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So far I like this one a lot. I think a queen bee personality in this training area could be fun. Fun team too, though I question how they got Galarian variants? If you can, maybe add that in the backstory. I'd also love for maybe an explanation on their preference for poison types in the personality.


I was trying not to go too deep into the minutiae of everything for her backstory, especially if it's not particularly interesting or if it would be more interesting to bring it up in the RP itself; I already tend to write a lot as it is. Her team was something that she specifically curated, seeking out specific species of Pokemon; the rarer ones like the Galar Pokemon are things she traded for, either with other trainers who had been to those regions or finding people who had them online.

Her love of Poison types also doesn't have anything deep behind it; it's just her favourite type. Her personality does have a reference to her "toxicity" in her stream persona, so the Poison specialty is a bit thematic, but I can try and add something more if you want.

Overall, my only concern is with how the streaming gets involved. It sort of takes me off guard that they simply 'started pokemon battling'. Where did they get their first pokemon? If can be as cliche as a poke prof giving them a starter. Maybe integrate the battling into their streams. I could see that getting a lot of views. "next stream will be me beating whitney!" sort of deal.


Integrating battles into their streams is exactly what they did; sorry if that wasn't clear enough. When her history says she "takes up Pokemon battling since that was always popular and would allow her to compete with other big streamers" I mean she started battling on stream, because its more popular than the 'just chatting' streams she was doing and it lets her compete directly for viewers with other streamers who do battles too (like Iono).

I'll add something about her first Pokemon; they were pets she had before becoming a trainer.

I also know that we starting sort of indecisive, but sticking with the idea of these being up-and-coming trainers, perhaps they moved across regions because there was always someone just a bit too good: sort of like ash in the anime. Just food for thought.


She moved across regions because she tanked her own audience and wanted a fresh start. If she'd stayed in Paldea she likely would have been just as successful as a trainer, but way less successful as a streamer.

Honestly, if someone else kept beating her, she'd just use it for content.

I'll just add the bit about her first Pokemon for now, but if you want me to add anything else still, let me know.
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@KillamriX08 looks perfect now gamer, and don't think I was trying to bash on your writing. It was good, I just wanted that 5% more pazazz. I like the mention about safety, a tiny little way to introduce their back story a bit.
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@King Cosmos I think it's good overall, just trying to give some bits and peices that might tighten the overall concept. You're approved, whether you change anything or not, like I said, this sheet is good overall. I do like the full poison team, haha!
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Well, I went ahead and made the character. Here goes.

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@Randomness I will finish reading it later but overall I can approve this!
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This is perfect, chefs kiss. Are you sure you want to only start with 3 pokemon? I think that makes sense for up and comers! Cudos for adding abilities too! You are definately in!

Overall I think I'll approve you all! Sorry again for my slowness. I recently hurt my back and it's giving me brain fog like no other.


Thank you! And yes, I'm sure. In the Pokeathlon minigames in HGSS you have a team of 3 so I want to start there and fill out the rest as the story goes along. Plus it might add that touch of drama or development (not good enough with just the core 3, discourse on what pokemon to add, maybe taking a cue from some of the other characters and seeing how they battle and adding a similar pokemon, like a Valeska-style fighting type of Luz-style poison type).

Also, you think this is slow? So far it looks like planning is going smoothly haha. Hope you feel better soon though!

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It's not too slow, but I know I can take a long time to reply to things.
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I want to write a character sheet but...
A. I cant use images usually.
B. MY WRITING IS TOO SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @#%§ IT!
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Yeah unfortunately this is in the casual area. We aren't asking for silioqouy or anything, but I have a high expectation of a couple paragraphs at least. It's just how I prefer to write.
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Yeah unfortunately this is in the casual area. We aren't asking for silioqouy or anything, but I have a high expectation of a couple paragraphs at least. It's just how I prefer to write.


might be able to do that. Was going to use my Pokemon Arceus team, but it has 3 legendaries on it, so i cannot.
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Yeah, I didn't want anyone to use 1 legendary, let alone 3!
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Interesting, if slots are still open when I get the chance to work on a sheet I'll need to throw my hat into the ring. I have some ideas.
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@Pizza Box go ahead and send a sheet. I am sure I can squeeze one more in. That way we have 6 characters total (including mine).
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Name: Jet Steen

Age: 24

Pronouns: He/Him

Trainer Type: N/A

Hometown: Orre Region, Phenac City

Appearance:



Art by Annie

A male standing at around 5'11, lanky build paired with fair skin that looks as if it's moments away from sunburns if one were to spend longer then they should in beaming sun. The bushy hair resemblances a slate-black esc color more than anything else with hints of a dark blue bearing across the surface. While skinny, and 'underweight' looking, if one were to bore a closer look at Jet it might become obvious that hints layabout of lean muscle from his arms, to his legs, to even parts of his back. While not the physique of an athlete, it's clear it's one whom is no stranger to 'getting physical.' Under Jet's forehead rests a pair of heavy, dull, gray orbs people more often call eyes.

Personality:Friendly, polite, yet distant, a friendliness that serves not only as a shield, a politeness that acts as a barrier keeping the unwanted out. However, deep down they are quite lukewarm, and slow to get rolling when the punches actually demand swiftness. All the while they keep whatever personal problems of theirs, or whatever ones they might be having to tangle with at the time all to themselves. Even if it means doing something crazy all on their own, however they often veer towards the path of least resistance rather than actually offering themselves a challenge, even if they are worse off for it. Even if many have said before they seem to be wasting away whatever talent they have for battles away.

However more often, mist-veil memories failing to dry up, might tend to cause a lack of drive cropping up when it might be needed. Yet likely to be seen as 'that one guy' walking into a breakfast joint ordering a bowl of ice cream at eight in the morning, and a lover of sweets to boot as well. Yet...for whatever strange reason, if there is no one else to turn to? Jet would be willing to help a soul in need, no matter what. Even if peering eyes catch him in the act, even if judging whispers fall upon his actions, even if heavy hands claw at his shoulders. Yet...under all of it?

A fear rests.

A fear to face his old crew, a fear he might actually become the Viper King, a fear that he might hurt another person by accident once again. A crushing weight that bears his will to act down.. Through whatever jokes he might pose up, or however distant he might act. Jet is still a caring person. A double edge blade to drive right into his heart.

History: Jet Steen, born in the far of region of Orre, worlds away from the buzzing gym circuits of Kanto, Hoenn, Sinnoh, and any others that might come to mind. A region plagued to the teeth with crime syndicates, many just thoughts these days, many more but budding branches on the trees that often form around Orre. Enter, Jet, a guy whom is no stranger to the ruffians Orre often offers, someone whom has dealt with the King, The Queen, and even the Jacks'n'Spades. Once a child who had lost his father early in his life, and his mother even earlier then that, he was but a stray who was taken in by the remains of his father's old crew "The Crimson Vipers." A series of events which would lead to years of the 'Junior Viper' being groomed to taken the rains as the 'heir' to become the new 'Viper King.'

However; due in part to the known problems with Ore having little to known wild Pokemon, most of the handful he's ever gotten his hands on? Stolen, or Illegally imported via gang affairs, it was how he got his first ever partner Pokemon, a small bird Pokemon known as Pidgey. A small bird-like creature which had apparently been snagged from a small girl overseas all the way in Kanto. While restless, afraid, hateful, and even prone to lashing out at first. Somehow over the many years he had known the small bird, the two began to share a genuine bond. One that had pushed it's form during an essential moment. Pidgey, it had become a Pidgeotto, a valiant partner whom would follow Jet to the ends of the Earth.

Yet...

Yet. . .?

Yet.

It still had memories, it still missed her old trainer, even as the traces had dried up over the years. Even as Jet attempted to use gang connections to find something, anything, all leads led to the same dead end. However he was not yet stray from the Crimson Vipers, even if it was soon to come, even if the ticking of the clock could be heard by him, by the admins, by the interim leader leader. His Aunt, The Bloody Constellation Angelica, known for her Charizard that could 'paint the dull skies red' with it's flames alone. A name, a fearsome one, that had even spread somewhat outside Orre, a lady whom if seen in other regions by whatever gang might be around would raise concern by just being there.

The final straw, or better yet, the breaking point was when Jet's best friend got caught in the middle of a fight with the Crimson Vipers, and a rival gang. He died. He died by getting caught with a stray from Jet's very own orders. He had done it, he had killed his best friend. . . Wrong place? Wrong time. . .? What did it matter, did it matter? Did it not. . .? It was all questions raised to Jet, some by himself, some by others. Yet, it all ended with him going stray, the Junior Viper King leaving the Crimson Vipers behind. Him leaving Orre altogether. He had wondered through Kanto, to the end of Johto.

He was lost.

He was stray.

He wanted power.

He wanted strength.

He wanted.

He needed to be strong.

That's what led him to the Valkyrie league, seeking the simple strength to end not only the Crimson Vipers, but all of the gangs of Orre.

Goals: To bring the end of crime in the Orre Region.


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@Pizza Box this is great looking, I'll go ahead and read it but I have a feeling this is accepted!
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Dusts off the old gameboy and pokemon red, booting it up with a smile at the chime.

"Time to come out and play again my old friends."

I am completely interested in this. Is this a new region, or just a new league?
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Where did you get the images from? I'd like to get images like this for my team.


I just grabbed them from google images and edited them in Krita if they weren't already transparent and to shrink them down to a usable size.
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@Zman I was intending to keep this to only 4 people, and I am currently at five...buuuuuuuut

Considering I will be gaming and will probably play some competition in the tournaments, I am willing to forgo my own character for another player. Go ahead and put up a character sheet.
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@Zman I was intending to keep this to only 4 people, and I am currently at five...buuuuuuuut

Considering I will be gaming and will probably play some competition in the tournaments, I am willing to forgo my own character for another player. Go ahead and put up a character sheet.


Guess I took too long with my character sheet. Oh well.
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