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FUCK YEA!!!! I love his reaction to Alms. You know, I was originally going to have Alms be more of a side character, but DAMN he turned into one of the number 1 badasses ever!

Fuck, I can't stop laughing at this!
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@Drakey Is "wake up and burn" going to be an arc phrase? If so, then it's a really cool one.
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It is Alms' phrase. Most people have no idea what it means though.

Severence would take a s 'Wake up and burn those bitches'

Jager and Praetor would probably just take it as one of Alms' mannerisms.

However, it is to remind Alms how the IMC killed his wife and child in the morning.
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I figger Severrence doesn't know his past, or if she did, she'd give him a high-five. She's all about crushing the IMC for how they're wronged the people in the Militia- the IMC has wronged Alms, and thus he's Militia. Therefore, gaining her compassion, sympathy, and herself as a shield-sister, to dip into the Norse.

Also, [@everyone], anyone against maybe one of the last Titans to be taken care of being a Ronin, sneaking up on Severrence? I got a scene set up in my mind, demonstrating how little she sympathizes with the human beings she's fighting.
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@OfWindAndRain Yo. This plays into a great idea I already have, so I'll do it. I won't be able to immediately get an IC up, though.
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How much of a mystery do you want Alms' background to be?
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@Drakey Somewhat. If you want, you can reveal more as the story progresses.
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Ok, I was thinking of making most of his background be a high-clearance sort of thing on both Militia and IMC sides. As the story progresses, Cross will have to piece together legends and rumours.

I'm not sure about the Militia side though...
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Is it your turn now?

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What did you think of my post earlier?
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@Drakey I would say so, yeah.

@OfWindAndRain There you go, how will Savvy treat the Ronin?
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Your turn!!! :)

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I quess Severence's new call name is 'Snape'...
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@Drakey@OfWindAndRain Geddit? Cause Severence Snape and Severus Snape? Eh? Eh? My genius goes unappreciated...
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Some constructive crit:
1) Several times throughout your post, you shift perspective. From "He did" to "They did" to "I mean." Might wanna work on that.
2) Dialogue. One person's dialogue is in ONE paragraph, period. There should never be two people's dialogue in a single paragraph. Your last post had your character speaking, then an NPC speaking, in one paragraph. That's a no-no
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@OfWindAndRain Those seem pretty fair. Thank you for the help.
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Do you imagine any of the other characters could steal someone else's gun, and empty a magazine into their unprotected face and watch, unmoved besides a bit of satisfaction and vindictiveness? I feel like my character is slightly psychopathic in her quest for revenge.
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@OfWindAndRain Yeah, that made me go “Sweet Jesus” a bit when I read that. But hey, you take what you can get, and the Militia’s hiring... What did the IMC do?
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Your turn!!!
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Hey, I'm sorry, but I kinda want to steal that titan of yours....
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Alms is gonna have a rival.
She'd probably have disliked Ash quite a bit, too.
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