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@The Man Emperor I see he's better than before but I feel as if he needs some more work. You still mention his telepathic abilities in his appearance section.

It kinda feels like his backstory is incomplete because 1). it cuts off at him getting his power. 2). Has no mention of him being affected by the curse or even going back to Araminta.

I also feel as if he can do a bit too much? Like he can turn completely invisible and impervious to non-magic attacks, summon chains that are harder than steel, and can sap the life out of people to heal himself? It's not super overpowered but I think he could be toned down just a little.


Okay. Will do now.
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@The Man Emperor can you describe what the chains can do and he's accepted.
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@The Man Emperor can you describe what the chains can do and he's accepted.


They're pretty much normal chains if not conjured out of thin air.

In other words, like this except for the part where Garen gets punched.

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@The Man Emperor League of Legends killed my parents. Accepted.

LIMITS ⫻ Alexander can only summon one spirit at a time, and can only do it once an hour. He can keep a ghost summoned for a short amount of time, probably for like one insightful conversation! Afterward, the ghost will go back to the other side - however, it's possible for certain spirits who don't necessarily want to come back to resist it. Alexander's immune to physical attacks while in his ghost state but other magical attacks can still damage him. He can maintain his ghost state as long as he can hold his breath.

WEAKNESSES ⫻ While in his ghost state he is susceptible to non-physical magical attacks such as fire and electricity.
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The RP is officially closed! If you have previously displayed interest, you may still submit a character sheet.
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The NPC sheets for the cult.

The Wiccans



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I'm still confused on how ambiguous time works. Wouldn't having it set in 2015 defeat the purpose?
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I'm still confused on how ambiguous time works. Wouldn't having it set in 2015 defeat the purpose?


It's twenty-fifteen but with aspects of the previous and current year... think of it more of just a meaningless number.

@The Man Emperor There's one big issue that comes to mind with this sheet: Magic returned merely a year ago so, unless he was in a different universe, he couldn't have awakened. I'm kinda tired atm so I'll run over your sheet in the morning.
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Fixed it lel @The Ghost Note
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@The Man Emperor Hmmmm, he seems okay but I have a problem or two. Mostly with the part about him being trained by an Adept, I feel as if that part is tacked on so he can have some supernatural knowledge. Maaaaybe it would be better if he just read James library? idk not a whole lot of players are utilizing that so it could be a change of pace.

Also could you lower how much he can lift? I'm tryna go for useful but not spectacularly strong abilities.
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@The Man Emperor Hmmmm, he seems okay but I have a problem or two. Mostly with the part about him being trained by an Adept, I feel as if that part is tacked on so he can have some supernatural knowledge. Maaaaybe it would be better if he just read James library? idk not a whole lot of players are utilizing that so it could be a change of pace.

Also could you lower how much he can lift? I'm tryna go for useful but not spectacularly strong abilities.


Alrightey done
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@The Man Emperor Accepted.

LIMITS ⫻ Emotional-Fields interfere with the ability to a degree, and he has a hard time using his ability on the Extra-Normal. He can hit them with a rock just fine, but can't seem to bind them in stone regardless of how hard he tries. The ability has a range of around ten meters, and he has a weight limit of around 500kg. The act of lifting up stone and moving it is incredibly taxing, so he finds it draining when he uses his ability.

WEAKNESSES ⫻ When Ray uses his abstraction, he finds himself weighed down and this really hurts him in confrontations against faster foes. The act of bending earth also causes nasty cracks to form on his skin, and they could get easily infected if they aren't treated.

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Tfw when Guild News vanishes so they can't feature my amazing RP:

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Will the character's secrets be relevant to the plot at some point?
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Will the character's secrets be relevant to the plot at some point?


Ideally yes.

But, given how these RPs go, I'm not going to make any promises. Some secrets already, I can feel, are gonna be more important than the others but I'm gonna try to work in the other ones.
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<Snipped quote by silvermist1116>

Ideally yes.

But, given how these RPs go, I'm not going to make any promises. Some secrets already, I can feel, are gonna be more important than the others but I'm gonna try to work in the other ones.


I still can't believe that Sabrina was secretly a Parrothead this whole time.
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@silvermist1116@The Man Emperor Now I hate to be pedantic here, but I just backread and I really don't want this to get confusing like it most likely will.

The kid ran off, to leave his brothers and sisters to deal with the fire wall by themselves. He didn't have a place in mind, his legs just carried him further into the manor, into the other room where the Asian kid and most of his other siblings were- cleaving away at some vines and plants with their powers.


Far as I can tell, Junior isn't in the main dining room anymore.
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@silvermist1116@The Man Emperor

Far as I can tell, Junior isn't in the main dining room anymore.


Yeah he isn't, not sure if it was hard to tell in my post but just in case I'll go over and rewrite it later tonight, make it clearer.
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@The Ghost Note @Carbonatter Now I'm confused, because isn't mostly everyone still in or around the dining room? That's where the fight took place. If he's with everyone else, then he should be in the area. What other room is the vine wall in?
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