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Once the rest of your sheet is done, I can help figure out how to include him, it should be pretty easy with the current circumstances though. As for the stage, I mostly just took the name as a catch-all for a location for a lot of fighting.


Thanks! Think so, too. I’ve just read some of the responses from the IC section a couple of hours ago while working on my In the Now synopsis, and I believe I’ve started to get a glimpse of what Terry could do if he was to go to Esaka. It just so happened that Sakura is gonna be there, too, to accompany Nadia.

Anyhow, I have to apologize in advance because it seems that I’d only be able to send the application tomorrow. There are still a lot of things I need to change regarding my sheet, as well as trying to figure out how I want it to be formatted. Will that be alright?

P.S. You actually picked the best name for a city that revolves around fighting, tho. I just wish we had South Town and Metro City since they’re some of the biggest cities in all of fighting games.
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Thanks! Think so, too. I’ve just read some of the responses from the IC section a couple of hours ago while working on my In the Now synopsis, and I believe I’ve started to get a glimpse of what Terry could do if he was to go to Esaka. It just so happened that Sakura is gonna be there, too, to accompany Nadia.

Anyhow, I have to apologize in advance because it seems that I’d only be able to send the application tomorrow. There are still a lot of things I need to change regarding my sheet, as well as trying to figure out how I want it to be formatted. Will that be alright?

P.S. You actually picked the best name for a city that revolves around fighting, tho. I just wish we had South Town and Metro City since they’re some of the biggest cities in all of fighting games.


Take as much time as you need, and if you have any questions feel free to ask.
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Take as much time as you need, and if you have any questions feel free to ask.


Gotcha! Thanks a lot, tho. I’ll let you know when the sheet is 100% complete. Shouldn’t be that long.
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Done!

Is there anything I need to change, @Lugubrious?

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Done!

Is there anything I need to change, @Lugubrious?



Wow, you were incredibly thorough when it came to providing sources / relevant links for extra background info and explanation. You also did a pretty good job with the In the Now section, intuiting what places in the World of Light are like. It's really a high-effort sheet, and 99% of it is great. I would only say that everything prior to Galeem's omnipocalypse should occur in the Background section, and that should only encompass canon events.

Part of why I recommended waiting on the In the Now section is that everyone incarnates into the World of Light with the 'gleaming' status, which requires a touch extra explanation. People don't necessarily lose all their memories, just those related to Galeem and the world's end. They should still know who they are, they just don't exactly remember how they got here, and they're unable to recognize the 'wrongness' of the World of Light, almost like being in a dream. Because Mafia Town and Esaka are a really, really long way away, and most communities tend to be isolated, I would personally recommend transplanting the story about Richard and Pao Pao Cafe into Esaka itself, and maybe only having his time extend back a week or so rather than years. Does that sound alright?
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Wow, you were incredibly thorough when it came to providing sources / relevant links for extra background info and explanation. You also did a pretty good job with the In the Now section, intuiting what places in the World of Light are like. It's really a high-effort sheet, and 99% of it is great. I would only say that everything prior to Galeem's omnipocalypse should occur in the Background section, and that should only encompass canon events.

Part of why I recommended waiting on the In the Now section is that everyone incarnates into the World of Light with the 'gleaming' status, which requires a touch extra explanation. People don't necessarily lose all their memories, just those related to Galeem and the world's end. They should still know who they are, they just don't exactly remember how they got here, and they're unable to recognize the 'wrongness' of the World of Light, almost like being in a dream. Because Mafia Town and Esaka are a really, really long way away, and most communities tend to be isolated, I would personally recommend transplanting the story about Richard and Pao Pao Cafe into Esaka itself, and maybe only having his time extend back a week or so rather than years. Does that sound alright?


Thank you so much for the feedback! Took almost an entire day to write + format them lol. I have to say, the attaching external links bit was the trickiest of them all. I feel like it’s needed if anybody doesn’t know the characters, places, or other lore stuff I mentioned and wanted to learn more about them.

And yes, I can move the Terry vs. Geese bit to the Background section, tho the problem is that it’s not exactly canon to the KOF lore—just something I wrote loosely based on Terry’s RB1 ending. It’s a similar finish with a bit of a twist (Geese dragging Terry along so he could continue fighting him in the afterlife, instead of knocking Terry’s hand away). Is it alright to include it to the Background section?

As for Richard and his Pao Pao Café, actually, the main reason why I have them—including Terry—in Mafia Town is because Mafia Town is the closest I can get to South Town. Both are ruled by mobsters and known for their beaches, so I feel like Terry and the supporting cast of Fatal Fury could fit right in. But sure, it’s all good! I can move them to Esaka and have Terry be its resident for about a week since he’s brought to the World of Light. Also, I believe I just misunderstood the plot’s main premise a bit, so I’ll ditch the part where Terry forgets who he is.

I’ll be working on the revision ASAP. Also, if it’s ok, I might wanna add one more piece of info in the Personality section. I feel like I should bring up Terry’s altruistic side while describing his kind-hearted quality.
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Thank you so much for the feedback! Took almost an entire day to write + format them lol. I have to say, the attaching external links bit was the trickiest of them all. I feel like it’s needed if anybody doesn’t know the characters, places, or other lore stuff I mentioned and wanted to learn more about them.

And yes, I can move the Terry vs. Geese bit to the Background section, tho the problem is that it’s not exactly canon to the KOF lore—just something I wrote loosely based on Terry’s RB1 ending. It’s a similar finish with a bit of a twist (Geese dragging Terry along so he could continue fighting him in the afterlife, instead of knocking Terry’s hand away). Is it alright to include it to the Background section?

As for Richard and his Pao Pao Café, actually, the main reason why I have them—including Terry—in Mafia Town is because Mafia Town is the closest I can get to South Town. Both are ruled by mobsters and known for their beaches, so I feel like Terry and the supporting cast of Fatal Fury could fit right in. But sure, it’s all good! I can move them to Esaka and have Terry be its resident for about a week since he’s brought to the World of Light. Also, I believe I just misunderstood the plot’s main premise a bit, so I’ll ditch the part where Terry forgets who he is.

I’ll be working on the revision ASAP. Also, if it’s ok, I might wanna add one more piece of info in the Personality section. I feel like I should bring up Terry’s altruistic side while describing his kind-hearted quality.


You can include that in Background, and of course you can add to the personality section. Thanks for all the extra insight, and apologies for the misunderstanding.
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You can include that in Background, and of course you can add to the personality section. Thanks for all the extra insight, and apologies for the misunderstanding.


Np. I’ve actually revised it. I just thought that my previous In the Now synopsis sounds a bit bombastic, so I decided to ditch the Terry vs. Geese bit and rewrite most of it. Also, in addition to the Personality section, I’ve also added a slight bit of additional info to the Skills section (the Enhanced Sense and Durability part). Hope this one is better than the last:

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Np. I’ve actually revised it. I just thought that my previous In the Now synopsis sounds a bit bombastic, so I decided to ditch the Terry vs. Geese bit and rewrite most of it. Also, in addition to the Personality section, I’ve also added a slight bit of additional info to the Skills section (the Enhanced Sense and Durability part). Hope this one is better than the last:



Terry is approved! You can put him in the Characters tab, and if you like, I can send you a link to the RP Discord server in a DM. We do most of our day-to-day chatting in there.

As for Terry's entrance, you could have him meet the incoming Gold Team in the farmland north of Esaka if you like, or wait for us to reach the city itself in a week or two, potentially doing some solo posting (with my help of course to play NPCs and help set the scene) until then. I don't exactly want him to be the one giving the grand tour of Esaka to the newcomers since that would just essentially be me using your character as my mouthpiece, but he could definitely welcome the rest of us with a friendly duel that leads to him being freed from the Gleaming status with a friend heart.

After all (this may be something of an info bomb) Terry is something of a familiar face to some of our characters. Two previous iterations of him have already been encountered in some way in the World of Light. In fact, a previous iteration of him was the grandfather of two of the current Lost Numbers (whose sheet can be found buried in the Characters tab header). So we'd have ample reason to want to free him upon meeting him.
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Terry is approved! You can put him in the Characters tab, and if you like, I can send you a link to the RP Discord server in a DM. We do most of our day-to-day chatting in there.

As for Terry's entrance, you could have him meet the incoming Gold Team in the farmland north of Esaka if you like, or wait for us to reach the city itself in a week or two, potentially doing some solo posting (with my help of course to play NPCs and help set the scene) until then. I don't exactly want him to be the one giving the grand tour of Esaka to the newcomers since that would just essentially be me using your character as my mouthpiece, but he could definitely welcome the rest of us with a friendly duel that leads to him being freed from the Gleaming status with a friend heart.

After all (this may be something of an info bomb) Terry is something of a familiar face to some of our characters. Two previous iterations of him have already been encountered in some way in the World of Light. In fact, a previous iteration of him was the grandfather of two of the current Lost Numbers (whose sheet can be found buried in the Characters tab header). So we'd have ample reason to want to free him upon meeting him.


Aww, thanks! I sure would love to join the Discord server, so I can get to know every member better.

I just checked the Characters tab again. His grandkids are Bart and Marg, right? Finding this group for the first time, I had no idea that Terry was something of a core figure to some of the characters here lol, which is great. This should make for an interesting sub-plot where Terry learns more about his older self through his grandkids.

Btw, who’s in the Gold Team? Are his grandkids part of them? I read that Sakura is heading there, too. Is she also part of them? Because, y’know, I feel like Terry might need to meet a familiar face to help him clear his skepticism surrounding the World of Light.
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Aww, thanks! I sure would love to join the Discord server, so I can get to know every member better.

I just checked the Characters tab again. His grandkids are Bart and Marg, right? Finding this group for the first time, I had no idea that Terry was something of a core figure to some of the characters here lol, which is great. This should make for an interesting sub-plot where Terry learns more about his older self through his grandkids.

Btw, who’s in the Gold Team? Are his grandkids part of them? I read that Sakura is heading there, too. Is she also part of them? Because, y’know, I feel like Terry might need to meet a familiar face to help him clear his skepticism surrounding the World of Light.


Right! The grandkids are not part of Gold Team, they're back on the Avenger, so that'll be something for another time. Right now that team's roster is Junior, Rika, Amaterasu, Roland, Zenkichi, Pit, Primrose, Therion, Sakura, Juri’s, Captain Falcon, Harry, Big Band, and Ms Fortune. Make sure you check out the 'Fields of Gold' section of the latest update!
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Right! The grandkids are not part of Gold Team, they're back on the Avenger, so that'll be something for another time. Right now that team's roster is Junior, Rika, Amaterasu, Roland, Zenkichi, Pit, Primrose, Therion, Sakura, Juri’s, Captain Falcon, Harry, Big Band, and Ms Fortune. Make sure you check out the 'Fields of Gold' section of the latest update!


Thanks! I’ll be checking it out. There’s something I might wanna discuss about the plot further through the Discord server before I begin working on my first post. It looks like we can have Terry welcome the team to Esaka like you suggested, considering there are two SF characters who’ll probably know who he is (and one of them could at least help him out).
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Heyo! I'm... Not entirely a fresh, new face around here but I'm trying to get myself back into RPing in order to get back into the full swing of writing, and was wanting to see if folks were willing to accept another lad around here. Working on which character I'd like to bring in and mostly leaning towards Ragna the Bloodedge from Blazblue, or a Touhou gal like Sakuya. But mostly wanted to see if things were clear to apply before I locked in.
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Heyo! I'm... Not entirely a fresh, new face around here but I'm trying to get myself back into RPing in order to get back into the full swing of writing, and was wanting to see if folks were willing to accept another lad around here. Working on which character I'd like to bring in and mostly leaning towards Ragna the Bloodedge from Blazblue, or a Touhou gal like Sakuya. But mostly wanted to see if things were clear to apply before I locked in.


Hey there! We're always open and would be happy to have you, both of those character choices are good (Ragna would be great for the fighting game area that Gold Team is in, while Sakuya might be better for White Team's expedition). If you're sure that you can honor a commitment of ~30 minutes spent reading and an hour or two writing in order to post once a week, you're good to go.
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Hey there! We're always open and would be happy to have you, both of those character choices are good (Ragna would be great for the fighting game area that Gold Team is in, while Sakuya might be better for White Team's expedition). If you're sure that you can honor a commitment of ~30 minutes spent reading and an hour or two writing in order to post once a week, you're good to go.


Roger that boss! In the short time I had posted I actually kind of switched my direction to doing Mokou (also from Touhou), though the trouble with that would be balancing her actual immortality (though it doesn't prevent her from feeling pain or fatigue so it's not like she isn't beatable, just unkillable).

HOWEVER. Mokou is a cool character and I like fire themes. But we shall see what I settle on, and I shall return once I figure something out!
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I might have gotten hit by extreme focus despite my normal ADHD and worked on most of the sheet. Posting it now for feedback on stuff like the skills/powers while I work on the "In the Now" segment to figure out what, exactly, Mokou has been up to. Aside from probably being a hermit somewhere in a random forest.


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I might have gotten hit by extreme focus despite my normal ADHD and worked on most of the sheet. Posting it now for feedback on stuff like the skills/powers while I work on the "In the Now" segment to figure out what, exactly, Mokou has been up to. Aside from probably being a hermit somewhere in a random forest.



Thank you for your efforts, that's quite a good sheet. I also play a character who's supposedly immortal (Ms Fortune) but whose regenerative abilities slow down and eventually peter out if she's subjected to enough damage. However, having Mokou's revives be limited is a moot point if she can 'regenerate from any damage dealt to her', which would logically prevent her from ever having to revive. Unless I'm just misunderstanding and this 'regenerate from any damage dealt to her' clause refers to her phoenix revival? Additionally, it would be a bit unfair if she could copy any magic spells she sees for free, but I would be fine letting you spend level upgrades to learn magics displayed by other characters (of course, she'd still be able to freely use spells she picks up in the world, like Dark Souls pyromancies, once she obtains them).

Once we've sorted this out, the character seems good. I would want her to start on the White Team in the Frozen Highlands. We just reached an area called Krat Zoo, which has been overrun by mutant, aberrant animals known as carcasses. As for why, maybe she could be responding to a call for help from one of the Lost Vikings, all three of which are separated in Krat Zoo and need to be rescued/reunited.
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Thank you for your efforts, that's quite a good sheet. I also play a character who's supposedly immortal (Ms Fortune) but whose regenerative abilities slow down and eventually peter out if she's subjected to enough damage. However, having Mokou's revives be limited is a moot point if she can 'regenerate from any damage dealt to her', which would logically prevent her from ever having to revive. Unless I'm just misunderstanding and this 'regenerate from any damage dealt to her' clause refers to her phoenix revival? Additionally, it would be a bit unfair if she could copy any magic spells she sees for free, but I would be fine letting you spend level upgrades to learn magics displayed by other characters (of course, she'd still be able to freely use spells she picks up in the world, like Dark Souls pyromancies, once she obtains them).

Once we've sorted this out, the character seems good. I would want her to start on the White Team in the Frozen Highlands. We just reached an area called Krat Zoo, which has been overrun by mutant, aberrant animals known as carcasses. As for why, maybe she could be responding to a call for help from one of the Lost Vikings, all three of which are separated in Krat Zoo and need to be rescued/reunited.


Yeah, I'd certainly spend upgrades and stuff to actually use different spells. That case was more of a "if she spends time to look further into stuff she's seen she can replicated it pretty well". Essentially just an upgrade path, if that makes sense.

As for the revive part, it's more so me trying to work in both the fact that she can regenerate constantly and also balance the actual revives to not be a game winner. I'll reword it to make it sound better but the main goal is that the limitation is directly tied with Mokou's will to fight through the pain, though I suppose a better way to describe it would just be that Mokou can regenerate from any injury over time. She can be injured in battle and have it last but she'll just rapidly regenerate outside of battle. While the revives are just her deciding to forcefully incinerate her entire body in order to fight further.

Also having Mokou start in the Frozen Highlands sounds fine! Hermit answering the call of a lost soul.
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Yeah, I'd certainly spend upgrades and stuff to actually use different spells. That case was more of a "if she spends time to look further into stuff she's seen she can replicated it pretty well". Essentially just an upgrade path, if that makes sense.

As for the revive part, it's more so me trying to work in both the fact that she can regenerate constantly and also balance the actual revives to not be a game winner. I'll reword it to make it sound better but the main goal is that the limitation is directly tied with Mokou's will to fight through the pain, though I suppose a better way to describe it would just be that Mokou can regenerate from any injury over time. She can be injured in battle and have it last but she'll just rapidly regenerate outside of battle. While the revives are just her deciding to forcefully incinerate her entire body in order to fight further.

Also having Mokou start in the Frozen Highlands sounds fine! Hermit answering the call of a lost soul.


Okay, that sound good! Thanks for clarifying.
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Alright, small update to the sheet to clarify the main thing points while also adding in the "In the Now" segment. Hopefully things are good and certainly excited to be around.

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