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Jack Wilson Jr.


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Male


Age
28


Appearance
Brown hair. Green eyes. Wears a brown leather jacket with blue jeans and sunglasses


Personality
Jack Wilson Jr. is stubborn. He prefers to be called by his first name, as he sees "Junior" as mockery. While he may have had a strained relationship with his father, Jack Wilson Jr. is willing to risk it all to save his old man so that he can reconcile with Jack Wilson Sr. and bring him home.

Jack Wilson Jr. has no interests in anything that might be discovered in the "Lost World", preferring riding motorcycles to looking for fossils, undiscovered wildlife, and/or ancient artifacts.


Skills
Marksman with Handguns. Riding a motorcycle. Motorcycle repair


Personal Belongings/Equipment
Brown leather jacket. Sunglasses. Colt 1911 with some bullets. Hiking boots. Hammock with mosquito net. Canteen. Tent with a tarp


Missing Loved One
Jack Wilson Sr. Balding with greying hair. Dressed for jungle hiking


Background
Born in Oklahoma, Jack Wilson Jr. did not share the same passion as his father, preferring motorcycles over digging in the dirt for broken pottery. He spent his free time reading magazines about motorcycles or reading books about motorcycles or watching shows and movies about motorcycles. His father's busy schedule meant that they rarely spent time together (which exacerbated the rift). However, they were able to bond on the firing range with the family heirloom, Jack's aim getting better with every visit. Jack Wilson Jr. graduated from High School with flying colors. Jack Wilson Sr. was so proud that he gave him a motorcycle as present. Jack thanked his father before taking it for a ride. He spent hours working on it, putting his knowledge of motorcycles to use. He saw it as the first part of a dream come true.

He spent years on the road, riding from town to town, sleeping in motels. He would occasionally receive letters from his father, always about the expeditions he was on, the artifacts he found, or both. Some of them were stories of success. Others were failures or simply getting canned due to lack of funding. He didn't dwell on them for longer than it took to read them. Motorcycles were his strong suite, not ancient history. Jack outright stopped reading them when he received one from his father that said that Jack Wilson Sr. had signed on with Henry Coswall. He had heard that Coswall was a crackpot who was bleeding his own accounts dry trying to find some lost world because he couldn't get anyone to fund his failed efforts, so he thought that it made no sense that his father would risk his career and reputation joining some harebrained adventure. He continued spending his life on the road until he was told that his father was missing and presumed dead. He began spending more time at biker bars than on his own bike, trying to escape from the guilt of not speaking to his father one last time one bottle at a time.

Jack Wilson Jr. received an unexpected invite from someone named Lucas Bryne. He had never met the man before, but the mention of the expedition got his attention. Jack thought for a moment and headed to meet the man who had sent him the letter. He arrived, introduced himself to Bryne, and shook his hand before asking him how he was going to help him find out what happened to his father. Jack Wilson was shocked when he heard that they were going to South America and argued that if the authorities couldn't find them, there was little chance they were going to get the job done. He was told that such a drastic measure might be the only way that they would be able to reunite with their lost loved ones or retrieve their remains. Jack Wilson Jr. agreed to join on the condition that he gets to confront Henry Coswall if the leader of the failed expedition is still alive. He considered asking how their group was going to get their weapons into South America, but he quickly realized that Lucas had probably already figured that out. He bought what he could afford before meeting up with the others.
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Your CS is fine, but I suggest adding more stuff to both the personality and personal belongings/equipment sections. Since for personality, it should have more than that. For the personal belongings/equipment part, unless you want him to be totally unprepared for the journey to the Lost World and have to rely on others to survive. Add some more survival gear, and that is all I have to say right now.
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Your CS is fine, but I suggest adding more stuff to both the personality and personal belongings/equipment sections. Since for personality, it should have more than that. For the personal belongings/equipment part, unless you want him to be totally unprepared for the journey to the Lost World and have to rely on others to survive. Add some more survival gear, and that is all I have to say right now.


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So once Flarbinia posts or enough time has passed, I will move the group to the temple and move the rp foward.
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@Badarby@TheCrudlet@Flarbinia Okay the temple post is live.
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TheCrudlet Cute and Cool 😎

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Ughh.. Sorry, I will post when I get back home. 🙇🏻‍♀️
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Ughh.. Sorry, I will post when I get back home. 🙇🏻‍♀️


It is fine, take your time.
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@Flarbinia Just something I have thought about, and I should say now. But please limit what you add to a scene, like in your post that mentioned there being a skeleton of someone trying to find the temple or the Lost World. There should not be a skeleton there since few people know of the temple and the Lost World, and the ones actually trying to find it were in Coswall's expedition and now Lucas's expedition. Just so you know now, and just remember that for future posts.
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@Flarbinia Just something I have thought about, and I should say now. But please limit what you add to a scene, like in your post that mentioned there being a skeleton of someone trying to find the temple or the Lost World. There should not be a skeleton there since few people know of the temple and the Lost World, and the ones actually trying to find it were in Coswall's expedition and now Lucas's expedition. Just so you know now, and just remember that for future posts.


Thanks for the heads up.
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Okay, the gate post is live and people can post now.
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@Badarby@TheCrudlet@Flarbinia If my last post does not have known stuff to work with post-wise, then I can just move things along. What do y'all think?
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@Badarby@TheCrudlet@Flarbinia If my last post does not have known stuff to work with post-wise, then I can just move things along. What do y'all think?


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@Badarby@TheCrudlet@FlarbiniaOkay, I have posted, and there should be more to react to now, and feel free to post when you can.
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