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sleepy moon gorl

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well, at least she wasn’t late to her post
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Lots of hype. I love the team and the mechs so far; it's pretty damn great. We've come a long way from our days of artillery-only Orbitals, heh. I can already imagine some of the stuff we can pull off.
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artemie unapproved not enough artillery

we need to be able to shell xenos from orbit
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That's the most I've written in a long time, but I've got a first draft CS done. Let me know what needs changing.
Just now read Artemie and crap we filled the same niche with our pilots. :/


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That's the most I've written in a long time, but I've got a first draft CS done. Let me know what needs changing.
Just now read Artemie and crap we filled the same niche with our pilots. :/



Working on the introductory postso I haven't read it yet, but I wouldn't stress similarities! It happens sometimes, and I don't have any problems with it. I'll read your sheet as soon as I finish this and give you some feedback.
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volana just hanging out if anyone wants to chat before we head off
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Oh shit, intro posts are out. I'll try to get my post out soon.

Also.

That's the most I've written in a long time, but I've got a first draft CS done. Let me know what needs changing.
Just now read Artemie and crap we filled the same niche with our pilots. :/



ONE MORE GOD REJECTED.
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prepare for serb fall
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WHOOPH.

Ok. You know you've got a character when your backstory section ends up about twice as long as you expected. Also, writing a character bio as a third party analysis was a rather interesting change of pace. And a lot of fun actually.

Still not done yet. Oy.
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DARK

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>tfw two ninjas within the span of several minutes

That is some impressive response time, ngl.
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it's rough out here, b
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pandora is a city of gamers
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That's the most I've written in a long time, but I've got a first draft CS done. Let me know what needs changing.
Just now read Artemie and crap we filled the same niche with our pilots. :/



No problems with Stel, but the Michael will take a little longer to read through. There's a lot there, and I confess I'm having a hard time keeping it straight in my head. I'll edit in my feedback on Michael (or post it by itself, if someone posts in between) but I didn't want you to think I had forgotten to read it.
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No problems with Stel, but the Michael will take a little longer to read through. There's a lot there, and I confess I'm having a hard time keeping it straight in my head. I'll edit in my feedback on Michael (or post it by itself, if someone posts in between) but I didn't want you to think I had forgotten to read it.


No worries, I could probably have written it easier to read, to be honest. Sorry about that.
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Ok. All thats left is to put the finishing touches on the mech, and my character sheet'll be done. Hopefully by tonight.
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That's the most I've written in a long time, but I've got a first draft CS done. Let me know what needs changing.
Just now read Artemie and crap we filled the same niche with our pilots. :/



Okay! First off, I really love a good form change gimmick and I like the look of this one.

That said, I do think Michael's a little too powerful for the general baseline that's been established. Right now, at least. I fully intend to be letting everyone have the opportunity for upgrades (probably more than once, if we run for long enough) but I do think I would prefer if you reined it in just a little bit for now.

Generally speaking it feels like Michael can do a good bit of everything right now without a lot of drawbacks. Most specifically, though, I would prefer that the predictive aspects of the two forms' OS either get removed, or given a severe enough drawback.

I know that's a really general bit of feedback and I'm happy to talk it over some more with you but I had a hard time figuring out exactly what I'd suggest changing.

@FlappyTheSpybot Let me know as soon as you're done, and I'll give it a read!
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Okay! First off, I really love a good form change gimmick and I like the look of this one.

That said, I do think Michael's a little too powerful for the general baseline that's been established. Right now, at least. I fully intend to be letting everyone have the opportunity for upgrades (probably more than once, if we run for long enough) but I do think I would prefer if you reined it in just a little bit for now.

Generally speaking it feels like Michael can do a good bit of everything right now without a lot of drawbacks. Most specifically, though, I would prefer that the predictive aspects of the two forms' OS either get removed, or given a severe enough drawback.

I know that's a really general bit of feedback and I'm happy to talk it over some more with you but I had a hard time figuring out exactly what I'd suggest changing.

@FlappyTheSpybot Let me know as soon as you're done, and I'll give it a read!


No worries, I was sort of relying on Stel's lack of piloting ability to offset it, but I'll run it over and see what I can do to weaken it.
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No worries, I was sort of relying on Stel's lack of piloting ability to offset it, but I'll run it over and see what I can do to weaken it.


Thank you. Don't have to overdo it, just tip the scales back a liiiiiittle bit. There's nothing in there that I'd mind getting added back in when upgrades start rolling around, just a touch less from the jump.
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