
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Drakel said
Mike mind writing more for your post? Flesh it out a bit more, get more into the character and what recently just happened to him, that like... Maybe add even a bit more to it? Have him fight some random thug or something? idk... :/

Short posts (especially introductions) like that makes it seem as though you don't care for the RP or even posting in it. This is multiplied greatly for your introductory post, which is kinda like your writing sample and the main post you make since it is your character's "heroic" or "great" introduction into the RP. Spotlight is on you and now is the time to show us what you're like with pure freedom and when you're at your best when it comes to RPing/writing...

So how 'bout it? Get back in there and show us all how great of an RPer and writer you really are.


Mike, just quoting what I already said to ya man...

I know it says 1 paragraph minimum though we'd prefer you to try your maximum as much as possible... the minimum is just there for those rare times a member is having trouble posting (writers block and that like)... You joined this RP with great enthusiasm, so show us what ya got xD

We're still at the starting point so spotlight is still on you until you reach the group.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Mike the Bloodwolf
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Hmmmm *Close eyes*
I think I have an idea
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Is that any better Drakel?
I wanted to get Mike sowhere where he could find his duel Samurai swords so I sent him on the way to the Dojo
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Chev
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Uhhh...Mike. I saw your post and I'm a bit confused. What robbers would possibly go after the Titans mansion? I'm not saying it's a bad post, I'm just saying it's very very unlikely.
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Chev said
Uhhh...Mike. I saw your post and I'm a bit confused. What robbers would possibly go after the Titans mansion? I'm not saying it's a bad post, I'm just saying it's very very unlikely.


Not to mention that they're "Stealing" Viran (I think) who is in the Infirmary of the main base (through the portal... Base is through the portal guys... mansion is mostly just a memorial and for show and for us to feel "normal" rich kids)... Mike, mind if I give a suggestion?

Simple and realistic is always better. Play the thugs how normal people (you in RL) would be played if they were a thug or thief...

Also... I don't think this RP is taking place in japan... more like new york so there probably isn't a dojo used by a samurai grandmaster... :/
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Jinx lives off base because she doesn't want to absorb all the good luck
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Mike the Bloodwolf
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You can find some dojos in New York, they would just be hidden a lot better
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Besides the Dojo is figment of Mike's mind, it will vanish once its served it purpose of giving Mike Bravery and the skills of Duel wielding.
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Strange
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Mike the Bloodwolf said
You can find some dojos in New York, they would just be hidden a lot better


I didn't say there couldn't be a dojo... just that it was highly unlikely that there would be a dojo that had an ancient samurai master who taught in it haunting it... Completely different...

One would make sense in the RP... the other wouldn't at all...

Mike the Bloodwolf said
Besides the Dojo is figment of Mike's mind, it will vanish once its served it purpose of giving Mike Bravery and the skills of Duel wielding.


wut? so he up and created an entire Dojo that was used by an ancient samurai grandmaster with his mind? O_o

1) when, I thought he just ran into it
2) how? Last I weren't his powers were just shapeshifting only??
3) If it was a figment of his imagination and the others can't see it than it might've been wise to state such instead of having us all guess.
4) If this is how he gets his dual samurai swords than how do they even exist and where did he actually get them since the entire dojo was his imagination?
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Mike the Bloodwolf said
Besides the Dojo is figment of Mike's mind, it will vanish once its served it purpose of giving Mike Bravery and the skills of Duel wielding.


.... I can name many flaws on both a rping.... and writer level about this >>
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'Figment'

A figment is used out of mind control. For all you know, Mike could be inside of a lonley shaq, learning to dual wield, thinking he is in a dojo. Though that would mean he's lost a few screws in the head. I believe when he says figment, he doesn't mean reality bending, as in putting something that was never there, there, with his mind.
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Mike, are the thugs stealing Viran or going after your character?
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Mikalo said
'Figment'A figment is used out of mind control. For all you know, Mike could be inside of a lonley shaq, learning to dual wield, thinking he is in a dojo. Though that would mean he's lost a few screws in the head. I believe when he says figment, he doesn't mean reality bending, as in putting something that was never there, there, with his mind.


That may be true though he still never insinuated that it was a figment or anything IC... Not to mention he's going to be getting two real samurai swords from this "Figment"... So if this is a figment of his mind than what is he using against the thugs since the dojo us fake? Heck where is he really at if the dojo is fake? Who is he learning things from if it's all in his mind, or is the person he is learning from in his mind too?
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Stry, when ya hon' post? And Bane, can I bring him back but reimagine him? New name, etc?
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Stryder
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Burn...

I'll just post for Sable then okay?
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Please don't dis other members Death.
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Sorry. Unintentional dis removéd. Also, I'm reimagining Bane from the last game. He'll be worse this time, more of a credible threat.
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Quick question: Did Teen Titans a New Era survive the Guildfall? It looks like Rps that did are being listed in the RPS news section.
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